~*~ NEW SS - You Complete Me... ~*~ Part 5 - Page 22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Archana03

Un frnd a pathi nee dhan sollanum 😉

Varuma illa varatha nu 😆

Originally posted by: Archana03

Abi varum nu un thozhi ya kellu ma appadiye SK kum confirmation vaangidu 😆

Ena lily sis ok va 😆

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Naa innerathuku vandhu irukkum nu nenaichen... Avlo confident ah sonna... nee ezhundhirikkaradhukulla update varum nu... Naa ezhundhirichi school ku poyittu ippa maranalle thoonga poren... 😆

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Sis naane ippa dhan en uyir thozhi ya theditu irukken.. Inime avala kandupudichi update keetu apparam update vaangi... Shabhaa..😆

Originally posted by: Archana03

Abi varum nu un thozhi ya kellu ma appadiye SK kum confirmation vaangidu 😆

Ena lily sis ok va 😆

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Naa innerathuku vandhu irukkum nu nenaichen... Avlo confident ah sonna... nee ezhundhirikkaradhukulla update varum nu... Naa ezhundhirichi school ku poyittu ippa maranalle thoonga poren... 😆

Originally posted by: Archana03

Nee thedi kandu pudichavuthu update vangiduve abi 😆 but sila per thedi kandu pudichu update ketalum vaaku kuduthu athe kapathe matenrange 😆😆

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Firstly thanks PIC for actually posting this here 😃 I am over the moon was waiting for this😆

Super happy and loved it 😊

Next... i have to thank your best friend (as i know all about it) hehehee... soo thank you for making such a dare that she had to do😆👍🏼 (ithuku nee yenna soluva innu theriyum ... just picturing that in my mind cracks me up😆)

and

Sush thanks da for actually being sportive about it and writing it and that to posting after me pestering hahahaa😆

Now to the update

In simple Excellent👏

In detail...

Lets start from the beginning excellent use of language... ROFL at your OCD nope if its a fiction then has to be perfect so support you in this do not worry and its not OCD its perfect!

Raji the way you have portrayed her pain... her feelings simply amazing... could clearly visualise this happening...

Do not like Manoj and his mum ... hate there character a lot... nonsense for money they do this dont they have a heart heartless people gosh grrr😡

Karthi ... you know the way you have described the scene reminds me of a prince... cinderella literally comes to mind here its Manoj there its the evil step sisters hahahha... i know its not the same story or outline but the portrayal of karthis character was like that... but you know me and my crazy thoughts 🤣

When Raji and Karthi shook hands... the sensation they both felt even i could feel it... you have described the scene clearly 👍🏼

Also happy Karthi realised something was wrong... hope he does help her from this mess...

I am very eager to see how you bring about the whole story and the characters... want to see how everything evolves and forms into place or if it does😆

Sush please do continue I for one will read this no matter what... you know me 😆

Well done for your first go at fiction writing...its fine and really intriguing ... the main thing an author needs is for the readers to be engaged and want to read more... which is what I want to do soo please continue in your own time and if possible finish before you go back to school as i for one know how busy you will become 😆

Again thanks and well done👏