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I wonder how you do this Mansi !!!!
Each time I sit down to put forth my views on your story and I m at a loss of words😳😳😳
I think you are partly to blame for my laziness in writing comments for u guys😆Writing each comment for you is a task cz it is very difficult to express what your stories make me feel
Now coming to the drabble 😊
Firstly love how you have experimented with your style of writing here😳😳😳
I know for a fact that you are more comfortable in writing long stories or long shots so I must say that you have a tremendous job in conveying your thoughts in such few words here👏👏👏
Beautiful drabble Mansi👏👏👏
Such a heart rendering story😳
Love every bit and aspect of it❤️😳
Love the way you introduced us to the two souls clinging to each other in painThe setting was beautifully described👏👏
Each emotion and nuance was put forth in a such a poetic manner that all you wanted to do was to give a bone crushing hug to our Nibir😳🤗
On one hand you couldnt help but feel Nishu's pain whose resolve to go away from her first love was breaking seeing Kabir in pain❤️ while on the other hand, your heart went out to Kabir who was clinging to Nishu, pleading her to not leave him while he still couldnt fathom why he was in so much pain😳❤️
Loved the last part especially the last few lines❤️
All in all, a perfect drabble which although does make your heart wrench in pain initially, but by the end leaves you smiling❤️
Anupamaa
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