End Office - Director :Task Fortune Message posted pg 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii Everyone!


#Raspberrycookie #Fortunes #End Office


Don't forge to hit the like button and comment people! Looking forward to it :P


Okay so here is my scenario for ending Office : -

Assuming that this week's promo scene came on Thursday and that was the freeze... Karthik read the letter from Susan...On Friday...


Part 1 - Scene 1


Raji is trying extremely hard to make Karthik realize the situation by saying that letter is trash because it hurts people including him. Karthik slaps her saying that she is trash comparing to Susan!! He walks out!

Part 1 - Scene 2

Raji sees herself sweating and gasping for breath... She is being paranoid and she feels her whole world spinning with Susan, Karthik, their affection, Raji, Karthik, their affection and Karthik slapping her and comparison all flashes in her mind and she is siting with tears thinking that she will lose Karthik soon... She looks at her loving Karthik's photo and starts whimpering...

Part 1 - Scene 3

"Wake up darling!" Karthik wakes up Raji and hands her coffee with a sweet peck on her cheeks. Raji is confused and asks if Karthik has forgiven her. Karthik says "Nee enna Chellam pannine? For me to forgive u? Stop joking and Susan called to inform that our whole team is going to Thailand for a week because we have got both the Target and Dewa project. So unnoda passport and mine should be given to Susan today at work. Raji is stumbled and is shocked! She says "Karthik? Susan said that? Didn't she umm pass away? U were mad at me right? And we lost both the projects correct? Enna nee ippadi solre?" Karthik "what nonsense is this Raji? Did u have a nightmare? I think so... Loosu!" Raji finally seems relieved and has a smile on her face an nods to Karthik saying that it was all only a dream. She gives him a hug and they both get ready for work.

Part 2 - Scene 1 - In Office

"Hi Laxshmi" says Karthik. "Hey!" Laxshmi said surprised that Karthik is talking to her... "Eppadi Karthik? U r talking to me! I thought u were mad at me and Vishnu.." "Adha nambitiyaa Laxshmi?" Vishnu comes in with Raji... "Enna da solre?? Raji do u know anything?" Laxshmi asks in confusion. Raji nods her head saying nope and she looks confused as well. "U two are such fools" Karthik says laughing! Raji and laxshmi are puzzled... Vishnu and Karthik hug sooo close and say it was all practice for a drama hosted in Thailand by Nettech! Vishnu gives his trademark laugh... Raji and Laxahmi are so delighted and everyone had grinning faces :D They all left for a treat at a restaurant to celebrate their happiness!

Part 3 - Scene 1

Two weeks later in Bangkok...At a restaurant where the team is relishing Pad Thai...

"Semmaiyaa irriku la machan?" Vishnu asks.. "Amazing seriously" says Karthik. Vishnu suddenly snaps a pic of Laxshmi and says u r soo cute Latchumi! Everyone laughs at them while Laxahmi blushes. Karthik winks at Raji and texts her I love u... Raji sees that and she blushed and tries to kick karthik's foot but instead on Vishnu. All figure it out and starts teasing KR. Zoom out from the window facing them and the screen freezes showing all of them happily laughing. The End! :P


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teddy... 👏 👍🏼 😳

awesome yaar.. !! loved it ❤️ wonderful writing..

took me (us) to a different world from office

Final shot... zoom out from the window... screen freeze... wow !! sooo nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey super like the way you have united the four, only confusion is susan alive in your story??
But loved it hahaha especially Vishnu and Karthi's scene😃 Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ha ha.. Super..
better.. Indha maadhiri Innaikke mudikka sollunghappa...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Appo karthik appa n amma ambothana ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowow teddy if this page seen by the office crew they copy it to serial err superb really hard of to you👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice script yar if office met with script they copy it
Nice writing hat's off to you 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammukuty

Wowow teddy if this page seen by the office crew they copy it to serial err superb really hard of to you👍🏼



eduthaa nallaa dhaan irukkum.. but avangalukku budget problem irukke.. 😃

orey veettaye different angle la kaatturavangalaache 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woohhh such an easy breezy episode and i loved it 😳 Oh how i wish the serial went on like this - simple yet interesting. I got carried away and was hoping for more 😆

Thanks - excellent ending :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ada,super...super ending,sush.👏...i like it very much...

ippadi mattum serial ponna,semaya irukum😛

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