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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Short and crispy aa irakatham nu oru buildup taan lolz 😆 Am not good in writing lengthy ones adhan .. but i promise to put up 3 chapters daily as its short nu ..

thanks for the comments. 😉

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crazzymoon

@crazzymoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Short and lovely update with lot of suspenses, nice update Ratna.

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: hopper_ocean
Short and crispy aa irakatham nu oru buildup taan lolz 😆 Am not good in writing lengthy ones adhan .. but i promise to put up 3 chapters daily as its short nu ..

thanks for the comments. 😉

So another update on the way?

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hopper_ocean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Aug month archive pannitu iruken maa anithu... will post the 3rd chapter before i head to bed daa 😛

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow ratna kalakkal suspense .very curious to know what happend update asap next part

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Smiles-20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Ooohhh wow interesting FF Ratna!!

Waiting waiting waiting for next parts.

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hopper_ocean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

CHAPTER 3

Raji is unable to sleep. She keeps toasting left and right. Wakes up and walks around couple of times yet she is unable to sleep. Flashback ...

Susan comes and ask Raji if she loves Karthik. Raji is shock with this sudden question and looks beside at Karthik. Susan "come on raji, that day i asked you and nee taan sattiyama nothing between us nu sonnei.." Karthik is shock and looks at Raji. With his eyes he ask Raji if that is true .. Raji thiru thiru mulucufhy and puts her head down. Susan goes on "Sorry Karthik, unnaku teriyuma nu ennaku teriyadhu but i started to like you. Don't be shock but i rather be open about this. HR irundhu unga rendhu peerum romance sonnanga adhan naan Raji kitta kethan. Ava illa nu sonna. But inniki taan Lakshimi sonna Raji and Karthik loving nu.. naan naan appadiyae shock ayithen teriyuma..Loosu raji idhulama poisolluvae." Raji turns and looks side way at Karthik who is glaring at her. Karthik "susan nenga poi enmela. Sorry susan, ennaku teriyamalae i might have given you that impression pola. Enna mannichirunga please..:"

"Loosa nee karthik, Everyone has rights to have feelings but adhukunu you cannot be accepting everyone's love. All the best to both of you.." Susan smiles and leaves. Vishnu beside Karthik "kanna oru laddu pocha" hahahaha nu Vishnu laughing. Karthik turns and glare at him "Seri daa macha moodithu velaiya pakuren" says Vishnu 😆 Karthik turns to Raji who immediately puts her head down. "Sattiyama unnakum ennakum onnu illaiya Raji?" ask Karthik. Raji is silent. "Sollu Raji..." pushes Karthik. "Nee panna sattiyam .. adhu sattiyama vae irakathum. Naan varen" Karthik leaves in anger. "Karthik Karthik.. " Raji tries to call him but he walks away. She turns and looks at Vishnu who looks pavama at Raji.

Raji comes back from flashback. She looks at the time 4.45am. Feeling tired and restless she walks back to her bed and tries to force to sleep.

Laksh comes out and notice Karthik still sitting by the balcony. "Tungavaralaiya Karthik?" ask laksh. Karthik turns and just remains silent. Laksh goes and puts her hand on his shoulder. "Inga vandhu irundhu olunga tungaradhu illa. You need rest. illathi you will fall sick. Come lets go sleep..." Laksh pulls Karthik in flashback mode ...

"Yenna karthik, laksh amma unna mapilai mapilai nu solluranga? Nee een pesama irukae?" ask Raji. Karthik looks at her and sys "Nee taan pesamae irukae Raji. Ippo sollu nee enna virumbarae nu... " Raji turns away. Karthik "ippadi silenta how many months years are you going to be Raji?? I cannot be like this. I need to think of my future. Nee illama naan indha kadhal lae taniya sumake mathen Raji. Matta lovers madhiri naan taniya irupen nu nee yosikathey. Andha kadhal manasu lae oru orema irakum. Ennaku laksh amma sollaradhu taan sariya tonadhu..." Karthik walks away. Raji still remains silent.

Back to Present : Next morning door bell rings. Laksh opens and finds Soundarya standing there ... "hiii lakshsss.." Soundarya comes in and gives laksh a friendly hug.

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey thats great ratna...You have well brought good scenes from current situation..So karthi married lakshmi??😆😆

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

very nice Ratna...

continuation of our office serial from these days' events sounds interesting.

Is that baby soundarya's???

Waiting for the next part...

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suhasini

@Suha95

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

nice part ratna akka...

flashback scenes lam ippa current ofice scenes...
nice ...

waiting for the next part...

soundarya ingayum vanthutangalaa...???😡