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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
woww..lovely kala...šŸ¤—
The same pestering Raji..lolzz...Pavam karthik..epdi thaan samaalika porano...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super sister...
short & sweet a irukkušŸ˜›
Unga story layum Karthi kaadhal mannana?????????šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety16

that was indeed nice part Kalaa...
oh ho... kalyaanam aanaalum intha Karthik thirundhiya paadu illaiye😲
intha Social service enga kondu poyi vidapogutho😔

adutha part la Raji kitta dharma adi yaašŸ˜‰????


dharma adi yaa?????🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathya87

woww..lovely kala...šŸ¤—

The same pestering Raji..lolzz...Pavam karthik..epdi thaan samaalika porano...šŸ˜‰

yes sathya ,karthik nelamai kavalai kidam dhaan..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful updatešŸ‘šŸ˜³...kala sis...

adada,intha karthik innum angel pera vida mattana😔...kalyanam aagium...
that lipstick mark...ennava irukumošŸ˜•...
raji...ennathan karthik kenchi kaalula vilunthalum avana avalavu seekaram manika kodathu...and she should punish him for sure...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love you so much kala for this chapter..
I love karthik as always here too😳😳

Romba porumai avanukku...Eppo enna solli rajiaaa console panraanu pakkanum..

Only one feedback from me..Please make the update lil bit lengthy ma...Just suggestion...Other than that..love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anithu

Love you so much kala for this chapter..

I love karthik as always here too😳😳

Romba porumai avanukku...Eppo enna solli rajiaaa console panraanu pakkanum..

Only one feedback from me..Please make the update lil bit lengthy ma...Just suggestion...Other than that..love it

thank u ani,

it is short story ani,so romba lengthy aa irukaadhu ma,😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A small concern kala..
From first part to second part there was a non sync illaaa.

In first part he is searching raji and what happen to raji you didnt tell in part2 illaa??may be wrong..Please sollunga
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anithu

A small concern kala..

From first part to second part there was a non sync illaaa.

In first part he is searching raji and what happen to raji you didnt tell in part2 illaa??may be wrong..Please sollunga

that u will come to know in coming parts ani,story can't reveal all the knots in one part illaiyaa?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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here is the 3rd part of YYK,i have included tamil dialogues to give the better feel to the story,hope u all like it.😊


Yenge yenadhu kavidhai?

PART 3

Present

Karthik looked over his shoulder, that lipstick mark laughed at him. He raked his hair in frustration.

He could felt the pain of Raji while seeing this mark on his shirt.

He felt ashamed of himself to give that pain to her.

He put off his shirt in anger and threw it in a corner.

If what happened till then was a damage, what happened further was.. a total disaster.

The rest of the events flashed in to his mind, which increases his pain even more...

Flash back

He looked back at her accusing eyes and closed his eyes in remorse.

"Sorry Raji, it's a friendly hug only, vera onnum illai, out of gratitude she hugged me, nothing more than that" he explained hurriedly...

"yaaru?"she asked sternly...

"Raji ,naan dhaan solren la,its nothing ma"

"naan yaaru nu ketaen?"she was very adamant.

"Angel" he replied in a low voice..

"I knew it, friendly hug...aa?adhaan avaloda lipstick mark and perfume yellaathaiyum poosi kittu vandhirukkiya?"she asked sarcastically...

Before she would say anything he interrupted...

"Don't run ur imagination Raji, can't u trust me for once? naan yenna adhukku kooda worth illaiyaa?"

He asked out of frustration, he pissed off with this question answer session..

Why always she enquires him like an accused,

"Stop it Karthik... what have u asked? can't u trust me for once naa?

It's not the matter of trust you fool, it's a matter of care and concern.

" U never cared for me, and didn't have any concern for my feelings as well.

U never valued my thoughts, that's the problem here, do u understand that?"

She started pouring her heart out.

"yenakku angel ah pidikaadhunu unakku nallaa theriyum, irundhaalum adhaukku oru value um kedaiyaadhu,nee un ishtathukku avakooda bike la pova,drop pannuva ,avaloda lipstick perfume yellaathaiyum poosittu varuve ,appadi thane?"she was on fire...

"She is in my team, I can't avoid her totally, adhu unakkum theriyum, but still u would fight for every small things naa, I can't help?

He too started giving back

"Avala yen unnoda team la yedutha?" She asked the next question.

"Enough Raji don't start again, I am really fed up with ur tantrums"

"Oh,appadi aagi pochaa, ippo naan unakku aluthu poitenaa? idhukku dhaan yenna kalyaanam panniniyaa?"

"Yendaa kalyaanam panninomnu nenaika vachidaadha Raji"he reverted back..

"Ippo andha Angel dhaan unakku mukkiyamaa poitaalaa?aduthavaloda husbandku alaiyaraa?

"Podum Raji,ippa yedhukku thevai illaama avala izhukara?

"Avala sonaa unakku yen valikkudhu?"she asked suspiciously..

"she is nothing to me, adhu unakke theriyum, chummaa sandai podanumnu yedhu venaa pesaadha.." he was losing his patience.

"She is nothing aa? Adhu yeppadi mudiyum? Ava unnoda first love..andha paasam illaama pogumaa?"

"Kadavule, u r impossible Raji...ippa unakku yenna dhaan prachanai ?"

"Nee Angel oda pesaradhu, pazhagaradhu yedhuvume yenakku pidikalai.."She clearly stated her disliking...

But Karthik was nowhere seemed to be understanding her feelings...

"Ore team la irundhu kittu,orediyaa appadi yaaraiyum avoid panna mudiyaadhu"

"Appo avala vera team ku maathu"she suggested next idea...

"Raji...Try to understand, don't get confused between personal and professional life, Angel oda yeankku irukaradhu, purely professional relationship, more than that she is nothing to me, u r my everything, purinjiko Raji..." porumaiya izhuthu pidichi,he explained to her...

"You are my everything nu vaayla sonnaa podhumaa?nee panradhu yedhuvum adhai prove panra maathiri illaiye?" she was not ready to be convinced..

"Yenna pannanum unakku?"he asked

"Andha Angel ah vera team ku anupu,avala paarkaadha ,pesaadha..."she said very strictly...

"By saying this u r insulting me Raji, yen mela nambikai illaiyaa?"he asked in disappointment.

"Nambikai illaama dhaan unna love panraenaa? Naan unnai suspect pannala, andha A ngel kooda nee pesaradhu yenakku pudikalai,avlo dhaan"

"Yen pudikalai unakku?"he was getting mad on her..

"Yen ippadi adam pudikara Karthik?ava unnoda Ex ,appadi irukkum bodhu,neenga pesaradha yennaala yeppadi casual aa yeduthukka mudiyum?" finally she told her problem..

But karthik didn't understand the possessiveness and slight insecurity of Raji.

"Avala team ah vittu maatharadhukku idha reason aa solla mudiyaadhu Raji" He was not ready to listen..

"Vera yedhaavadhu solliko,I don't care. Yenakku pidikalai ngara oru reason unakku podhaadhaa?"

"Avala team change paninaa yenakke yen mela nambikai illaadha maathiri aagidum Raji, her presence doesn't affect me in any sense...podhumaa...?" He ensured her clearly...

"Ore teamla irundhaa ava unakku route pottu kittae dhaan irupaa,adhanaala team maatha sonnaa,ippadi oraediyaa adam pidikara..." she couldn't get that why he was so adamant ...same was the case with him ,he too didn't get that , why she was so adamant in Angel's issue.

She looked him with hopeful eyes, but he seemed to be unshaken.

"Nee ippadi adam pidikaradha paarthaa yenakku vera onnu thonudhu...First love ah marakka mudiyaadhunnu solluvaanga ,adhu correct dhaan pola..nee innamum Angel ah nenaichikittu dhaan irukiyaa?

That's it ...he had lost all his patience ...

"Kili pillai ku solra maathiri padichi,padichi sollitu iruken,un mara mandai la onnume yeraadhaa?

Ippa yenna dhaan venum unakku?Ammandi, naan innum Angel ah nenaichi kittu dhaan iruken,podhumaa?

Avala yennaala marakka mudiyala,indha jenmathula marakkavum maten,ippa shandhoshamaa?"

This is what u want to hear from me for so long ,right?

Then listen, yes I love Angel, I still love her..is that enough for u?

Without the second thought he spilled those words out of anger and frustration.

Later he realized that what blunder he had done , he bit his tongue in guilt...

He looked at Raji to console her, but the word struck in his mouth by seeing Raji's face..it showed extreme pain and anguish .

He tried to talk..

But she raised her hand, indicating him to stop...

"I had enough...no more confessions pls" she was at the verge of crying...

"Ipavaadhu unmaiya othukitiye thanks..."she ran towards the bedroom, all crying,

he followed her, but she shut the door hard on his face...

He called her name and banged the door many times, but she didn't respond..

Finally he kicked the door in frustration...And fell on to the couch with the thud...

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