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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
keep going i am thinking wot to write
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
grt parts i will continue
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in the car

kripa got vedika and put her in the car seat so she doe snot cry or fall wenthe car is moving she belted up prateek and sur finally she sat in the car herself.

k: angad i forgot my handbag over the kids main lekar auu 😕
a: kripa kaise handbag bhool gayee
k: sorry jaoo
a: jaldi kar na
k: theek hain abhi ayi

nishants car

k: nishant yeh kripa kahha jarahi hain ?
n: bata nahin kuch bhool gayi hogi
k: haan shayad

angads car

suddenly vedika startd crying and angad has to get out the car to make her quiet

a: kya huwa vedika kyou rorahi haun?
v: 😭
a: uff yeh kripa kaha reh gayi jaldi aye to vedika schup hogayeji vedika kya huwa chup hogao pap ki best beti haun na to phir rote nahin

she started to cry even louder angad took her out of the car seat and walked around with her so that she stops crying and she did he wan to put her back in the car seat she started cryng again

a: toh yeh problem hain tumhe ismain nahin beat naaa to kahon na ab kya karoo ill wait for kripa

finally kripa comes down with her bag and sees angad with vedika

k: kya huwa vedika ko angad?
a: voh rorahi thi use car seat main nahin beat na
k: angad take the car seat in the front shell like it more and wont cry
a; kripa she cant sit in the front she is very small for that
k: toh phir sur ko age le lo aur main vedika ke saat peche beat thi hoon she will be fine
a: par kripa ......
k: par var kuch nahin sur tum age ajao aur main peeche bet thi hoon ok

angad gave up and thats wot happened kripa tied vedika in the car seat again and she started crying

k: vedika rone main kya baat hain bus thori dear hain aur phir tum yaha se niche uthar sakthi haun angtad tum chalo agar ise rona hain toh rone do ise ok tum gharee chaloa

angad started driving but vedika crying got on his nerves

a: kripa cantu do something so she does not cry luk at her, her eyes have gone all red

k: angad main kya karoo we r here anyway now

everyone reach the hall and get out of their car vedika is stil crying and does nto want o o to kripa because she made her sit in the car seat

k: vedika rote nahin dekho hum kahan aye hain stop crying
v: 😭 paaaaaaapa paaaaaaaaaaaapa paaaaaaaaapa

a: kripa use mujhe do ill handle her tum andar jao sur aur prateek ke saat il take her with me

k: r u sure?
a: haan jao come on

angad takes vedika she is more happy with her dad after abt half an hour kripa came back and she was not crying
k; mama ke paas aoji
v: she moved her face away saying she does not want to go
k: vedika come on sahil ke sat nahin khelna kya dekho naraaz nahin hote car seat ain kya problem hain bataochalo varna main tumhe sweets nahin doongi

kripa made her a bit happy so she went to her mum
accha chalo lets play witht kids ok

k: angad main use lekar jara hi hoon ok
a: ok then have fun vedika

v: bye daddy

as soon as she got with the other kids she went to them and was playing with them suddenly vedika got pushed over by someone and fell to the floor ( she is 1 years old i think we should keep the kids small the game will be better so sur ans prareek are 5 )

she started crying so loudly that everyone was shocled kripa and angad turned around as thje voice was similar and they saw her on the floor thyy ran to pick her up

k: its ok beta dont worry tumhe lagi nahin hain
v: 😭
k: main use uppar legati hoon
a: main araha hoon
k: angad zara uska doodh bole ghari se leana plz

in the room kripa is trying to make her quie and gave vedika her milk she then becmae quiet

k; angad i am feeling very bad uinside for vedika as she has been crying all day i dont like it wen my kids cry

a: kripa bache hai hota hain kabhi kabhi u just make her go to sleep andthen enjoy the sangeet sing some songs and have fun thats wot ur here for

k: i think ur right chale

a: haan chalo
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guys i continued now continue the sangeet and maybe put in a song angad and kripa sang it will be wicked
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: armaghan0

all of u writers are awsome

thanku very much i appreciate u like our work

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
oh my god i did not know i wrote that much its just that wen u wright u get in to the story ur self and u just want to wright and wright
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay i continue...

videka stops crying and she SAYS

v: papa gagugi papa pass gagagagag(kids laungauge u know na)

kripa looks at anged ..

kripa: i think she wants to go with u !
anged: okay ! give by baby princess here
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(anged holds videka )

as soon as videka comes in angeds arms she started smailing

v: papapapa gggaaaaa gagugki ppapa kekekekke
( she starts playing with anged cheeks and hair and coat bottons )

anged: hheheeh lets go down!

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kripa and anged comes down at sageet cermoni

everyone says that a-k plz sing so anged give videka to dadi for a while and videka get sad

anged:aww...i am just comming
vedeka:

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anged sing a song for kripa
he sings a song from movie woh lameha
Woh Lamhe- Kya Mujhe Pyar Hai (Remix) verion he sings!

--------------------- while singing he keeps looking at kripa eyes and kripa blush !

then kripa sings

mehadi lagau gi ma sajana ka naam sa! kuch na khabar hai muji ab suba shaam ki................

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then everyone sing nishant ,kannna,anged,kripa

rock and roll soniya

from kank

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then anged comes and picks up videka and videka stars laughing ...........

v: papapapap gagggaaa guuu acha pappaap

anged: what

v: ga

anged: arr... huh?
vedika: gagu gi papa

anged laugh and kiss videka on her cheeks and say i cant understant u but u r tooo cute . my baby princess.

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kripa was watching this from the coner of her eye!

and thinks!

anged is so cute thank god i had a life panterner like anged. 😳

and she comes and say to vedika and anged

kripa: i love u 2

and she kiss videka and her cheeks and anged on his cheeks.

videka and anged looks and each other and say we love u too

v: mummy
anged: kripa

kripa smiling !!

then someone was pulling her dupatta she looks down and it was sur and preeteek !!

Sur and Prteek:MOMMMMMM And dAdddddd what about ussss

anged and kripa looks at each other and bend down and hug sur prteek and say we love u and kiss them

dadi comes and say wait keep in this position and she call the camera man and say take a pic of sur,perteek,anged,vedika and kripa .

cramer man say what a perfect family and smiles and take there pic

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cotniue plz (i hope u like it) 😊

Edited by sabzz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

😊

Edited by sabzz - 18 years ago
Zainoo1 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
thats was a gtrt update they are a perfect family i must say
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
ill continue
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the ceremonyy finishes and they are all make their way out of the house to go home

K: okay then ab hum chalte hai sangeet ka function bohot acha tha we will mmee for the mehendi rasam tomoroow ok

kripas friend: okay then bye kal milte hain

angad still has vedika in his hand as she fell asleep on him he tries to put her slowly in the car seat but she opens her eyes and is abt to cry but angad quickly picked her up again so she does not cry or so that her sleep does not break he starts rocking her in his hand to put her to sleep againa and she does

A: kripa we have a problem vedika wont leave me
k: dont worry ill drive u sit with her in the front
a: r u sure
k: haan kyouki voh mere paas bhi nahin ayegi isiliye tum hi pakaro use
a: theek hain ye lo ghari ki chavi

kripa drives them all home and by the time they get home the kids al go to sleep in the car . finally they reach home and kripa gets out of the car and sees the kids have gone to sleep

k: angad dekho peeche
a: yeh bhi sogaye
k: but they luk sweet after all mere bache hain
a: tumhare bache ?
ak: hamare bache

angad and kripa hug with vedika in hand and luk at their sweet kids angad takes vedika inside whilst kripa woke up sur and pratweek to wake up so that they can go to sleep on their bed and not in the car

all the kids go in to their rooms get changed and go in bed kripa comes inthe room gives them a kiss and says goodnight

k: okay goodnight ab tum sojao subah phir jaldi uthna hain agar shopping jana hain right

sp: hummmmmmmmmmm

k:( thinking) yeh angad kaha hain aur vedika ko kahan legaya

just then angad walks in to the room with vedika

k: tumharee paas lambi zindagii hain kyou ki main tumhare bare main hi soch rahi thi aur tum agayae

a: oh atleast mera tumne sochi sahi varna mujhe laga tum bhool jaogiiiiii

k: angad

a: ok yeh lo vedika ko bed main daal do

angad then gave kripa vedika but she started crying but kripa did not listen and gave her bottle of milk and made her go to sleep she cried for so long that sur and prateek could not sleep after abt 1 hour she went to seep and finally kripa made way to her room as she was very tired she walked in and someone grabbed her hands from behind the door and pushed her across the wall

k: angad chro naa
a: nahin
k: kyoun?
a: kyounki tumne kitchen main kaha main tumhe bedroom main pareshaan kar saktha hoon
k: 😕 angad pehle jwellery to mujhe nikalne do
a: ill take it off for u he got closer and closer to her slowly taking off her jwellery.........

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someone continue the night bit

roshaa thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
i am not good at making these sceans ....... plz someone continue zaianb plzz 😳
roshaa thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
i am not good at making these sceans ....... plz someone continue zaianb plzz 😳

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