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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Lovely & romantic update
loved it ...

thnks for pm

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

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What a update niya kya kahe those chotu chotu scenes no words ... hope tum samajh jaao ...

☺️☺️☺️

This was a beautiful one kash ayese hi show me b hota ... and the way they made viraj understand the reality was very appropriate 👏... keep writing more such stories ...

ek epilogue milega kya ... ?☺️☺️

And so sorry for a late comment could not come online for some time ... 😊

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Snow12345654321

@Snow12345654321

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Wonderful update...

Seriously wished this happened in the show!😳

The way they explained viraj was very well written.

locked door😆😆

Beautifully written

Nibir😳😳

Really loved it😳

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98
Res

Unres

Mujhe pata tha Viraj hi hoga😡...I'm damn sure agar ye scene show main hota na toh jo jo dialogues tumne likhe hai na Viraj k...vohi dialogues bolta vo🤣🤣

Viraj ne Kabir ko punch kia😡😡...how dare he😡😡

Nisha ka reply😳

Finally sari problems solved😃

Kabiraa🤣...kya kya kya kia Kabir ne taki koi unhe disturb na kare🤣🤣...kash show main bhi aisa hota

Last but not the list their romance☺️☺️...GM activated🤣🤣

Luved it Niya❤️

Show main kaisa hota yehi soch ke toh likha tha maine, CVs should learn from the forum writers na? 🤣

Thanks ☺️

Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: poornima_15
☺️
What a update niya kya kahe those chotu chotu scenes no words ... hope tum samajh jaao ...
☺️☺️☺️
This was a beautiful one kash ayese hi show me b hota ... and the way they made viraj understand the reality was very appropriate 👏... keep writing more such stories ...
ek epilogue milega kya ... ?☺️☺️
And so sorry for a late comment could not come online for some time ... 😊

Thanks for the comment Poornima😃

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321
Wonderful update...
Seriously wished this happened in the show!😳
The way they explained viraj was very well written.
locked door😆😆
Beautifully written
Nibir😳😳
Really loved it😳

I wish the same❤️

Thanks for the comment😊

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Angel_alvira

@Angel_alvira

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Awesome,fabulous,fantastic,mind blowing 👏 👏 👏 loved every bit of it 😳 I wish show me bhi Aisa Hota 🤔 show me toh bas Dream sequences he mile the 😆 viraj ne kabir ki Dhulayi ki 😭 or kabir ne kuch bhi Nahi Kia yeh toh cheating ha na 🤔 1 2 punch toh maar he sakta tha 😆 😆 or us k baad jo huva Us k baad toh I'm speechless ☺️ ☺️ beautiful story loved it do write more..

Edited by Angel_alvira - 9 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Angel_alvira
Awesome,fabulous,fantastic,mind blowing 👏 👏 👏 loved every bit of it 😳 I wish show me bhi Aisa Hota 🤔 show me toh bas Dream sequences he mile the 😆 viraj ne kabir ki Dhulayi ki 😭 or kabir ne kuch bhi Nahi Kia yeh toh cheating ha na 🤔 1 2 punch toh maar he sakta tha 😆 😆 or us k baad jo huva Us k baad toh I'm speechless ☺️ ☺️ beautiful story loved it do write more..

Thanks for the comment😳 😳

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Lovely update niya!!

Glad they made it clear to Viraj about Nisha's feelings and loved that Kabir tore that contract paper!

Nisha's concern for Kabir when he was hurt by Viraj was very nicely portrayed. 👍🏼

The dance and the song!!! Perfectly penned! 👏

OMG! I was laughing so bad at Kabir's idea 🤣

Wish Kabir had done this for his confession in the show! Atleast we wouldn't get a last minute confession then 🤔

What a blushy blushy ending! ☺️ ☺️ Loved it!

Can we get an epilogue please? would love to read it!! 😳

Thanks for pm 😊

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Show main kaisa hota yehi soch ke toh likha tha maine, CVs should learn from the forum writers na? 🤣
Thanks ☺️

Yes definately they should learn...stupid people😡...shaadi k baad Nibir uss ghar main akele rehte the...KYA KYA KYA dikha sakte the vo log show main...but nhi, CVs ne toh...😡😡