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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow! So many updates.. will read them soon!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏 way to go my girl!!! Excellent excellent and super super story daa usha 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
My god!! story about 5 gals .. wonderful usha 👍🏼👍🏼 i like each and every way of each past was told on the first chapter and now the recent ones 😳😳😳 the love at first sight 😳😳
Eagerly waiting for the next one hun 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thx everyone for your comments keep on posting them.....or press the like button. Here is my next installment.

Chapter 6

T looked at him with disgust and walked back into the hall. The bride and groom were in the reception hall dressed up smartly and traditionally. The bride wore a Pink sari with white stones. The groom wore a black suit with a pink shirt. T and R took their photos and gave their presents to the couple.

During the dance celebration, T left the party. She felt very uneasy to see him and sneak out like a mouse through the back way. As she went out the reception, R was stood in front of her, "I see darling, you are leaving the party sooner than I expected."

"Listen you cheat, I got some other unfinished work to complete." T explained.

A by passer approached them and said, "Your husband you be happy to have you."

T was fuming and gave a stern look at him and R who smiled, "See god has told you and me are a match."

"You shut up!" T walked until, R grabbed her hand and took to his flat.

Once arriving into the flat, the rooms were very beautiful and simple. T was astonished to see his house. There was more shock once, she went inside his bedroom. It was the type of room she always dreamt of. Large, beautifully decorated consisting a romantic feel. There was a lovely double bed decorated in black sheets and white pillow. Before she could admire the room properly, she was covered with a black opaque cloth. R managed to have some red roses which, he had brought this morning and placed it onto the sides of his desk. This was very neat and organised unlike T her room was completely the opposite. He opened the blindfold which, he covered T who was smiling continuously.

He rotated her halfway, grabbed her from the hips. He started kissing her back and T had closed her eyes and fallen into his trap. He kissed her lightly onto her soft lips. T pushed him backwards only to hear a bombshell R asking, "Will you stay with me for the night?"

T was gobsmacked hearing this, "Listen, R all of these happen after marriage. I don't want to rush into things. I barely know you well. How can I spend one night with you?"

"That's what I like about you, are very strong headed, understanding person, modern and traditional."

T kissed him saying, "You know what, I love you don't know why? I love you loads and want to marry you?"

"Since when?" R sarcastically asked

T smiled, "Ever since, you approached me. I loved the way you approached me. You're a gentleman."

R smiled, "When you are ready to settle is when we will get married."

T hugged him and walked off.

PRESENT DAY

T was smiling to her self when, her children came.

Anita is her youngest child studying in reception commented, "Mummy is day dreaming about Mickey Mouse."

T smiled, "No sweety, I'm not thinking about Mickey Mouse but, dreaming about grown up things."

Suji, her 10 year old daughter smiled, "What is this grown up thing?"

"That I shouldn't tell…it's for big people only." T smiled

R came teasing her, "Mummy is dreaming about me."

The kids laughed. T chased R around the flat hitting him. A and S came running behind mummy, A giggled, "I knew you were thinking about Daddy."

"T hugged her girls; R hugged T and kissed his children's.

Edited by usha_pooja - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

great work usha👏👏👏 i really like your writing. wow...u really know how to write love scenes a 😲😲☺️ i think i might be too young to read this😆 just kidding i loooove this story so far!!! It's just begining though.. so kinda slow with revealing everyone's past. waiting for more😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
only today i saw ur FF ush😃


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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
wonderful first 2 chapters ush👏

u r showing diff faces of women
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
hmm interesting twists with mystery man thrown in 😎

chap 3 & 4👏

sorry my comments r short




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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice 5 the chap

slap slap😆

this R is adamant

wonderful nice family of T & R👏

Gr8 going ush keep it coming👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Usha, its really great.. u present it well..

I am trying to match the characters to some faces.. imagination dhan... apadiye unga story enoda mindla odudhu...

thanks for the FF... Feel relaxed while reading this...

keep going..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey friends, thanks for your lovely comments...keep on posting them or even press the like button. The next chapter is added here so enjoy:

Chapter 7

Next day, Neema was preparing for her fashion shoot for Topshop. It was her first ever international shoot for her. Her agent was delighted who was encouraging her to do extremely well therefore, more international projects will come along and she will progress into Superstar status.

The shoot was situated in the big mansion; N was assigned to dress up in elegant clothing. One of them included a nice purple dress which, stretched across the floor like a bride's dress. The mansion was very big, old modern with historical pictures of the king or freedom fighters. The lights were indulged in crystals which sparkled across the halfway. One photographer was telling her to pose elegant. Few of the shots had her using nice purple and white flowers which, nicely fits with her dress. Few of the shots were outside the garden that was like a maze and had nice white big and beautiful flowers. It was Popping out like eyes ready to drink blood.

After the photo shoot, N had phoned Tarun up,

"Hello, Gorgeous how was your photo shoot?" T asked

N smiled, "Thanks for the tips, it has benefited me a lot."

"What's up?" T smiled as he kissed her through the phone,

N blushed, "Thanks, when you're coming to meet me."

T smiled, "Honey, I really cant today as I have a dance programme to conduct."

"You and your dance programme." N complained, "When will you see me. It has been ages since, I met up with you."

"It's my tight schedule well; you can come over tonight and spend the night at mine house." T replied

N said, "OKAY! That's fine with me. I see you tonight." She kissed him on the phone.

"Remember to bring all necessary things with you." T smiled.

N replied, "Like what?"

"Ladies items! Get me!" T joked

N laughed, "Course I will definitely, it's a must for me."

N put the phone down and smiled.

Meanwhile, Jyothi was at home relaxing and enjoying the life of being a single mother and a divorcee. Arun was playing on his Nintendo will'which his mother gave him for his birthday. J was joining in the fun and A was happy to see his mother smiling for a very long time:

A: "Mummy, it's so nice to see you smiling for a very long time."

J: "Thanks da." (She hugs him).

A: "Mummy, I want to see you happy everyday."

J: "Where shall we go today?"

A: "I want to stay with you at home."

J: "No da'I want to take you out somewhere'you tell me where."

A: "Your choice ma' your choice is my choice but not grown ups like clubbing. There will be people like appa and other bad girls who took appa away."

J: "No da'clubbing is very bad. I will take you shopping, beach and then we will have ice creams. Only you and I are going no one else."

A (Jumped up): "Yippee'lets go now!"

Edited by usha_pooja - 16 years ago

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