NiBir TS : Snow White - Twist In The Tale *Epilogue up pg 25* (25/10) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

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Finally Unres🤣

Read the prologue & part1 together😉

Prologue padke toh mujhe laga vo bachi ki mumma Nishu hai & papa Kabir...Nisha apni beti ko uski aur Kabir ki luv story sunaegi😳

But part 1😲😲
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Ritesh-Kirti??😲...lile really🤣🤣

Yaar tere updates unpredictable hoti hai🤣🤣

Mujhe kuch nhi sochna🤣🤣

Just update soon🤣🤣

So sorry for late comment😭

Interesting concept. Carried a very good suspense till the end. Awesomely written.

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Anmol tu nai toh snow white ka gender hi change kar diya🤣

Superb ending 👏
Loved this ts ❤️

Viraj 😡 male gender ka chudail nikla 😆

Nibir bonding was lovely 😳

Beautifully written 👏

Ab epilogue bhi de de mere waale scene dekar 😉 please 😃

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Interesting concept. Carried a very good suspense till the end. Awesomely written.

Continue soon😃

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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Superb update 👏
And shocking also 😲

KiRi ka jodi 😲 i was like 😕 kyu nibir kyu nahi 😆 miss cheater 😈

Hate viraj 😡 ek number ka j hai 🤣

Thank god kabir bach gaya

But nisha aur uske cousins as dwarf 🤣

Update soon


P.S- Oh madam ab toh karde update ek main aur ek tu please 😃

[Quote=ILoveToRead.]Fantastic story

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

This is holding my interest more after coming to know that the child is of Ritesh Kirti and not Nisha Kabir😆😆 and that's so because in the line: sab baat karte hai... Dolly mausi, sukku mama, umesh mama sab sab baat karte hai " said girl
Kirti was missing so my mind had popped this thing honestly🤣
Coming to Nisha Kabir :-
Kabir's (Snowwhite😆) part is really good and his character awesome
Waiting for prince charming(Nisha)

Yeh toh bohot dhamakedaar aur twistdaar bana 😕 My brain has completely turned haha kya suspense tha yaar but I really loved it 😆👏 Awesome work and keep writing! 😳

[Quote=...Shibu...]Awesome 👍🏼