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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi friends read it and give me ur feed back...

Rewind...

Memories...

Memories are precious...for those who cherish

But for him memories were his night mare

Memories brings smile to one's heart..

For him memories burns his heart..

He wants to change...he wants to erase..he wants to take back

Those painful memories...

But he couldn't change the events that happened..

He couldn't erase the deeds he had done..

He couldn't take back the words he had uttered...

Perhaps if he had been given a second change...

He would rebuilt everything which he had demolished..

He wants to live the life which he was ruined

He wants to smile which he had forgotten long back..

He wants to own his love which he had disowned ...

He wants her now...whom had been forbidden forever...

How much he wished if he could rewind everything...

Ray of hope...

Lost world

She was searching for her lost world...

She never knew that it doesn't exist forever..

She had been cursed to live loveless life...

Years of wait had been unanswered...

Endless longing had been unnoticed...

Her unspoken words ...remained unheard till end...

Life of trust had been broken...

She wants to forget those memories full of despair...

That had bewitched her beyond repair...

Her hopes were diminished with time...

She had shown care ,she got ignorance in return..

She had given heart...it had been crushed cruelly...

She had offered love...it was rejected out rightly ...

She believed all will be fine one day...

But she was tired of searching that nonexistent "one day".

Her lost world still remains in the darkness...

Everything finished for her...except for the little ray of hope...

Hello friends are u wondering what is this!!!!

This is the start of my new story...

Irukaradha modhalla ozhungaa yezhudhu di nu neenga solradhu yenakku kekkudhu...

But dhideernnu ippadi oru thought vandhu yennai paadaa paduthudhu..

My hands are itching to pen down this story...

It would be a SS only maximum 5 parts..

But I will continue with this ...based on ur response only..

If I get a good feed back then I will start this one..or else I will happily settle back with my ongoing ff only...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kala sis...ennathu ithu..innoru storyku basementa...superbbb👏👏...

haiya,haiya..jolly...neenga evalavu vena story write pannunga...naanga adha read panna aarvama irukom...adhuvum romba😆...

neenga mothalla ungala pathi ippadi feel panradha niruthunga...ok...athu pannanala engaluku podhum...

btw,the poem is very sweet n cute😉...

update pannungo,pannungo...naan wait panikittu iruken😃...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kala... Semma start... Please go ahead.. But we want both ur ff to be written and possibly even more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Kala sis , first I thought you are writing a poem but its another story. No matter how many story you write we are there to support you. Please go ahead , we are waiting!.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww...Kala..great news...please go ahead na...

As long as we are getting both the updates no issues for us..

Even if you start yet another one we'll be doubly ...no .no..triple ly happy...😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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by the way kala...your poems are superb and touchy...

where you hid your talents all these days...😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathya87

by the way kala...your poems are superb and touchy...


where you hid your talents all these days...😛😆

sathya,

neenga yenaiya vachi onnum comedy keemedy pannalaiye...😲😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Go for it Kala, me waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow ,kala sis ,i am egerly waiting for the FF..
the poems are really fabulous ...!!
looking forward for the update..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kalabhas

sathya,

neenga yenaiya vachi onnum comedy keemedy pannalaiye...😲😆😆


cha..cha...😉enna ipdi sollitinga kala..😆

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