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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: Niha0606
@ritu I hate u ...
Pls don't do this. ...

nihu thanks a lot for liking the story so much🤗

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: Niha0606
Mujhe update chahiye ek aur...

kal milegi😊

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: Niha0606
I am sorry ritu
But I am totally involved in it
Became emotional. ...
Crying. ...
Sorry sorry sorry

you don't need to be sorry yaar🤗

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321
Superb update
Very emotional
not a final good bye pls 😭 😭 😭
Very well written
pls continue soon

thanks sanju

one more chapter left

will update tomorrow

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Amina...
Awesome Update ...!!!

thanks😊

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Don't do this

Don't end like this...

Par mujhe phir feeling aa raha koi twist aayega

Please update soon...!!!!

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Don't do this
Don't end like this...
Par mujhe phir feeling aa raha koi twist aayega
Please update soon...!!!!

Will update tomorrow anmol😊

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Niharika

@Niha0606

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Posted: 9 years ago

#408

@ritu kal update yay yay yay
Thanku
U wrote it amazingly
Will miss this story. ...

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#409

Superb update!
Nisha went to meet kabir secretly, I loved the way she talked to him!
Arjun always has to come at the wrong time, find some cure for that wicked person please, or else I will cry!
Nisha condition and kabir's reaction was so heartbreaking!
Nisha's concern for the baby and love for kabir, I loved the way you've depicted both!
Kabir's surprise visit to nisha, and him talking to the baby was an adorable moment!
Him asking for a hug and a kiss from nisha, and she not being able to deny him though being hesitated and a bit angry?(at the other part of him, Arjun?) at him, was beautifully written!

All in all, an amazing update!
Do update soon!
Keep writing!