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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome new chapter..👏👏👏 oohh wow.. love stories eh😉😆 im eagerly waiting to ind out who this myserious person is too.. 😛
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vow 👏. superb.
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Thanks for your comments, keep on posting comments and it will encourage me to post more chapters. Or at least press the thank you button.

Chapter 4

As Viji was dialling a number, the bell began to ring 'ding' 'dong'. V was annoyed as she wanted to phone someone but, needed to answer the door. She walked to the door as the bell rang constantly and it got louder and louder like babies were screaming at a lonely road. The room was a creamy pink with wall pictures showing symbols of love and babies. The sofa was pitch as black with white soft, cuddle and smooth cushions.

When V opened the door, she couldn't find anyone at the door. She screamed at the top of her voice, "I am going to get this dirty and pathetic man wherever he is." Until, a paper came to the floor saying:

"Viji, you look pretty when you scream.

Viji, you look pretty in when you laugh.

Viji, you look pretty in any clothes.

Marry me so we could have a future together."

V got so frustrated she knocked the door so hard until, Twinkle came after she heard a loud noise.

"V what happened ma?", Twinkle questioned

V asked T to come inside. She was shocked to see the transformation that occurred in V's house. "V, your house is very beautiful. Did you make any changes recently for anyone?"

"No way, I'm very messy and disorganised." V said who later explained the events that happened in the house.

"Wow V da!!!!!! I wish Rajesh did this before I got married to him." Blushed T

V fumed at T, "You find it funny. You know I don't have any one who loves me."

"Yaar… I know da but, however, have you ever fallen in love?" T questioned

V nodded, "I have but, there's no chance as he is a very timid and arrogant person. I don't see him doing this. Plus he got engaged to someone else while I was with him."

Another voice came, "He may not have been married. He could of changed and wants to live with you."

"Neema, when did you turn up? I was about to call you." V smiled

N replied, "Yes I saw your miss call that's why I came to your house after dropping Tarun home."

Yes, Tarun is whom N is currently having an affair for the last two years. He is currently separated from his wife but, has refused to divorce her.

"Neema….." T began; however, she was interrupted by V who was more bothered about this admirer.

"What's happened to your rooms?" N asked in shock, "I never seen a clean room ever since, you were at uni when you was with…ahem."

T looked at V who looked at N moaning, "Now cut it out….its the past. He's a cheat. He's a double liar. He has no self respect and value."

"T…just ignore V she still loves him that's why 7 years on she hasn't got married yet. She is devoted to her job, houselife and her friend Harish. I tried so many attempts to set her up however, she is stubborn."

"Have you tried to setting up with Harish? He is a descent man who will keep her happy?" T questioned

N smiled, "I tried asking but wouldn't reply back but keeps becoming shy."

"I can see V's potential romance." Laughed T and N while, V chased T around the house with a stick.

As V ran around the house, she didn't realise there was a banana on the floor and R was coming to her house. N jumped over the banana skin however, V placed her foot onto the banana and skidded towards H who didn't see V screaming. He grabbed V and together they fell off the floor. V looked up at H who was very tall, pleasant, very gentleman and always respected everyone. Any girls would of love to have a husband like him. V looked at H who picked her up and carried her into the sofa.

N and T smiled, "I can see some potential here." Said T

"Don't worry V will marry H and I will make this happen. Forget her ex lover. He is totally non sense and better not come."

Edited by usha_pooja - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haaaaaiiii this just keeps getting better and better😲🤣 oh wow.. viji is still.. it seems like she cant really forget that old guy anyway. aww.. and neema arriving like that. it really is like they're all family na😃 but uffffffff... how i hate girls lik her too😡 stupid guy she's having affair with too.. how can he even love her. he doesnt want to get a divorce from his wife😳 i like this harish😃 yes they will get married too🤣 oh yeah and one thing shanthy, maybe at the end of the sentences, you could put who said them as sometimes it gets hard to figure out who said it from the many characters😆 great part👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow..this is getting better and better for each chapter you post da Tweenie....good job👏👏

Tarun should first get divorce before hanging arounf with other woman, N should be carefull..T can just leave her any moment,

Will that guy from Vijis past turn up..?😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow... A great story... Usha, u have made it so lively.... Great going..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Finally i got to read the last three chapters in one go.. ...
Usha kutty 👏👏........you're a wonderful writer daa 👏👏.... i could simply picture everything you wrote.....
looks like all the girls are having issues.... 😭😭......but i'm really amazed to see the closeness of the 5 friends... looking forward to know more about each of the girl's journey daa .....
eagerly waiting for the next chapter daa 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thx friends for your lovely comments....keep them coming. Otherwise, press the like button. Heres my next installment:

Chapter 5

Twinkle and Neema left Viji's house and went back to their respectable house. T came home smiling to herself where a young dashing man called, "Honey your back home. Where have you been?" he spoke in a strong American accent and kissed her.

"Rajesh I just went to V's house and you never know what happen? Let me make you a cup of tea and we will talk." T smiled

R laughed, "There's no need as I cooked us and the children dinner and made us a cup of tea."

"You're a star. You're the still romantic Rajesh whom I loved since I met you 15 years ago." T blushed

"How can I forget that day? Please love don't remind me." He said as he grabbed her.

Their living room was decorated with a blend of Indian and American styles. This is because R is half Indian and half American. He was born and breed in the States but, came here when he had completed his law degree in hope of a job. He was lucky enough to meet his uncle, who was a top criminal lawyer and R joined him as his junior lawyer.

Flashback

It was one year since; R had secured a place as a qualified lawyer and started work independently. He remanded close with his uncle and always went to him for guide, advise and decision.

He is close with him from a young age, he encouraged him to become a lawyer because, deep inside he knew he's someone who can work with law. R always taught after his parents and 3 older sisters, his uncle was his perfect role model. Hence, he decided to become a lawyer after his previous girlfriend had dumped him because she was caught cheating on his sister's ex fianc. He came to UK to get away from her and wanted to make a fresh start. His uncle made arrangements for him to accommodate and begin a new life in the UK.

It was October, when he was given an invitation for his best friend's wedding. He was dressed up very smart in black with a black shiny tie. The wedding hall was gigantic decorated in balloons, tables were presented very traditional and candles were lit everywhere. He came inside the reception hall, no one there expect for a young and beautiful girl, who was wearing a black sleeveless and backless sari with black and silver accessories. He came and sat next to her and looked hazily at her eyes which, was hazel and saw her bare skin. He took his camera and took a picture of her. Then he touched her back, "Darling, I believe we are destined to be together."

"Excuse me! Who the think you are? You ain't my husband." She walked off furiously into another room.

As she walked off, she accidentally left a paper which had a name in there. You could hear the feet anklets ringing continuously. R shouted out," Twinkle, wait up.", Rajesh chased after her.

T didn't looked pleased, "How do you know my name?"

"Here's the evidence!" R smiled

T blushed but was fuming slapped him across the face and walked off. He smiled saying, "She is the one whom I marry. I wouldn't let her marry someone else. She's mine."

T looked back and walked to him asking, "Why are you still here?"

"I want to marry you." R sarcastically replied.

"Oh really! Don't even convince me?" T moaned

"I can seduce and make you fall in love with me." R smiled

T looked and asked, "Go and charm me. Let me see if I can fall to your charms"

R smiled, "You're ready for the challenge."

"Yes'I can bet you wouldn't." T laughed

R smiled, "I will bet you will love and marry me."

R grabbed T's and started kissing her slowly which, became passionate. T was taken aback shocked to see she has been actually seduced by this young and elegant man, "I cannot believe you did this to me."

T slapped him but this time, with her shoes across his face and walked off. He smiled and yelled, "Twinkle'I know you have fallen in love with me however, you deny this."

Edited by usha_pooja - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Usha kutty, omg this is my fav chapter thus far daa..........awww 😳😳... love at first sight for Rajesh....... very gutzy guy indeed...even after getting slapped twice he was firm about one thing that is to get Twinkle 😳..... hmmm i'm pretty sure Twinkle fell for him when he started to put the challenge into action..and hence the second slap 😆😆...
awww i wanna read more daa.😛.....eagerly waiting for the next one daa chellom...........keep em coming 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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adada😲 two slaps.. and one of them with shows🤣 hahaha.. yes i see.. love at first sight for him 😉 thats good though.. the marriage lasted 15 years and they have kids and rajesh is ver nice hubby na 😳 great update usha. looking forward to reading more.

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