SS: NINAIVELLAM NEEYE - Part - 10 (Page No.24) - Page 2

Nice..

Nalla thoru aarambam...

Pls update regularly

Super start Devi 😉

Happy to see you writing Devino, I like the start and how it connects with the show. Wonder what Karthik will say when he sees Raji. Like Anitha was mentioning, I think if you write in the commonly used Tamil that might help especially for readers like me you are not so fluent in Tamil lol. Waiting for the next part.

Wow...Devi sis...enna ithu ellorum ippadi surprise kodukarenga.😛..first Gayu sis,next neenga...sema start ponga...Title um supera iruku...👏👏👏

Nice part devino I second you shiny hahaha mokka story ivlo writers create pandradhu really a great thing ever. Devino am waiting to read next part. All the best for your writing 👍🏼

Haiyaaa new ff

Originally posted by: sizzling78

wow semma start Dewi sis 👏👏👏

ur way of imagination is vry nice 😃

Vichu sir K part was gud nicely portrayed 👍🏼

KV scene comedyah start aagi knjm serious ah finish aachu 😊 ana K L ah pathi sollarane appo L entry ah 😲

KR scene ... ada yen sis suspense vechiteenga 😒

K R oda bangalora ponnara illa R bangalore vandhu surprise kuduthangala can't guess 😕

eagerly waiting for ur next one when it is sis

Thanks sizzy
Lakshmi entry irukka illaiya -- konjanaal wait pannanum 😉

KR love, emotional & fight - scenes on the way pa

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Nice..

Nalla thoru aarambam...

Pls update regularly

Thanks ramya...

Try to do it ma...😛

Originally posted by: SushK16

Super start Devi 😉

Simple and apt beginning... Great... 😃

Every scene was fit and apt... Good Job... 😛

Do continue... 😉

Thanks sush ma...

Simple ah vey kondu ponumnu dhan aasai, let see...

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Happy to see you writing Devino, I like the start and how it connects with the show. Wonder what Karthik will say when he sees Raji. Like Anitha was mentioning, I think if you write in the commonly used Tamil that might help especially for readers like me you are not so fluent in Tamil lol. Waiting for the next part.

Thanks smiles...

KR scene on the way...