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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

it was a beautiful end to a beautiful story..
all d parts were awesome...

thanks shruti😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Epilogue
shifting from first person to third

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"Oh ok, yes yes don't worry i made all the corrections..." Nisha opened her house door to leave for office but what see saw stopped her world there and then. There stood in front of her, the love of her life, her Kabir.

"I will call you later" said Nisha to her colleague, putting her phone away she kept staring at the person in front of her. She was at loss of words so was he, but their eyes conveyed a lot. The tears falling conveyed their feelings, conveyed their longing for each other and conveyed the happiness both had inside them at this moment.

"Kabir" Nisha whispered so slowly that she too helped to hear it clearly, but was sure that he did as it was a call from her heart which was only for him to hear.

Closing the distance between them Nisha stepped forward and slowly raised her hand to touch his face. He leaned into her touch, closed his eyes feeling it more, feeling it deep. She smiled and raised her other hand cupping his face while he stepped forward joining their foreheads. Still not a single word was exchanged between them but both could feel their hearts speaking, speaking of theirs content. Nisha could not hold anymore and hugged him taking the breath away from him, putting her head on his heart cried to vent out all the emotions she was feeling at the moment. Kabir too held her tight and embraced her into him, letting the tears fall from his eyes too.

When her cries turned into sobs Kabir made her sit on sofa, making her drink some water he kneeled on the floor in front of her, weeping away her tears, made her look into his eyes.

"Why are you?" he earned a spank from Nisha with her answer "how the hell do you think i am?"

"Angry, pretty, happy and above all face" said Kabir looking deep into her orbs.

"Not funny Kabir"

"I am not even being"

"I miss you, Kabir misses you"

"I know, i too feel the same for both of you"

"Then come back, plz"

"Not possible Nisha"

Kabir exhaled and got up, "my coming back into your lives not possible, not at all. Call me selfish but i love you two a lot to let you guys get hurt in any way by me, i had done enough damage in the past, don't wish to do anymore now"

Nisha hugged him from back.

"I am incomplete without you Kabir, i am empty without you. There is a constant void in me without you."

Kabir turned and caged her in his arms "so is with me without both of you Nisha"

"Then please.."

Kabir cuts her "don't wish for that, it will never be true."

Nisha sighed deeply knowing that it will not be fruitful arguing with him as he will never agree, but this time she was not going to let him go easily.

"Ok but i want something"

"Anything, except of me coming back to you."

"Ok then i don't want you to disappear like last time, i want you to keep meeting me whenever possible", said Nisha with hopeful eyes.

"Nisha.."

"Kabir please agree to me on this one please, just seeing you sometimes will definitely not be enough for me but will still be something, please Kabir"

"Ok fine, we will keep meeting."

Nisha smiled and hugged him again.

"How is my son, Nisha?"

"Just like you Kabir, he is my chotu version of Kabir."

"Where is he? Sleeping?"

"No he has gone to summer camp."

"Oh"

Nisha's phone rang interrupting them.

"Sorry it's from office and important"

"Sure gone on"

While Nisha was talking on the phone, Kabir was admiring the photos hanged on the wall of him, of Nisha, of them together, of his champ and of two most important persons in his life together.

"Kabir, i need to go to office." Said Nisha

"Sure. Shall i drop you?"

"No i have my car."

"Hmm, by the way Nisha, champ does recognize me na."

"Yes, he does. And he loves all the gifts you send him on his birthday. He was never met you but loves you a lot Kabir. A lot." Said Nisha smiling at him

"Thanks Nisha...for handling everything.. and mostly for not hating me."

"i could never do that Kabir. I could never hate you. I love you too much to hate you."

Kabir smiled at her.

"that reminds me that you will get late than you already are and that i need to give you this." Said Kabir keeping a box on the tea pot, "see it after you come back from work"

Kabir took her hand and started walking towards the door, while Nisha kept asking him to let her open the gift now.

"Kabir what is inside it? Please tell na."

"Nothing just a ring. I saw it and it looked perfect for you so bought it."

"Oh"

"Now get going, see you later and have a nice day" said Kabir kissing her forehead.

"I saw you after years my day will be the bestest" said Nisha.

Waving a bye to him, with a promise that he will not disappear from her life totally again, Nisha set to her office, while Kabir gave a last look at the house and walked away from it, with a constant smile on his face.


Edited by mishrialways - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
res...
waiting...
unres
this is amazing yaar ...really sweet cute made me emotional👏
😃aisa hi likhthi raho😃
Edited by Niha0606 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res res res 😃
Unres😊
Such a sweet epilogue... finally they both met and now he'll not disappear again 😃
Thankyou for the epilogue 😃
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res

Unres😃

Ritu🤗🤗...I luv u so so so so much🤗
Thank u so much for the epilogue🤗...thanx for uniting NIBIR😳

It was so cute update😳

But yaar Kabiraa chotu Kabiraa se toh mila hi nhi😭
Plz plz plz plz Ritu one last part dede jaha Kabiraa chotu Kabiraa se milega...plz plz plz plz😳
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 8 years ago
mishrialways thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
thank u so much for liking this story🤗
hope you like the epilogue😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my God oh my God oh my God someone control me. Just kidding.. but it's awesome... and I'm in love with it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was soo good thanks for uniting them
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res😆
University mein baithke university wifi use kar tumhari story padh rahi hoon beta😆 comment aaram se karungi😆
Waise I just realized I have a lot of comment s pending on this story of yours😆🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
loved it ...

thnks for pm

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