SS: NINAIVELLAM NEEYE - Part - 10 (Page No.24) - Page 3

Originally posted by: sivania02

Nice ... Keep writing 😊

Thanks sivani...

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Wow...Devi sis...enna ithu ellorum ippadi surprise kodukarenga.😛..first Gayu sis,next neenga...sema start ponga...Title um supera iruku...👏👏👏

Karthik...V datava vittu porana...hmm...puriyuthu avan kavalai...

Vichu sir...karthika nalla purinchu vechurukaaru...

Vishnu...ippayum comedya??..hehe..😆

Parrah...karthik advicing V..he was right...manimegalai maathiri laxmi kidaiyathu...

Loved this part...Thanks a lot,Madam...waiting😉

But directora unmiayave paaratanum...avar storya padu kandraviya kondu porathala than namaluku super super stories kidaikuthu...Neraya writersum uruvaaranga...Great Job,dir😆😆

Thanks a lot bro...

kandippa director ku thanks solliye aaganum bro...

Originally posted by: ammukuty

Nice part devino I second you shiny hahaha mokka story ivlo writers create pandradhu really a great thing ever. Devino am waiting to read next part. All the best for your writing 👍🏼

Thanks ammu...

Originally posted by: dhivya8

Haiyaaa new ff

First of all... Title eh superbbb sis...

Thanks a lottt fr d ff...

First part arumaiyo arumai...

Karthik vichu sir scene romba etharthama irundhadhu... K azhudhapa mainaa...

Vishnu hahahahahahahah.. Konjam pesanum... Neriyave pesalam🤣

Niceee.. Karthik lakshmi pathi sonathu super sis.. Lakshmi character varuma apdina???? Me Waitinggg...

Vishnu lak pathi nenaikaran jolly...

Next part epo sis... Seekram update panirunga. Waitinggg

Thanks dhivya...

Serious aana time layum comedy panna vishnu va adichika aaley illa 😆

Yenna pa yellarum lakshmi entry ya yedhirpaarkireenga 😲

Thanks for your support friends

Unga comments la irundhu yenaku oru energy kidaichirukku guys...

Innum better ah pannanum nu ninaikiren

Silar konjam corrections sollirukaanga, adhaiyum mindla vachikuren 😊

C u soon 😛

Part - 2

In conference room...

Karthi conference room door open panni ulley ponan, anga anbu mama administrator's kitta discuss pannitu irundhaanga...

Karthi: Sorry, neenga irukeenganu theriyama vandhuten

Anbu mama: onnum prachana illa karthi, nee vaa, naanga official ah dhan pesitu irundhom (ok pa naama naalaiku meet pannuvom nu team kitta solli kilamba sollitaar)

Karthi: saringa anna

Anbu mama: yen pa, unnoda room yenna aachu, inga vandhu work panra

Karthi: adhu vandhu, yennoda roomla house keeping yedho clean pannanuma, adhan (MV raji ya paarkalamnu vandhom nu yeppadi ivar kitta solradhu)

Anbu mama (mind voice): house keeping morning he avanga velaiya mudichitaangaley, yedhuku namma kitta poi solraan

Karthi: yenna anne yosikireenga

Anbu mama: onnum illa pa, appuram aduthu yenna panna pora

Karthi: konjam work mudichitu, lunch saapida poren, neengalum vareengala

Anbu: Yenna pa, andha Vishnu kooda serndhu neeyum comedy pandra

Karthi: neenga dhaana keteenga, yenna panna porenu, adhan sonnen

Anbu: Adhilla pa, annaiku unga mama kitta nee appadi pesinadhula irundhu, yenaku unna ninaicha orey kashtama irukku pa

Karthi: naane varutha padala, neenga yedhuku feel pandreenga

Anbu (MV): nee varutha padala, adha naan nambanum, yedhuku pa yengala yemathuradha ninaichitu unnaiye nee yemathikira, naan thittitu ponadhuku appuram nee kan kalangi ninnadha naan paarthutu dhan irundhen pa

Karthi:anne yenna aachu

Anbu: unnoda life la aduthu yenna panna pora pa

Karthi: adha pathi innum yosikala anna, nadakuradhu nadakkattum, namma kaila yenna irukku

Anbu: nee ippadi yellam pesura aal illaiye pa, ippa yenna ippadi yellam pesura

Karthi: yellam time anne

Rendu perum pesitu irukkum bodhu, raji door open panni ulla vandhutu, ulla varalama nu ketta

Anbu: vaama raji

Raji: yenna anne inga yenna pandreenga

Anbu: chumma dhaan ma, nee yenna indha pakka, yedhavadhu meeting ku book pannirukiya

Raji: illa anne, adhu vandhu (MV yenna solradhu, karthi ya paaka dhan vandhom, adha yeppadi solradhu) yennoda roomla ac work aagala, adhan inga vandhen

Anbu MV: pona vaaram dhaana yella ac yaiyum service panninom, yedhuku raji poi solludhu

Raji: konjam adhai seekiram sari pannunga anne

Anbu: sari ma, yenaku konjam velai irukku naan kilamburen, varen karthi

Karthi: sari anne naanum kilamburen, avanga work pannatum

Anbu MV: rendu perum oruthara oruthar paarkanumnu vandhuteenga appuram yenna indha vetti bandha, yeppa dhan indha ego va vida poreengalo

Raji: yenaku onnum problem illa avar ingaye work pannatum

Anbu: rendu perum work pannuveengalo, illa sandai poduveengalo yenna aala vidunga, naan varen

Karthi: Raji yaiye konja neram paarthutu irundhaan, but raji gavanikala, konja neram kalichu avalum paartha

Raji: yenna

Karthi: onnum illa

Raji: appuram yenna appadi paakura

Karthi: illa, yeppadi irukka

Raji: ok, nee

Karthi: olunga saapiduriya, work work nu rumba strain pannikaadha, night nalla thoongu

Raji: yenna dhideernu akkarai

Karthi MV: yevvalavu thimiru, naan olunga keta olunga badhil solla vendiyadhu dhaana

Raji: yenna dhideernu akkarai

Karthi: chumma dhaan keten

Raji: nee niraiya kudikirenu kelvi patten, pakkathu veetu maami rumba compliant pandraanga

Karthi: unaku yedhuku call pandraanga, yedhavadhuna yen kitta solla vendiyadhu dhaana, unaku yedhuku call pannanum, nee innum sollalaiya namaku divorce aayiduchunu

Raji: illa sollala

Karthi: yedhuku, veeta vittu poita, divorce um aayiduchu, appuram yedhuku nee yenakaaga mathavanga kitta thittu vaanganum

Raji: appuram solliduren

Karthi MV: yedhuku raji innum yenakaga nee ivvalavu pandra, naan dhan unna ivvalavu kashta paduthurene, appuramum nee yenna verukka maatengura

Raji MV: yeppadi unna verukka mudiyum karthi, yenakaaga nee yevvalavu pannirukka, yenna yendha alavukku love panninanu yenaku nalla theriyum karthi

Karthi MV: yenakaaga nee unnoda uyira kooda kuduka thuninja raji, adha yennala yeppavume marakka mudiyadhu, aana unna poiye naan rumba kodumai padithuten raji, sorry raji

Raji MV: innum onnum kettu poidala karthi, ippa kooda nee yenkitta orey oru sorry sollu adhu podhum yenaku

Karthi MV: naan pannina thappuku verum oru sorry mattum podhadhu raji, nee nalla irukkanum, marubadiyum namakulla problem varakoodadhu, adhaan naan unna vittu nirandharama piriya mudivu panniruken

Raji MV: Vishnu kitta solra, anbu anna kitta solra, yen lawyer kitta kooda solra, indha divorce ah cancel panna mudiyumanu, aana yen kitta mattum yen karthi solla maatengura

Karthi MV: nee andha kamal ah marriage pannikitu nalla irukkanum raji, adhu konjam kashtam dhan, naan inga irukura varai nee yendha mudivum yedukka maata, adhan naan indha mudivu yedukuren

Raji: yenna karthi, yedhavadhu sollanuma

Karthi: aamam raji, kandippa unkitta solliye aaganum

Raji MV: ippavadhu sollanumnu ninaikiriye seekiram sollu karthi, naan adhukaaga dhaan wait pannikitu iruken

Raji yoda mugathula oru hope oda smile vandhadhu

Karthi MV: raji nee ninaikira maadhiri naan sandhoshamana vishayatha solla varala, sorry raji, unna kashta paduthuradhuku

Karthi oru bunch of paper ah yeduthu, raji kitta kuduthaan

Karthi: idhu unaku illa idhu kamal ku sondhamaanadhu

Raji: oru vidha yemaatrathoda adhai vaangina, yennadhu karthi

Karthi: Mama, illa unga appa namma kalyanathuku appuram, namakaaga kudutha sotthu pathiram, inime idhu yen kitta irukka koodadhu

Raji: gets emotional

Karthi MV: ippadi yellam unna kashta paduthinaalavadhu nee yenna verukiriyaanu dhaan naan ippadi panren raji

Raji MV: yen karthi, yedhuku ippadi ovvoru vaarthaiyaalu, seyalaalum yenna kashta paduthura

Karthi MV: yethana dhadava sorry sonnalum, yenaku mannipe kidiayadhu raji, naan varen, kan kalangi yedhuvum sollama veliya ponaan

Raji: yenna sollaradhune theriyama kadhari kadhari azhudha

Adutha naal morning...

Karthi avanoda room ah lock pannitu bag yeduthukittu veliya vandhan, avan yedu vacha ovvoru adiyilayum avanukku raji kooda andha veetla nadandha ovvoru happy moments um ninaivukku vandhadhu

First naal paal kaaichi veetuku vandhadhu, raji birthday celebrate panninadhu, chinna chinna sandai samaadhaanam, susan kaaga sandai potadhu, periya idaivelai, raji ku kudutha kashtangal, kadaisiya raji veetai vittu veliye ponadhu varai yellame avanai kan kalanga vaithadhu.

Manasa kal aakikondu, veetai vittu veliye vandhan...

THODARUM...

ADUTHU...

Karthi train yeri utkaarndhu kondu, palaiya ninaivugalai ninaichu kitte irundhaan, appodhu avan yedhir paarkadha oruvarai paarthu shock aanaan...

Adutha partum Super, Devi..

Rombha yatharmana nighazhvugal... You have narrated it nicely...

Each and every scene are so nice...

Mind voice laye pesikiraangha... Super .. Super... Ana idha eppo velipadaiya pesaporaangalo... Theriyalai..

Thanks for this speed update... Expecting the next part also soon...

Very nice updates Devi...👏

Thanks for the nice and wonderful update Devi

Really super update,Devi sis..👏👏