~~ * SS Endrum Priyamudan * ~~ Part 4 updated in page 8

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Hey guys...


I came with my new SS... Don't know if you guys like it or not so I'm just giving a bit of my story here... Will continue it on the basis of your reviews... And one more thing... This SS is dedicated to my best friend who is celebrating her birthday today... ( Sush )


This is my birthday gift to her... Happy Birthday Machi...


Part - 1

A pleasant morning time, the Sun was about to rise, the routine work was going in the street .The street was very broad , each and every house was simply good looking ...Actually it was a quarters for University workers...



She is in the deep sleep... She is sleeping by hugging her cute teddy bear... Without that cute teddy she won't sleep... She is dreaming...Dreaming her favorite recipes... Suddenly a cold water splashed on her face... She got up with the sudden jerk...


Raji : " Pissasu.." She looked at him with wet mixed fiery eyes...

Karthik : " Athai ezhuppa sonnanga... " he said looking at the side wall...

Raji : " Adhuku nu ippdi ezhuppuva ? Raji nu koopittu iruntha naane ezhunhdirchi irukka matena? En dreams ipddi keduthu vittutiye da..." she said in worried voice...


Karthik : "Appdiya madam... Foru your kind information... Naa 15 nimishama indha vena pona pera Thondai keeziyara allavu koopttitu irundhen... Nee ezhundhirikkala... Athai dhan indha idea kuduthanga.."

She glares at him...


Karthik : "Seri appdi enna dreams vandhuchu naanga kedutthu vittom... " he asked


Raji : " Ennoda favorite recipes ellame irunthuchu theriyuma... Chappathi , puri , Idly, dosai,Pongal, Vaadai , gulab jammun, Parrota, Alloo gravy , panneer---


Karthik : " Ey irru iruu.. Nee pattu sollitte pora... Unnakum mattum eppdi di indha mathiri kanvellam varuthu" he asked


Raji : " Adhellam appdi dhan seri nee odi poyi ennaku oru filltter coffee eduthuttu vaa.." she ordered him..


Karthik : Adhuku vera aalu paru... Unnaku coffee pottu kudukka dhan naa B.E padichi irukkena?


Raji : Podanga...

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She got up from her bed... And headed towards the bathroom...


After 20 minutes... she came from the bathroom... Drying her wet hair standing in front of the

mirror...

Karthik came with a cup of coffee... And gives to her...


Raji : " Ennada adhisiyama coffee pottu kudukkura.." she asked in suspicious tone...


Karthik : " Nalladhu panna indha ulagam ippdi dhan sandheegam padum.. Unnaku poyi potten paru enna sollanum.. " he was annoyed...


Raji :" Seri seri thanks... " she said and took the coffee and sipped it... Without a second she spitted on the floor...


Raji : "Auf auf... Thu thu... Cha enna kandraviya da kalandha ippdi kevalamana taste varudhu... " she asked in confusion...


Karthik : Appdiya... Kaalimannu taste kuduva di unnala kandupudikka mudiyala?


Raji : " Pissasu.. Unna... " she was searching a weapon to beat him... She took the pillow and start beating him...


Karthik : " Ey ey vaalikudhu.. vidu di... " he was shouting in pain... But she was deaf at the time...



" Arambichittingala? " A middle aged women came there...


Raji : " Amma enga paru ma eppa parthallum ennkittave sanda poduran... " She was complaining about him like a child...


Karthik : " Edhu naanu unkitta sanda podurana.. Coffee pottukudthadhuku nee dhan enna ippdi Adi Adi nu adikkura... Athai eva pannuradhu naayama neengale sollunga... " he said in innocent voice...


" Eppa...ungalaku panchayathu panniye en kaalam oodidum pola... Office ku time ayiduchu la rendu perum mudhala kellambunga... she ordered and went...


Karthik : Bulb vangunniya...


Raji : " Chi poda..." she throw the pillow on him..


At breakfast


Raji : Ummm... Ada ada unn kaippakuvame thani ma... Pongal semmaya irukku...

There he came ... He is in Formal attire.. Looks handsome.. He was hurry to go to office... He was running out of time...


" Rajiii... " he shouted in hurry...


But she was busy in her work... Tasting the pongal for each and every spoon.. She was not listening to his shouting...



Karthik : " Ey evlo neram di sappudura? Already time 8:15 ayiduchu... Nee pattu ippdi kottittu irukka... " he said in hurried voice...


Raji : " Dei iru da.. Idhu ennamo pudhusu mathiri pesura? Eppavume ippdi dhana povvom... Innaiku enna scene kattura"


He gives glare look at her... And went to take the bike...


Raji " " Ey ey iru da... Naanum varen.. vittutu poyidatha... Amma bye ma... " she was running out of the house...


She came out...But she can able to see only his disappearing... He was already starts the bike and reached the street gate...


Raji : " Poyittan... Korangu... Ennakitta varamleye poyiduva... Appa parthukuren da..." she made in her mind...


Raji : " Ippa namba eppdi poguradhu? Appa kitta ketta... Nambala varuthu thallichiduvanga... Amma kekave vennam... Andha pissasu ku dhan support pannuvanga... Lakshmi ? Ava romba punctuality ache... Vera yaru? she was thinking...


" Ada irukkave irukkan Anna..." she phone up to her Anna...


Raji : " Anna.." she called so lovely...


Vishnu : " Solluma thangatchi... Enna vittu poyittana? Ippa naa vandhu unna pick up pannanum.. Correct ah?" he asked mockingly...


Raji : Gagga poo...

Vishnu : Vandhu thollairuen..


After few minutes... He came to her house...


Vishnu : Unnaku driver vellai parukuradhe ennodaiya pollapa akkitiye di...


Raji : Seri seri... Unnoda pullambal niruthittu... bike edu da...


Vishnu : " Ennaku vennum dhan... Lover pick up panni drop pannu venndiya vayasulla... Thangatchiya pick up panni drop pannittu irukken.. Ellam en neram... " he pollambify to himself... And starts the bike...


In Office


Laskhmi : " Hi Karthik.. " she said in cheerful voice...


Karthik : Hi lakshmi...


Lakshmi : Enga raji?


Karthik : Vazhakkam pollla dhan over ah panna adhan vittutu vandhutten...


She smiles... " Ippa eppdi varuva?"


Karthik : Adhan Pasamalar Anna irukkane avan kuda varuva...


Vishnu : Appada ennaku nooru aayisu...


Lakshmi : Dei adha naanga sollanum da... Neeyalam nooru varusham irunthu enna pannapora?


Vishnu : Enna lakshmi... Naa ellarukum oru role model ah iruppen...


Lakshmi : Dei neeyalam role model ah ?


Vishnu : " Ama lakshmi... Enna mathiri yarum irukka kudathu dradhuku oru role model ah iruppen.." he said and laughs with his usual trademark laugh...


Lakshmi : Kaduvullae podhum da... Kalangathale arukkadha...


Karthik : Seri Raji enga?


Vishnu : " Enna ketta... Nee dhan sollanum raji enga.. " he asked the same question...


Karthik : Un kuda dhana da vandha...


Vishnu : En kuda vandha nu unnaku yaru sonnadhu.. En kuda ava varave illaye...


Lakshmi : " Seri karthik.. nee avaluku phone panni ennga irukka nu kellu..." she asked him to call her..

Karthik phone up to her... But it was switched off...


Karthik : Switched off nu varudhu...


Vishnu : Veetuku try panni paru da...


Karthik phone up to her Athai...


Karthik : Hello Athai...


Athai :" Sollu da... Enna seekirama rendu perum office ku poyittingala? " she asked about them.. So it cleared raji was not there...


Karthik : " Ahan... Vandhuttom athai.. Atha oru mukkiyamana call varudhu... Naa apparam pesuren..." he cuts the call..


Lakshmi : Ennachu karthik... Raji anga irukkala ?



Karthik : Illa laskhmi...


Vishnu : Ennada ippdi sollura.. Innaiku meeting vera irukku... Enga pona?" he was thinking...


Karthik : Ennaku konjam bayama irukku laskhmi..


Lakshmi : Adhellam onnum illa karthik... Ava vandhuduva...


Karthik : " Dei naa edhukum veetuku poyittu vandhuren da..." he told... And take his bike key..


Vishnu : Machan... Ippa edhuku waste ah? Traffic la engeyachum mattti iruppa da... Vandhuruva...


Karthik : "Paravalla da... Anna nagar bus stop la dhan ava iruppa nu nenaikkuren... Naa poyi kootittu vandhuren..." he said and went...


VL looks at each other and laughs...


Vishnu : Poo mavane poo... Konja neram Veyilla thirunchittu vaa...


Lakshmi : Vaa da avan varathukulla namba work mudichidalam...


Both goes to the conference room...


To be continued...



Author's Note :


Hi friends... Romba shock agittingala? Story konjum sumara dhan irukkum...

Naa IF ku vandha pudhusulla indha story ezhudhunen... Adhuku apparam interest ellama vittutten... Dhideerunu indha story update panna ennanu thoonuchu... Adhan panniten...

Neriya mistake irukkum... Adhellam neenga dhan edit pannikanum... Editing vella ungalodadhu... Ennoda close friend dhan eppavume edit pannuva... ( Adhu yaru nu ungaluke theriyum.. 😉) Enaku edit pannave theriyadhu... Mukkiyama I am too lazy to correct the mistakes... So if any mistake is there ( Kandippa irukkum ) please give PM to me... Ingey unga paratta kottidathinga... 😆


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Part 2 -


Raji comes to office...


Raji : Lakshmi ellam ready ah irukku la?


Lakshmi : Ellam ready raji... Dei vishnu karthik phone panni vara sollu... Paavam evlo neram veyila suthuran...


Raji : Nalla suthattum... Avanuku vennum...

Lakshmi : Ey avan unnakaga dhan ponnan... Avana poyi ippdi pesuriye?


Raji : Vera ippdi pesuradhu... Vittutu vandhan la... Adhuku Tit for Tat...


Vishnu : Seri seri... Avanuku naa phone panni vara solluren...

Vishnu takes his mobile and calls his number...


Karthik : Sollu da...


Vishnu : Enga da irukka ?


Karthik : Anna nagar poyittu irukken...


Vishnu : Machan nee udane office ku vaa...


Karthik : Edhuku da?


Vishnu : Nee vaa da soluren... He cuts the call...


After 20 minutes he reached the office...


He goes to their cabin... But VR was not there... So he decided to go to conference room..

He enter into the conference room...


When he enter into the room... He heard A big round of applause... His colleague greeted him with cheers and applause...


Congratulations karthik...


Karthik : Edhuku ? he asked in confusion...


Lakshmi : Edhuku nu sonna merisillayaduva...


Raji : Karthik... Nee ippa team leader kedaiyadhu... Project Manager...


Karthik : enna? he asked in extreme happiness...


Vishnu : Adhu mattum illa machan... Top 10 companies la irukkura RIT company project ne dhan panna pora... And you're going to fly to US... He said with action...


Karthik doesn't know how to react... He stunned for a moment... No boundaries for his happiness... He have no words to express his happiness... Actually he dreamt to work in US... His dream comes true..


His colleagues one by one congrats him...


Ashwin : Congratzz buddy... Idhuku nee treat veche aganum...


Karthik : Kandippa...


Vishnu : Ok guys... Thanks for your wishes... Parattum vizha inidhe mudivu adaindhu... Adhunala thangal anaivarum Thanga Irukkaiil Amarndhu Thangal Kadalai podum vellai arambikkavum...


Colleague : Seri guru ve...


Karthik : Dei ennada idhellam?


Vishnu : Summa oru surprise dhan da...


Karthik : Ungaluku indha news yaru sonna?


Lakshmi : Vishwanathan sir dhan... Avaru direct ah unkitte ye solluren nu sonnaru... Naanga dhan avarutta surprise naangale sollidurom nu sollittom...


Karthik smiles...


Lakshmi : Ana indha idea kudthudhadhu Raji dhan...


Karthik : Thanks..


Raji : Edhuku Thanks lam? Naanga idhellam senjadhe... Nee treat veippendradhuku dhan...

Ozhunga mariyathaiya semmayana treat veikkura...


Vishnu : Ama machan.. Illati ippave vishwanathan sir ta solli unnoda promotion cancel panniduvom..


Karthik : Eppa sammi kandippa vechuren pa... Seri eppa US poganum?


Lakshmi : Innum date fix pannala... ... May be two or three weeks la kellambara mathiri irukkum..


Suddenly Raji's face becomes dull... She ask excuse and leaves..


Raji : Ennaku konjum work irukku... Naa ippa vandhuduren...


She leaves...


Lakshmi : I also have to go... See you in lunch...


Vishnu : Seri lakshmi...


In Terrace...


She looking the sky and immersed in her own thoughts...


Lakshmi : Raji... ( Touch her shoulder)


She turns... Her face looks dull...


Lakshmi : Ennachu raji?


Raji : Onnum illaye.. Naa eppaiyum pola dhan irukken... She smiles to hide her feelings...


Lakshmi : Ennkittave? Unna pathi ennaku nallave theriyum... Happy dhan iruntha... Karthik two weeks la US poganum nu sonna udane un face dull ayiduchu...


Raji : Appdi ellam onnum illa...


Lakshmi : Ennaku theriyum...


Raji : Enna theriyum?


Lakshmi : You have some feelings on him..


Raji : Manangatti.. Adhellam onnum illa... She avoids eye contact with her..


Lakshmi : En raji maraikkura? Ennkitta edhuku maraikkura? Sollu adhunala dhan dull ah irukka...


One drop of tear escaped from her eyes...


Lakshmi : Raji...


She looked at her with tears


Lakshmi : Raji... Enna idhu chinna pulla mathiri azhudhukittu...


Raji : Ennaku kashttama irukku lakshmi... Innum two weeks la avan kellambiduvan nu nenaikkum bodhu varuthama irukku...


Lakshmi : Raji... Appo nee??


Raji : ( Takes a deep breath )Yes.. I love him...


Lakshmi : Idhu edhuku di ethana nalla avan kitta sollala?


Raji : Bayama irukku lakshmi...


Lakshmi : Bayama?


Raji : Ama lakshmi... Naanga rendu perum orey naalu dhan pirandhom... Onnu dhan vallandhom... Arambadhulla ennaku avan mella endha feeling um illa... Ana ippa ennaku...


She unable to complete her sentence...


Raji : Idha naa sonna na... Avan eppdi eduthupan nu theriyala...


Lakshmi : Eppdi eduthupan na? Kandippa avan ok solliduvan... Yena nee na avanuku avlo pudikkum...


Raji : Theriyum... Ana pudikkaradhukum... Kadhalikkaradhukum vithiyasam irukku la?


Lakshmi : Enna raji ippdi pesura? Edha vechi avan unna vennam nu solluvan nennaikura?


Raji : Yena karthik vera oruthar mella feeling irukku...


She was shocked to the core...


Lakshmi : Enna ? Vera oruthar mellaiya? Loosu ah nee?


Raji : Ama naa loosu dhan... Adhan eppdi irukken...


Lakshmi : Yaru avan love pannuran?


She refused to tell the name...


Lakshmi : Raji sollu... Yaru adhu?


Raji : Asha...


Lakshmi : Asha va? Enna ollura... Appdinu yaru sonna?


Raji : Karthik e dhan sonnan...


Lakshmi : Raji..


Raji : Ama lakshmi avane dhan sonnan...


FLASHBACK


KR plays basketball...


Raji : Mudinacha enkitta irunthu ball pudingadu pappom...


She was Dribbling the ball... Karthik try to catch the ball... But she smartly plays...


While playing karthik starts to talk...


Karthik : Raji... Naa unkitta onnu sollanum...


Raji : Ennada sollu... ( Dribbling the ball )


Karthik : Ennaku konja nallave edho mathiri ya iruku di..


Raji : Ennda 3 dhanush mathiri edhachum probem ah? Solluda... Appa dhan story intresting ah pogum...


Karthik : Aaasai paru... Ennaku andha feeling unkitta eppdi solluradhu nu theriyala... Sonna nee eppdi eduthupa num theriyala... Naa love pannuren...


Raji stops for a second... And again she starts to Dribbling the ball...


Raji : Yaru? ( Mind voice ): If he say my name... How will I face him...

She was blushed... she was waiting to hear her name from his mouth..


Karthik : Rajiii...


She stops Dribbling the ball... Karthik catch the ball...


Karthik : Naa Asha va love pannuren raji...

He said and puts the goal...


Karthik : Goal...


She was rooted to the place... She felt her head was reeling and the whole world spinning around her... Tears rolls down her cheeks... She unable to control her tears.. She thought that sight of her karthik telling that he was loving someone.. She was unable to take that easily...


Karthik : Raji ennachu appdiye ninnutta?


He comes to see her face..


She quickly wipes her tears and composed her feelings...


Karthik : Ennachu raji? Kannu en kalangi iruku? he asked with affection...


Raji : Onnum illa karthik kannula dhosi vizhundhuruchu...


Karthik : Enga kattu?


He softly open her eyes... Tears roll down her cheeks... He takes the dust from her eye by blowing his air into her eyes...


Karthik : Ippa poyiducha?


Raji : Mmm.. Poyiduchu..


Karthik : Naa sonnadhuku nee edhuvum sollalaiye...


Raji : Nee happy na naanum happy dhan...


Karthik : Parrahhaaa... Enna innaku en mella ivlo paasatha katturinga? he asked playfully...


She smiles.. " Summa dhan.. Oru nalllachum paasatha katturene.."


" Karthik..." His mom calls him...


Karthik : Seri raji amma koopiduranga... Naa vandhu ennoda love story pathi solluren...

He winked at her... And ran away...


She stands alone... Suddenly she felt she becomes orphan... She cried loudly as much

she can... She didn't think karthik will love some one... That too Nisha... She didn't even think in

dreams he loves Nisha... Because she hates Nisha... Actually Nisha didn't like her...

Nisha was modern and attitude girl... She was self centered and selfish too...

Her father was rich...Because of her father's richness she dominates others..


Thinking about her... Raji came up with one question...

" How could he love Asha?" Thinking about that her heart pains more... She unable to do anything...She never likes to cry.. But Without her knowledge tears continuously rolls down her cheeks... ... Seeing her crying face... Clouds also starts to cry... Rain water mingled with her salty tears...


Rain was pouring heavily... She stands like a statue with teary eyes...


To be continued...



Author's Note :


Hi friends... I think this part is better than first... I hope u like it... If anyone not like it , I promise I will give my best in upcoming parts...


I swear I'll not disappoint you at the end... Nambunga...


Waiting for your comments...


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Part 3 -


She cries continously... Without her knowledge tears rolls down from her eyes...


Lakshmi : Raji please... Azhadha... Yarudhu partha enna nenaippanga...


She tries to comfort her... But she keeps on crying...


Lakshmi : Raji... Karthik vishnu varanga...


She quickly stops crying and wipes her tears with her palm...


Vishnu : Ennachu? En Pasamalar ippdi vaadi irukku...

Lakshmi : Pasamalar Anna poruppa irukka mateikkurane dhan...


Vishnu : Naa enna poruppa irukka mateguire... Naaa nalla poruppu paruppoda dhane irukken...


Lakshmi : Irukka vendiyavangaluku irukka matainguraye...


Vishnu : Enna lakshmi ippdi sollitta? Nethi kuda nee kettanadhukaga... Office ku leave pottu unn kuda full day shopping pannen la? Enna poyi ippdi sollitta..


KR shocked...


Raji : Adi paavi... Nethi enkuda Library ku vaa di nu sonna appo vara maten nu sonna... Ippa puriyudhu en varala nu... Un kuda pesave kudathu... "she said with childish anger..."


Lakshmi : Ey summa avan variya nu kettan adhan ponnen... Plus neenum unnaku neriya things vanganum nu solli irunthila appdiya adhaiyum vangitten...


Raji : Podhum podhum... Romba akkarai irukkura mathiri dhan...


Karthik : Ava kedakkura raji... Naa unna shopping kootittu poren...


Raji : Yaru neenu? Enna? Poda dei..


Karthik : Ennadi naane solluren... Namba mattiya?


Vishnu : Dei Indha ulagam adutha second azhiya pogudhunu sonna kuda namba va... Ana nee shopping kootittu poren nu sonna epdi da nambaradhu ?


Raji : Un kuda naa shopping vandha... Just Browsing dhan panna mudiyum... Shopping panna mudiyadhu...


Karthik gives glare look to her...


Karthik : Namba Innum 2 weeks la US poga porome... Pona podhu nu ketten paru enna sollanum...


Raji becomes silent... Lakshmi looks at her...


Lakshmi : Karthik... Nee US poguradhuku munnadi silla procedure irukku... Nee enkuda vaa naa explain panniduren...


Lakshmi takes karthik to her cabin... Thinking about not to embarrass raji anymore..


Vishu gives unpredictable look to her...


Raji : Enna appdi parukkura?


Vishnu : Onnum illaiye summa dhan...


She looks suspiciously...


Vishnu : Naa ennaikume unnaku seiya vendiyadha senjikittu dhan iruppen... " he said with genuine voice and leaves..."


Raji : Enna sollittu poran... She couldn't able to get it... So she leaves to work...


Next Day


Vishnu's House...


Raji : Hi perimma... Eppdi irukinga?


Perimma : Ennadha solluradhu... Un anna yum perippa yum vechi kittu eppdi irukkuradhu?


Raji : Rani mathiri irukkalame...


Periapppa : Appdi solluda ma... Nee aalvo en magal...


Periamma : Podhum podhum unga appa ponnu paasam...


Periappa : Unnaku porukkadhe... Ava kedakkkurama... Avaluku poramai...


Raji : Enna periappa neenga sanda poduradhuku enna reason aka try pannuringala? Naa kellamuren... Anna madilla dhana irukkanga...


Periamma : Ama poyi paru.. Nalla thoongittu iruppan...


Raji : Seri naa parthukuren...

She goes to his room...


He is in balcony... Stood leaning on the wall... Looking down the floor... It clearly show that he was deeply thinking about something...


Raji : Enna Pasamalar yosanai lam balama irukku...


He came back from his thoughts...

Vishnu : Onnum illa... Ama nee enna inga?


Raji : Mudhala kai nittu soluren...


Vishnu : Edhuku?


Raji : Neettuda solluren... Ellathukum kelvi kettuku kittu...


Raji ties rakhi in his wrist...


Raji : Happy Raksha Bandhan Anna...


He was extremely happy... He hugs her and says thanks to her...


Vishnu : Thank u so much my dear Thangatchi...


Raji : Seri seri... Kasu edu...


Vishnu : Kasa ah ? Edhuku?


Raji : Ada ada onnume theriyadha mathiri nadikkuriya... Rakhi kattunnen la kasu edu ma?


Vishnu : Oh... Adhuva...


Raji : Enna adhuva? Modhala kasu... Nee eppaiye enna na vangalam nu plan pannitten...


Vishnu : Indha dhadava unnaku kasu kudukka poradhu illa...


Raji : Dei ennada sollura... Achachoo en kanavulla manna vari pottudadha da...


Vishnu : Unnoda aasai neravetha poren... " he said


Raji : Ennoda aasia ah ? Ennadhu? " she was confused... She unable to understand what he was saying..."


Vishnu : Indhadava unnod anna oda gift romba perusu... Un anna evlo pasamanavan nu nee parppa... " he said by pulling her cheeks softly... And leaves...


She stands with thinking mode...


Afternoon time... In Lakshmi's house...


RL sitting in the sofa... opposite to each other...

Lakshmi : Ennadi ippdi sollura?


Raji : Ippdi solllurana? Avan sonnadha solluren...


Lakshmi : Seri may be avan edhachum unnaku pudicha things edhachum vangi vechi irukkalm la?


Raji : Illa lakshmi... Avan sollum bodhu avan voice avlo genuine and affectionate ah irunthuchu... Avan ennoda aasai nu edha solluran nu theriyala... Adhan unkitta adha pathi edhachum sonan nu kekka vandhen...


Lakshmi : Illaye enkitta edhuvum appdi avan sollala... Ennava irukkum...

RL confused... Trying to find what vishnu was mentioned...


Lakshmi : Oru vella unnoda love pathi therinchiducho? she asked in doubt...


Raji : Adhuku vaaipe illa... Kandippa therinchi irukkadhu... Vera edhachum nu nenaikkuren...


Meantime Lakshmi mom enters into the house...


L mom : Vaama raji eppdi irukka? she welcomed her...


Raji : Nalla irukken Amma ... Nee enga market poyittu varingala?


L mom : Ama ma... Market poyitu varen... Ivala poo sonna poga mataingura... Pombala pullaiya enna vellai di nee veetula seyiura?


Lakshmi : Ennama ippdi sollitta? Morning dhana unnaku coffee pottu kuduthen..


L mom : Coffee kudthuthen nu sollu di... Pottu kudthen nu solladha... Unga appa pottu kudutharu nee vandhu en kitta kudtha... avlodhan... Idhuku peru vellaiya?


Raji : Vidunga Amma... Ava idha senjadhe periya vishiyam... Idhe Vanam megam mottadhoda irukku... R and L mom laughed...


Lakshmi : Enna vechi rendu perum kalaikiringa... Parthukuren...


Raji : Seri amma naa veetuku kelamburen...


Lakshmi : Ennadi adhukulla kellamburen nu sollitta? Iru sapptu poo...


Raji : Illa di veetula vella irukku... Amma vera seekirama vara sonnanga... Apparam varen... Varen amma...

L mom : Seri amma...


Raji leaves...


In Raji's house...


she parked her scooty i and enter into her house...


K's Mom : Enn marumagalu ku noora aayisu... Avala pathi ippa dhan pesittu irunthom... Avale vandhutta...


Raji : Ada ada romba dhna en mella pasam katturinga...


K's mom : Naa paasam veikkama vera yaru di veippa?


Raji : Ama appdiye romba dhan pasatha katturinga...


K's mom : Naa matttum illa inime enna pullaiyum un mella pasatha dhan katta poran...


Raji : Ama ama kattittalum..


K's mom : Ella marriage anadhuku apparam un eppdi vechi thanguran nu paru...


Raji : Enna? " She asked in confusion... "


K's mom : Enna di appdi parukkura? Nee innum konja naalu la en marumgala aga pora... She said by pulling her cheeks with extreme happiness...


Raji was shocked to the core... She was dumbfounded... She doesm't know what to say... She was not happy but not sad also... She was totally confused...


R's mom : Ennadi sandhoshathula vaai adachi poyittiya? Unnaku ok dhana?


Raji comes back to real world...


Raji : Yaru kitta indha mudivu eduthinga...


R and K's mom shocked...


" Yara kekkanum? " A hard loud voice came there...


They turns back to see...


Vishnu : Yara kekkanuma? Sollu... Yara kekkanum? " he said in anger hidden voice...


Raji : Enna kekkanum... Kalyanna pannika poradhu naan... Enna kekkama eppdi indha mudivu edupinga?


R's mom : Enna pesura raji... Naanga ennamo unna road la pora pechaikaranuka katti kudukka porom? Unnoda murai paiyan... Unnoda athai paiyan... Avanuku dhana katti kudukka porom...


Raji : Adhunala udane enna kuda kekkama indha mudivu eduthuduvingala... " she asked in anger...


K's mom doesn't know what to say... She maintain silence...


Vishnu : Atha neenga ulla poonga ava edho kozhuppathulla sollura... Dhidderunu ketta udane ippdi sollura... Naa parthukuren... Neenga ponnga...


Both K and R's mom leaves...


Raji : Nee enna pesura nu therinchidhan pesuriya?


Vishnu : Ellam therinchadhunala dhan pesuren...


Raji : Enna theriyum unnaku? " she almost shouted..."


Vishnu : Ellame theriyum... " He too shouted..."


Raji : Unnaku sonna puriyadhu... Ippa enna avasaram en kalyanuthuku? " she asked in irritation...


Vishnu : Unnaku ippa kalyanam pannuradhu prechanaiya illa kalyanam pannuradhe prechanaiya illa karthik kalyanam pannuradhu precthanaiya? " he asked in suspicious tone...


Raji : Moonume dhan prechanai...


Vishnu : Enna prechanai nu naanga therinchikkalama?


Raji : Pudikkala nu solluren vittudunga.. Avlodhan... Vera edhuvum kekkadhinga... " she said and walks to her room...


Vishnu : Oru nimisham...


She turns back...


Vishnu : Endha kalyanam nadanthe therrum... Idhu yaru nenaichallum matha mudiyadhu... Nee ennoda thangatchi avan ennoda Nanban... Ungalaku ippa enna seiyanum nu ennaku nallave theriyum... " he said with hard voice and left...


She runs to her room... Opens the door in anger... And sits on the bed... Suddenly she starts to cry... Thinking about what Asha said in morning...


FLASHBACK


In office


Raji was busily working in laptop... She was sitting in the conference hall... Asha came there...


Asha : Hi raji...


Raji : Hi..


Asha : Enna adhisiyama serious work pannittu irukka? " She asked mockingly...


Raji : Enn naa idhuku work panndhe parthdhadhu illaiya? Work pannuren nu scene kattitu suthuravangala vida... Naa nalla dhana work pannuren? " She too asked mockingly...


She glares at her...


Asha : Unnaku onnu theriyuma? Karthik ennoda romba close ayiitaan... " she provoked her possessiveness...


Raji : Romba nalladhu adhuku enna ippa? " she asked calmly...


Asha : Ila sonnen... Naaliku kuda enna pub ku koottitu poren nu solli irukkan.. Avan enna love pannuran theriyuma?


Raji keeps quite...


Asha : Enna raji theriyuma? " she asked again to irritate her..."


Raji : Theriyum... " she said in low voice... "


Asha : Avan enna sincere love pannuran... Naa illa na avan uyiraye vittuduvan... Andha alvu love pannuran...


She maintains the silence and control herself...


But Asha not stops her irritable talk... She keeps on irritating her...


Asha : Ava enna seekirama kalyanam pannikkanum nu nenaikkuran... Seekiram avanga Appa Amma kitta pesi samadham vangiduvan... Nee dhan en kalyanatha pa ennaku manamagal thozhi nikka pora...


Raji : Asha please... Idhu nee enkitta sola vendiya avasiyam illa... Ennaku neraiya vellai irukku naa kellamburen... She tries to leave from there...


Asha : Raji... Marupdaiyum solluren karthik en mella uyira ye vechi irukkan... Enna thavira vera yaraiyum avanala ethuku mudiyadhu... Yaraiyum... " She said her last sentence very hard and clearly...


FLASHBACK ENDS...


Raji was crying...


Raji : En kaduvale enna ippdi pada paduthura? Naa unn kittta kettadhu ellam onne onnu dhan... Karthik sandhoshama irukkanum... Avan eppaiyum sandhoshma irukkanum... Ana nee ennale avanoda sandhoshatha azhikkara mathiri seyiyuriya? " she cries to God...


Raji : Enna analum seri indha kalyantha niruthida vedniyadhu dhan...


"Ana adhu panna naanga vitta dhana?" A unknown voice came there...


To be continued...


Author's Note


Hi Guys... Again boring update... Sorry for giving dragging update... Next part onwards story will move forward...


And one more thing... If you have any doubt or mistakes regarding update... Please speak openly... Or give pm to me... Because I am not satisfied with this part... My exams are going on... So I am busy with my exams... So I typed in hurry... Sorry for the mistakes...


Please do comment and don't forget to hit the like button...


Edited by Abinaabi - 10 years ago
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Happy Krishna Jayanthi Friends...

Part 4 -


"Ana adhu panna naanga vitta dhana?" A unknown voice came there...


Suddenly she turns to see who was standing ... Seeing the person her face lighten up... Her grandmother standing with folded hands and bright smile in her face...


Raji ran to her and hug her tightly... And starts to cry... She rubbed her back comfortably...


GM : Ippa Enna ayiduchhu nu ippdi nee azhudhuttu irukka?


Raji : Unnaku edhuvum theriyadhu patti... Amma---


GM : Ennaku ellam theriyum...


Raji : Unnaku eppdi paati theriyum?


GM : Irukkave irukka un arumai friend... Lakshmi...


Raji : Avala... Ooru full ah idha dhan paravatti irukkula? She said in anger...


GM : Edhuku ippa ava mella kova padura? Avala vidu modhala nee edhuku indha kalyanatha niruthanum nu nenaikkura?


Raji : Enna paati puriyama pesura? Karthik idhula ishtamae illa...


GM : Appdi nu avan unkitta sonnana?


Raji : Idhula solluradhuku enna irukku? Avan dhan Asha va love pannurane...


GM : So what? she asked very casually..


Raji : Enna paati unnaku moolai edhachum kozhambiducha? Avan Asha va love pannuran... Enna avana pudikala nu sollittu irukken... Nee ennadana loosu mathiri pesittu irukka...


GM : Idhan saku nu cycle gap la enna loosu nu solura parthiya?


She give absurd smile...


GM : Inga paaru di ma... Nee kekkamale sandhosham un kurai pechittu kottudhu... Adha vennam nu solladha...


Raji : Nee enna sollura nu ennaku puriyave illa...


GM : Indha kalyanthu ku oothuko...


Raji : Adhu mattum mudiyadhu paati... Avanoda love azhichittu dhan ennoda love kappathunum na... Appdi paata love ey ennaku thevai ila...


GM : Ahhayyooo... Endi avan enna romba thangamana ponna ayiya love pannuran? Andha asha va... Avalum ava dress um... Avanga appa ivlo kasu vechi irukkan irunthu avan ponnu ku oru periya dress kuda vangi kuda matainkuran.. How cheapskate he is?


Her sentence made her to laugh.. Her GM admire her smiling face...


GM : Nee indha mathiriye eppavum sirichikitta irukkanum... Adhu karthik un kuda irunthadha dhan mudiyum da... she said touching her cheeks softly..


Raji : Ana enna pannuradhu enna munnadi andha Asha mundhikittale... She made sulky face...


GM : Inga paaru game la first yaru munnadi varanga dradhu mukkiyama illa... Last yaru varanga dradhu dhan mukkiyam... Nee aasai patta vazhkka amaiyanum na indha klayanthuku oothuko...


Raji : Ana klarthik ???????


GM : Karthik kitta indha kalayanthuku oothukatha mathiri nadichiko...


Raji : Nadikuradha? Acting? Ennalam mudiyadhu pa...


GM : Ayahoo... Apdiye unnaku nadikka varadha mathiri dhan.. She said thinking about her childhood day...


Raji : Adhu lam appo... Seri naa eppdi avan kitta nadikkaradhu? Adhu mattum illama avanuku ishtam illa nu thernjidhaku apparam...


GM : Inga paaru karthik ey un love purinchikittu... Unna kalyanam pannipan... Adhuku naa guarantee.. Ana adhuku nee naa solluradhellam kekkanum...She said strictly..


Raji : Sollu... Avan enna kalyanam pannikama vera yaruvudhu nalla ponna kalayanam panni kittalum paravala... Ana Andha Asha mathiri ratchasi ya kalyanam panikka kudathu...


GM : Appadi podu... Nalla ponnu na nee dhan.. Unnai avan kalayanam panni pannipan...


" Rajii... " Her mother called her...


" Enna amma? "


" Karthik vandhu irukkan paru... Poyi pesu.. " She said...


She looks at her GM... She said All is well through her eyes...


She leaves to see him...


In terrace...

She went to him... Stood behind him... He feels her presence... He turns and looks her with hestiation...


Karthik : Rajiii... " He calls her with hesitation...


She was feared...


Karthik : Sorry raji...


She was puzzled by his sorry...


Raji : Edhuku karthik?


Karthik : Illa ennala dhan unnaku evlo kashttam... Ennakaga nee unga appa ammakitta sanda pottu indha kalyanam venam nu sollura...


Raji : Idhula enna irukuu karthik ? Nee vera oruthi virumbum podhu... Naa eppdi indha kalyanathuku oothupen...


Karthik : Romba thanks raji... Enga nee indha marriage ku ok solliduviyo nu nenaichen...


Raji Mind voice " Neenjamve unnala en love purinchikka mudiyalaiya karthik ? Illa poi ah na ourthiya love pannuradhu nala ennaoda unnmai ana love unnaku puriyalaya?? She control her tears...


Karthik : Nalla purinchiduchu... Nee sonnadhuku apparam dhan sandhoshama irukku... U r always my raji... Yaralaiyum indha raji ya enkitta irundhu pirikka mudiyadhu...

Knowing or unknowingly he said that she always for him only.. His intentions may be different but his words comfort her heart...


Raji : Karthik... Endha kalyanatha niruthuradhuku orey vazhi nee unnoda love Mamma Athai kitta solluradhu dhan...


Karthik : Hmm... Kandipa solluren.. Seri raji naa kellumberen... bye...


He leaves...


GM comes to her...


GM : Ennadi naa sollura mathiri sonniya?


Raji : Mm... Sollitten... Asha va love pannuren nu unga veetula sollidu nu solla sollitten... She said and goes to her room leaving her GM dumbfounded...


Next Day... In office...


Raji was in conference hall... sitting in the chair and sleeping by keeping her head on the table...


Karthik comes to her...

Karthik : Raji... Raji... " he patted her shoulder to wake up her "


Slowly she woke up from her sleep... She looks so tired... She was not well both in heart and health...


Karthik : Enachu raji en ivlo dull ah irukka?


Raji : Onum illa karthik.. Nethi la irunthu lesa feverish ah irukku...


He touch her head...


Karthik : Ey ennadi fever evlo irukku ? Leasa fever adikkudhu nu sollura? Vaa doctor kitta polam..


Raji : Adhellam onnu venam karthik... Naa tablet pottuten..


Karthik : Tablet pottadhuku apparamum ivlo fever adikkuma? Modhala nee kellambu..


He grabs her hand... She unable to stand itself... She fell unconscious... He hold her waist and hugged her before she hits the hard floor...


Karthik : " Raji... " He patted her cheeks.. No response... So he phone up to doctor...


After an hour later...


She gains conscious... She was lying in sofa...


He was sitting near her with anger...


Karthik : Loosa ah nee... Udumbu sari illa na doctor ta poyi katta mattiya... Oru nimsiham ennoda heart ninnu poyiduchu,... Innum chinna pullai ah irukka? You only have to take care of yourself..


Raji keeps quite...


Karthik : Nee romba weak irukka nu sonnanga... Not only in you health... Unnaoda manasu aalvu laiyum weak irukka... Adhu ennaku nalal theriyudhu,... Nee munna madhiri lam enkitta pesuradhu illa.., Ennachu unnaku? Please... Ellathiyum enkitta share pannuva... en edha mattum enkitta share panna matainguraHe asked her with concerned...


Raji : Yena... Naa unkitta adha share pannanum nu nee virumbala... She said flattly... But her words made him to confuse..


Raji : Naa kellamburen karthik...


Karthik : Ey iru naanum varen...


Raji : Vena karthik... Naa thaniyave poyikuren... Yena nee eppavume en kuda vara mudiyadhu la... " She tries to made him to understand her love.. "


Karthik : Raji... " he call her name.. To clear whether her words carrying her love for him..."

She unable to face him... She cries to made him to clear his thought was true... He stood dumbfounded... He doesn't know what to say.. But his heart was found a solace and happiness... But his mind tells him to get angry on her...


Raji : Sorry karthik... Unkitta ippdi sonnadhuku... Ennaku theriyum Nee Asha va love pannura nu... Ana ennala ennoda love maraichi veikka mudiyala... Ellathiyum unkitta naa share panni irukken ana enoda life yum unnoda share pannikanum nu nenaichadhu ennoda muttal thanam dhan... Adhuvum nee asha va love pannuran therinchidhaku apparam unkitta ippadi pesuradhu thappu dhan... Enna manichidu karthik...


She joined her palms and cries to him... He unable to take that situation anymore... Without second thought he grabs her hand and hugs her... She doesn't expect that... But she needs that... And keeps silent by resting her head on his chest...


He himself don't know what made him to do that... But he felt he was right...


There was two eyes seeing this beautiful scene with pure hatred heart... standing behind the door...


Asha MV : Never... Avalo seekiram un jeeyikka vitura matten... Karthik naa love pannadhe unna avan love pannida kudathu nu dhan... Kandippa unkitta irunthu karthik pirichiduven... Sure... you are going to lose your life... I am only the winner...


Slowly he broke the hug... And looks at her with guilty heart... He was unable to face her... She too in the same situation... Actually they were good friends since from their childhood days... But they itself didn't know when that friendship turn into love...


Karthik : Kellambalama?


She nods yes...


Karthik starts the bike and stops besides her ... And waiting her to sit... Raji hesitate to sit after sharing her feelings to him...


Karthik : Raji time ayiduchu...


Raji sits behind him... The ride was very silent... After few minutes he reached her home...


She got down from the bike... And walks to her home... But she was stops by his call...


Karthik : Raji...


She turns...


Karthik : Inga vaa...


She goes and stands keeping some distance from him...


Karthik : Innum kittakka vaa...


She goes near him...


Karthik : Raji... Naa solluradhu eppdi nee eduthupa nu ennaku theriyala... Ana solluradhu nejam... Idhu dhan ennoda mudivum kuda...


She starts to hear curiously...


Karthik : Inga paru raji na eduka pora mudiuvu unnakum sanshotha tharum ennakum sandhoshatha tharum... Unnoda love true... Ennoda love um true... Naa edukka pora mudivu unnaku ippa kashttatha kuda tharalam ana pinnadi romba sandhoshatha dhan tharum... Adhula ennaku endha sandhaegamum illa... Poyi nalla thongu... Naaliku parukkalam... bye... Good night...


He starts the bike... And drives to his home...


After he went she goes to her house...



To be continued...


Author's note


Sorry friends... I know this is short update... But Today only I starts to type... Today I am fully busy with celebrations... Innaiku krishana jayanthi veriya... Neriya vellai irunthuchu... Adhu mattum illama teachers day vera... So adhuku vera ennoda teacher vettuku poyi celebrate pannom... So adhunala update short mudichitten...


Konjum mokkai dhan irukkum... Na mistakes lam apparama vandhu edit panniduren colouring apparam vandhu kudthuduren...Ippadhiku idha Adjust pannikonga... Please... Ana naa ennoda promise kappathitten... Krishana jayanthi annaiku update pannittom la...😉😆


Please do comment and don't forget to hit the like button...



Edited by Abinaabi - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SushK16

Adipaavi Machi... Ennaku sollamaiye oru story ah start pannitaiyaa? 😲 😲

Adha vida shock, it is dedicated to me?? 😲 😲 Birthday gift?? 😲 😲

Serious ah expect pannave illa di... What you have done is too much and what I feel is beyond words... 🤗

A HUGE surprise on my birthday... And you have made me feel really special... 😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH MACHI... You have left me dumbfound with this... Life la eppodhum nyabagam vachurupen di... 😛

I am extremely lucky to have you in my life... Love you forever and ever... ❤️

P.S. - Will come later to comment more properly... I am feeling really proud... Thank You once again di... Love you lots... 😃

-- Sush 😉

Unkitta sollittu panni iruntha adhu eppdi surprise ah irunthu irukkum?😆

Friends kulla no thanks... Unnaku pudichi iruntha ok dhan...

Onnum avasaram illa porummaiya comment pannu...

Love u too ❤️

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Happy Krishna Jeyanthi Abinaya 😊
Thank you for the lovely update ..

Raji's pati , jovial person , master planning lam poduranga kalyanathuku .. 😎
Raji & pathi convo very funny , casual la pesuranga . Very friendly pati 🤗 . Raji is very firm in her decision even after pati advise .

Raji & Karthik convo ; love this , so much of love and affection .. ❤️

Raji Mind voice " Neenjamve unnala en love purinchikka mudiyalaiya karthik ? Illa poi ah na ourthiya love pannuradhu nala ennaoda unnmai ana love unnaku puriyalaya?? She control her tears..

Raji's reply make pati speechless . Raji is right after knowing Karthik's love how could she agree for the marriage .

My favorite , superb Bubbly 😳 ☺️

Raji : Sorry karthik... Unkitta ippdi sonnadhuku... Ennaku theriyum Nee Asha va love pannura nu... Ana ennala ennoda love maraichi veikka mudiyala... Ellathiyum unkitta naa share panni irukken ana enoda life yum unnoda share pannikanum nu nenaichadhu ennoda muttal thanam dhan... Adhuvum nee asha va love pannuran therinchidhaku apparam unkitta ippadi pesuradhu thappu dhan... Enna manichidu karthik...


Raji pour out whats all in her heart even knowing that the bitter truth will make him guilty but it is the best for both of them 😒

She joined her palms and cries to him... He unable to take that situation anymore... Without second thought he grabs her hand and hugs her... She doesn't expect that... But she needs that... And keeps silent by resting her head on his chest...


The hug , no need to explain anything sometimes a hug can make you at peace . Unknowingly they love each other . Abi you have describe it so beautifully and soulfully . So close to heart ❤️ .

All the best Asha 😡 . I'm waiting for that ...

Karthik yena mudiyu yeduka poran teriyile but I hope it the best for both of them .

Wonderful update Bubbly 👏 👍🏼 KR touched my heart ...

KR convo is superb dear . KR vanthale magic than le , beautiful pair .

Waiting for Saturday again .. can wait



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Happy birthday teddy and nice start abhi
Waiting for the next part
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Adadada...starting e semaya iruke ,Abi..Loved it..Loved it..👏👏

Raji..hehehe...thongathula koda recepies ninaiputhana?..thinnipandaramo??.😆..(Yei ivangala pathi naan engayo keta maathiri iruke)😉😆😆

Karthik..ada ivan vera..ava nalla dream kandukittu iruntha..atha stop pannitan..😆

Oh..sir coffeelam pottu kodukararanu paartha,ippadi bulb kuduthutane..😆😆

Pongal a ivalavu nerama saapidrala Raji??..super...paiyan kilambitan athukulla..

Aama KR enga irukaanga?..Raji veetulaya??en??

Inga paaruda...pasamalar vanthuthan epayum kottitu povarama thangatchiya karthik vittutu pogumpothu..Superda..😳

VL..Nice play than..rajiya enga irukanganu theiryalaiyamla...Karthik pavampa...but enaku ithu pidichuruku..😉

Super start...Super title...Super SS,,,athuvum Super friendku...ellam supera iruku⭐️👍🏼

I cant wait for the next part,Pasamalar..Seekarama update pannu..Seriya??...ithu Un pasamalaroda order😆
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Adipaavi Machi... Ennaku sollamaiye oru story ah start pannitaiyaa? 😲 😲

Adha vida shock, it is dedicated to me?? 😲 😲 Birthday gift?? 😲 😲

Serious ah expect pannave illa di... What you have done is too much and what I feel is beyond words... 🤗

A HUGE surprise on my birthday... And you have made me feel really special... 😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH MACHI... You have left me dumbfound with this... Life la eppodhum nyabagam vachurupen di... 😛

I am extremely lucky to have you in my life... Love you forever and ever... ❤️

P.S. - Will come later to comment more properly... I am feeling really proud... Thank You once again di... Love you lots... 😃

-- Sush 😉
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Happy b day sush...
Nice start... Do continue

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