NiBir SS- YOU DRUG ME DOWN [part- 15 on pg 19] - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Awesome update
Loving it so much😳
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Part-9


They sit on bike while he start the bike...
She wont think for a second and keep her soft hands on his shoulder... Which feels like an electric shock of 440 volt for him...
He smiled on her innocenceand speed up his bike...
hmm hmm hmm hmmm la la la
hey hey hey hey ah ha

They reached at the famous Jaipur market... He stopped the bike while she get down and look at him with amazed eyes...''What'' he asked while she nodded negatively...


subhaan allaah subhaan allah subhaan allah
subhaan allaah subhaan allah subhaan allah

valle valle
valle valle

He ask her to what to do while she pointed towards pani-puri shop. He smiled and nodded and they walk towards the shop...

chaand sifarish jo karta hamari deta woh tumko bata
sharm-o-haya pe parde gira ke karni hain hamko khata
zidd hain ab toh hain khud ko mitana hona hain tujhmein fanaa
chaand sifarish jo karta hamari deta woh tumko bata
sharm-o-haya pe parde gira ke karni hain hamko khata

She ask for most teekha one while he ordered normal one...
Vendor serve them one by one while they were eating like they are competing each other...
After having a full meal type of pani-puri they
stopped and look at each other for a second and then laugh out loud...
He pay for them while she run towards a shop of accessories. He smile on her and follow...

valle valle
valle valle

teri adaa bhi hain jhonke wali chhu ke gujar jaane de
teri lachak hain ke jaise daali dil mein utar jaane de
aaja baahon mein karke bahana hona hain tujhmein fanaa


She take two pairs of jhumkas and ask him through gestures for which one... He smiled and and pointed towards second one on which she choose 1st one making him shook his head on her...

chaand sifarish jo karta hamari deta woh tumko bata
sharm-o-haya pe parde gira ke karni hain hamko khata

subhaan allaah subhaan allah subhaan allah
subhaan allaah subhaan allah subhaan allah

She buy no. of things while he smile on her antics...After shopping a lot she look towards him and ask that why he is smiling a lot so his head negatively and walk towards bike while she shook her head on him...


hain jo iraaden bata doon tumko sharma hi jaaogi tum
dhadakanen jo suna doon tumko ghabraa hi jaaogi tum
hamko aata nahi hain chhupana hona hain tujhmein fanaa
chaand sifarish jo karta hamari deta woh tumko bata
sharm-o-haya pe parde gira ke karni hain hamko khata
zidd hain ab toh hain khud ko mitana hona hain tujhmein fanaa

They again sit on bike while this time also she keep her hands on his shoulder while he again shook his head on him...

''acha tell me hum kha ja rhe hai'' she ask ''i don't know'' he answered while she started hitting him ''are baba stop it nhi toh hume jaha jana hoga wha nhi jayenge par yes hum hospital jaroor chale jayenge she stop hitting him and take her hands back from his shoulder. He thought she is angry that's why she take her hands back but the reason was something else...

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Guyz may be kuch dino ke liye update na mile but ma be ajj mai 10th part bhi update krdu 😉




Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
dat was really cute
nyc epi..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
I love this story yaar.. actually that's the reason y I read it so carefully
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Very nice update
Do continue soon
waiting for the suspence
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awesome update 👏
Loving the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awsome updates dear
loved it


thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Part-10

Suddenly she hold his arms very tightly digging her nails into them... He feel intense heavy pain in his arms so he stop the bike on side and feel something heavy on his shoulders...
He get up holding her hand in order to not make her fall while her grip started to loose on his arms...
She get up from bike with loss of balance while he hold her from shoulders...
''Hey are you ok what happen to you'' He asked in serious tone holding her shoulders tightly...
''No something is wrong with me i m not feeling good tell me what happen to me literally my upper body is paining what is happening to me'' she asked and fainted at the movement making him all tensed...
He look at her face which start to get all red her face fade down and
have dark circles formed becoz of intense pain''...
He start to check her breathings which started to get heavier in every passing time her forehead was gleaming with sweat and now its clear that she had an attack he stop a cab and leave for his house...

At Kabir's House
He enter in an run towards his room... When he was about to enter in when a piece of glass dug in his feet making blood oozed out from his feet...
He walk towards bed in pain and slip her down from his arms...

He again check her breath which is quit lil abnormal. He take out injection filled with liquid med and inject her in order to make her breath normal...
After some 2min she start to normal he took a breath of relief and settle down on couch near window with first aid kit...
He took out the piece of glass from his feet with lots of pain and bandaged it...
A cool whirl of wind passes from his face making him smile when a firefly came and sit on his hand on which he remember his child hood...

FLASHBACK:::
On Juhu Beach at 9:00am
High tides of salty water were forming and a sound of splash was aloud spread all over the beach... Stars were spread on sky and was gleaming like a small piece of diamond when a kid in his early10 was trying to catch fireflies flying all over the beach...
This was his regular practice and today he caught one...
He hold it very tightly in his fist making her die because of suffocation and these all go not unnoticed by his mother she hold his hand tightly and slapped him hard on his face...
She drag him towards house and make him stand under shower...
''Whatever you did you know its value i m shameful of you, you killed that beautiful fly why tell me kabir'' she said all in anger while silent tears started to roll down from his hazel brown eyes...
''Mom i want to catch them my intention was not to kill them'' the innocent one replied making her anger to melt down ''But baby that wont mean to catch them by your hands hmm you should always take care of animals and these beautiful spices ''then how i can catch them forever'' the innocent one asked making his mom to smile ''baby we will use camera to capture them'' he replied and ruffled his hairs while lil squealed in to happiness''
FLASHBACK END
Kabir get up from couch and take out that mini camera gifted by his mother to him and a bright smile started to play on his lips...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
really cute
bt still wrried about nisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Awesome update
flashback was very cute😃
Do continue soon!

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