NIBIR DRABBLE- FIRST LOVE - Page 2

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Beautiful drabble Mansi! Infact, beyond beautiful!❤️

Every emotion, every nuance and every damn thing was so so so wonderfully captured!

The description of the surroundings in the beginning was wow! I loved the way you set the mood of the entire drabble just in a few lines.❤️

From Nisha's feelings, her heartbreak to Kabir's outburst and the final realisation he had was amazingly written!👏

The true beauty of this OS lies in the ending! When we think it's the end, unknown to us we would have treaded into something more beautiful and better.

Lovely drabble!

Do write more please and thanks for pm😊

thank u vishru 😳 its always the end who push me to begin it in first place... and when that is said the end is always a begining isnt it 😉

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

U r so cruel

awww behna... ok lets see... if anything could be done about the situation 😉

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Awesome story ..😳... and yes this was the shortest one u ever wrote🤣and having read ur stories I was in a misconception that this is only half part ... but ye to itni jldi khatam hogaya😛I thought I'll also get to know what happened after some year when she'll return😆

Chalo now coming to the update ... as usual amazingly written ... you express the emotions very beautifully😊... even though this was a bit sad ... as there were many unsaid feeling that remained in their heart and the other one will never get to know it ... this is the truth which many relations face the "unanswered why ? " 😊... it was still lovely👏

thank u poornima 😳 dekha shock kar dia na 😉 😆

I would be happy if u write lil more.. but that doesn't mean I'm not. I love it. It's was so emotional and I was listening to judai.. so it was more...

Awesome one Mansi...

Wow!!!!!
It was awsm...
It was a mixture of all emotions...
Plzzz update one more part of it...
Just loved it...
Do write more...

Thanks for di pm..

Wow new story🥳
Amazing update👏👏
But emotional one😭...Nisha left Kabir😭😭
I'm eager to read more😉...n ek cheez samajh gai k this is a drabble story matlab updates chotu honge🤣...but I luv ur lambu updates😭
Try to update soon😉

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Wow new story🥳
Amazing update👏👏
But emotional one😭...Nisha left Kabir😭😭
I'm eager to read more😉...n ek cheez samajh gai k this is a drabble story matlab updates chotu honge🤣...but I luv ur lambu updates😭
Try to update soon😉

roopz... koi parts nhi h baby... story ends here 😆

Awesome drabble mansi 👍🏼
First time tune itna chhotu sa likha h na...🤣🤣
It was more then beautiful❤️
The background was described so beautifully❤️
The no. Of emotions being in each other's embrace...her love for him...his love which he was not able to recognise...their heart break der pain..unki judaai...the way he put his head on her lap forehead kissall were described verry well...
Can we get another part of it???
I really love your word selection... 👏
Do write more...

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

roopz... koi parts nhi h baby... story ends here 😆

what??😲...i thought new drabble story hai ye😲