NiBir SS- YOU DRUG ME DOWN [part- 15 on pg 19] - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Dear Ansh(look your bhaiyu called you by this name so i will also called you by this name is it ok)

Excellent story ansh. Read all the parts together and it was superb. Concept is interesting. Do continue soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Awesome updates 👏
Really loved it...
Continue soon please...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Cute update tha ansh
Loved it
My emoticons not working
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Lovely updates
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Lovely update 👏
Does nisha fall in love with kabir kya?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Part-15



Next Day
At Jaipur Railway Station

As their train arrived they settle down themselves on their seats...
Kabir take out his earphones and connect them to his phone when nisha told him that may be she sleep while reading novel so don't wake her up as she use kick those people on which he chuckled and shook his head on her while she rolled her eyes and lay down on her seat...
They were in their own time pass when train started its journey from Jaipur to Punjab...

Kabir was hearing music closing his eyes when a lead song of udta Punjab played making him open his eyes all horrified and tensed but not for nisha for himself...
He start to make faces on different kind of lyrics...
"Kaiseh- kaiseh lyrics likhte hai log" he thought in his mind and change the station when tap on his hand...
He take out his earphones and look at her all confused she chuckled mentally and a question related lead song of udta Punjab on which he frown and lay down on berth closing eyes and wear his earphones...

After Some Hours

Nisha and kabir were in deep slumber when a T.C. coughed and shack kabir...
Kabir get up and yawn out loud...
Hello Mr. apna ticket dikhaye aur apke samne wali madam ko bhi uthayi... T.C said chewing tobacco and splitting from his mouth...
Kabir made an irritated face becoz of his antics and ask T.C to come after checking some more passengers as she will take time... T.C look at him all confused...
Kyu tera ticket ishke pass hai kya... He ask again performing those old antics...
Haa... Kabir answered angrily while T.C nodded and left from there...

Kabir turn towards nisha and look at her angelic face getting all lose but after some seconds he got he consciousness and try to wake her up...
She was all in mood to not to get up while now kabir was all tired now he wont think for a second shout out loud in her ears...
She get up all horrified and start beating in front of her without opening her eyes and recognizing the person...She was just beating and slapping while kabir laugh out loud and was trying to ditch her slaps...
After some seconds he tired of this game so he hold her shoulders softly...
Sweet nothings just open ur eyes... He whispered huskily near her ears when someone coughed...
Nisha open her eyes while kabir leave her and ask to give tickets to T.C...

Good morning madam hume toh lga ap uthengi hi nhi jish tarah yeh bol rhe the... T.C said again repeating his old antic while she wont pay attention as she was busy to find ticket and replied same to you...
On which kabir laugh out loud...
While soon she realized what she said and got all irritated...
Shut up you bloody hell donkey aur jo kaam krne aye ho wo kro ek toh tum tobacco chew kr rhe ho ishseh kya hota hai yeh pta bhi hai ya phir aise hi muh mai dal liya aur yeh apna muh toh tum kholna mat... she shouted at him loosing her temper on his tobacco chewing and over smartness while kabir all amazed on her such reaction towards tobacco chewing...
She give him ticket and after checking he return her...

Aur ha ek free advice yeh tobacco khana chodo aur kam se matlab rkha kro aur ha jyada chapad chapad mat kiya kro kisi din koi yeh sab complain lekar chala gya na toh apki aisi ki taisi ho jayegi... Nisha said snatch ticket from his hands...
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Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome update 👏
Nisha ka gussa 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Superb update...
Continue soon...
Thanks for di pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
superb yar..
nisha ka tashan.. loved it..
udta punjab ka title track.. 'controversial'
bt story was totally enjoyable
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Nibir😳
Nisha's outburst😆😆
Continue soon please😊

Thnx for all the pm

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