OS:The divorce

well friends i just tried one shot with the continuation of promo.hope u people wont be bored


Os :The divorce


Raji walks in with papers .karthik looks at her with tears. Raji controls her tears and asks " busy ah irukkiya" . karthik " illa". Raji " appo sari ,office hours la pesrathu thappu than ". karthik mindvoice " yenna manichudu Raji,yen thappu puryuthu,ne illan ah valkaila arthamey illenu puryuthu,yella thappyum manicha,intha thadava matum yen raji,yen".




Raji takes the pen and signs it and gives to karthik. karthik looks at papers with tears .Raji cries .Raji mindvoice " ipoo kooda sorry ketka matey illey,un ego va vida matey illey ,sorry vendam,pogathey nu solla vendam,yenaku ne venumnu sollitholayen da ".


karthik looks at crying Raji .Raji " seekram sign panidu ". karthik " Raji ". Raji " aprom solla maranthuten,yen things yellam pack paniachu,oru ladies hostel ah thanga poren,anga shift pana solten,vishnu parthupar ".


karthik gets shocked .karthik " appo appo ne veeta vitey poriya Raji". Raji " ithu yenna madathanam ana kelvi". karthik " illa vanthu". Raji "aprom inoru vishyam,ippo la irunthu ne yaro,nan yaro ,thevai illam ah yenakaga feel panathey,kudichutu drama podatha puryutha".



karthik mindvoice " ne irukkum varai unna kollam ah konnen,ana ne illam ah en uyir illey nu puryumbothu,yen Raji vitutu pora".


Raji " sign panitiya". karthik gives the papers .Karthik " all the best,ne yeppavum santhosam ah irukkanum". Raji gets stunned but she moves out with tears.



karthik sits on his chair.His memories goes back to his happy days.He recollects everything .He sees the key left by Raji. karthik thinks " appo nan veetuku pogumbothu Raji irukka maata". He couldnt imagine the lonlyness .karthik cries out " i did mistake ,i deserve this punishment"



Evening


karthik walks inside his house.The emptiness haunts him.He puts the lights and finds no furnitures there.karthik thinks " Raji yellathyum eduthutu poital ah ". He checks his room and finds nothing .karthik gets confused.


He sits in his room and cries. some one touch his shoulders .vishnu asks " ithaney ne asaipata santhosam ". karthik gets surprised. vishnu" ne maritu varenu purinchuthu ,analum thappu pantomnu vetkam,unna unmaiya accept pana vidam ah thaduthuchu".


karthik hugs him and cries " am sorry da,ne kooda yenna purinchukala illey".vishnu " en kita pesavathu ,un kobatha viduva nu ninaichen,vidu yenna panrathu, ippovathu ne thirunthineye athu pothum". karthik cries out .vishnu consoles him.


karthik " yen things". vishnu " ivlo periya veetla ne thaniya irunthu,ninachu,ninachu kudigaran agurathuka,athan un things ah ,vera idathuku shift panten".karthik " yenga ". vishnu " va solren". karthik " ithu yenna cover". vishnu " un per ku kovil ah archanai pananunum,ne kulichutu traditional dress ah potutu va".


karthik " ippo yethuku". vishnu " solratha sei da". Karthik gets dressed up and goes with vishnu


vishnu stops near a house. karthik " yenathu ivlo periya veedu". vishnu " athu vanthu un appa unakaga vangunathu,25 th anniversary appo koduka ninacharu". karthik cries. vishnu " dei dei alatha mothal ah va".


karthik goes near the door. vishnu " ippo main door open agum wait". Door opens karthik gets surprised to see his MIL,FIL,his friends,his relatives all in hall.

karthik gets confused. meesai comes and says " onnum illa mapla,kovilpatti la irunthu oru ponnu,ungala pathi yellam therinchum,atha yellam maranthutu inni la irunthu pudhusa ungala kalyanam panni valanumnu asaipatta ".


k's chithapa comes " athan da ,yenga maruga ponnu asaipadiye kalyanam innaiku,intha veetla than ne santhosam ah valanumnu un parents asaipatanga".


karthik gets confused "ana nan yeppadi". Raji comes and says " dei romba late panatha,intha jewels yellam weight ah irukku kalatanum".


karthik gets happy.He pinched vishnu to check whether its a dream or not. vishnu shouts " un kaiya killi paru da ,paavi valikuthu". All laughs out.


karthik " sorry".Raji slaps him " itha munnavey solrathu ku yenna da". Karthik " romba torture paniten,manipu ketka kooda thaguthi illa".Raji " unmaithan antha karthik ah divorce paniten".


karthik " sorry Raji". Raji " thappa unarntha,anbu matum niranchurka ,intha karthik ah than nan love panen,ippo kalyanamum panika poren". karthik smiles and hugs raji.


vishnu shouts "dei dei nanga yellam irukkom". karthik leaves raji. Meesai " thapu panumbothu vitu pogam ah ,thappa puryavaikrathum, thappa unarum bothu manichu yethukram than,unmai ana anbu ku adipadai ".


karthik " sorry mama".Raji " nama valanumnu athayum mama um ninacha veedu,ingaye namma puthu valkai thodaratum". karthik " thanks raji".

Raji " karthik ,ithu puthu life ,puthu journey past la nadantha yentha vishyathayum nama pesa koodathu promise". karthik holds her hands and says " promise".


karthik asks " nijam ah bayanthuten theryum ah antha thanimai koduramanathu". vishnu " atha purya vaika than divorce drama " . Karthik " thanks".

meesai " mapla idea koduthathu nan,thanks unga friend ka". karthik hugs him and says " thanks pa".

Meesai & Raji gets happy.


vishnu " sari sari nalla neram mudyarthukula seekram,thali ya kattu da". karthik ties the knot and they begins the happy journey of life again


friends hope i didnt bored you all

Very nice daffi :)... at least KR united and was nice to see nice house and evryone there

thanks for OS :).

Originally posted by: Devino

Good try pa...

Thnk u so much

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Very nice daffi :)... at least KR united and was nice to see nice house and evryone there

thanks for OS :).

Thanks a lot

superb os pavi sis👏👏, kr soopera serthuvechittenga 😛😉,seeriallayum idhe mari kr serthu vecha nalla irukum 😳 but indha director panna maattare 😭😭 do write more OS

Super OS pa. Inda mari naduntha santhosama irukum . Thanks pa.

Originally posted by: arunabi

superb os pavi sis👏👏, kr soopera serthuvechittenga😛😉,seeriallayum idhe mari kr serthu vecha nalla irukum😳 but indha director panna maattare😭😭 do write more OS

Thanks aruna . lolz director appadi panta aprom story yenagrathuu

Very nice story, Pavi..

Very nice thought for the Promo...

thapu panumbothu vitu pogam ah ,thappa puryavaikrathum, thappa unarum bothu manichu yethukram than,unmai ana anbu ku adipadai ".- Enakku piditha varigal...

wow... so nice pavi... enna oru senti... idhellam namba director kaadhula vizhuma??

Originally posted by: Rajee71

Very nice story, Pavi..

Very nice thought for the Promo...

thapu panumbothu vitu pogam ah ,thappa puryavaikrathum, thappa unarum bothu manichu yethukram than,unmai ana anbu ku adipadai ".- Enakku piditha varigal...

Thnk u raasi