RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09* - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

thanx heema :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: plaksha2002

Wow... Uff itna suspense...


hehehe...
more to come plaksha ;)
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Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu

Awesome update
Thank you for the pm
And sorry for the late comment
But bohot short tha. Anyways it was really nice😊

thanx dear
its oki
short still?!!! 😔
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Posted: 9 years ago

chap5
Haal-E-Dil




while he was running away & escaping from his attackers Kabir got injury in his right leg.He was limping when he
met dis girl in The Hut...
who was wearing Traditional ethnic dress(Ghagra choli)
she was shocked looking at Kabir & abt to scream bt Kabir calmed her down by saying "please help me.there r some ppl behind me & don't knw y...other things which he had said goes in silent as She was mesmerized by his charm & accent of speaking English so fluently.
Kabir brought her out of her dream land by asking loudly" will u help me or not "
She said "kya?"
Kabir understood it must b like~~ English Ka locha...
so he asked calmly in Hindi to her..
"Kya tum meri help karogi?" as he was bleeding & having pain in his right leg.
She asked "kon ho tum?"
Kabir introduced himself. & due to pain he was unable to stand for any long.
This young lady gave him a chair to sit.

Kabir realxed a lil bit& She went to bring some clothes to stop his bleeding...Giving him clothes she went to Kitchen to make a herbal medicine for him.
after dis bleeding had stopped Kabir felt relived for a while...
Bt dis lady gave her a glass full of weird looking mixture of greenish black color (KADHA 🤣 ) to drink. Kabir hesitated first bt took dis glass ...keep it aside started to inquire abt her & asked her name to begin with,,

She told her name as daljeet kaur...
She said,
"U can calls me dolly."

Kabir thought to himself & smiled thoda sa hi English Ka locha lagta h... 😛

Then kabir too informed all DAT happen to him all dis while, the reason y he was here& if she knows anything abt Saurav, in Hindi only.

she replied" yes I knows. "

But told him to go to a safe place first as it was not safe for him to roam around in village.The attackers must b nearby.
Kabir drank DAT glass of Kadha...silently without complaining abt its taste .he was well aware of dis herbal treatment for rapid wound healing.He finished DAT of & den started to inquire abt Saurav & wat she knws abt him.

Bt she didn't replied anything & told to take rest...
As it was night tym He can easily attack back again ...so he must b moved from here as soon as possible.with d help of her neighbor Dolly took him to a safe place which was basement of an old house.
after reaching der Kabir went to sleep in a matter of few moments...
He asumed der is something she knows abt Saurav which can help him to find Saurav.


To b continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
<font size="5">chap6 </font>


The next morning when Kabir woke up pain subsides.
He was feeling well now, his wound was ameliorated . His wounds used to heal quickly.
Dolly came der & asked,
How's he!
Kabir replied much better.
& inquired abt Saurav.


KABIR- so tum kya janti ho Saurav k baare me?
Dolly- (in low whispering voice) dheere bolo yaha sab jasoos ghum rehe, abi b khatra tala ni h!!!
K- kaisa khatra.?!
D- wo kafi musibat me h. or Sarpanch G hi is sab KE zimmedar hain!
K- wat???! (shocked)
D- I'll tells u all wait.
K- Oki
& she left from der.
Kabir thought To himself- Aise Kaise hosakta h?!Gaon ka sarpanch hi is sab Ka zimmedar h!?y n wat was d reason behind all dis!?or ye Saurav ko kaise janti hai? he was wondering abt all dis.
& Dolly came up with breakfast & medicine (Kadha) for Kabir.
K - so kya matter h? Aap Saurav ko kabse janti hain??or sarpanch hi is sab Ka zimmedar h mtlb??!
D- pehle aap Breakfast finishes kar k ye medicins lelein.hum sab btate hain.
K -thik h
& he eat breakfast which was very yummy Aloo Ka parantha with curd & masala tea...he never had such delicious food in his entire life...

k was making faCE when Dolly handed over glass of Kadha to him...He took it & placed DAT next to him. & told to Dolly
K- See I'll have it later on first u tell me all.
D- said Fines & handed over a letter to him which reads.


***
Kabira,
I was pretty sure DAT u will b coming here after my call to u.
mUjhe pata Tha tu Kaise b kar k mujh ko dhund hi lega...
Kabira sorry yaar.me chahte hue b tujhe ye matter k baare me bta na paya.maaf karde yaara.
Dolly ko sab pta h she will help u.

He stopped reading By seeing writing Kabir recognized its Saurav only den he looked at Dolly.
She gave him a smile.
& den he continued reading...
jab ye letter miljayega Tab nikal Jana wahan se .Teri b jaan ko khatra h.yaha ruk kar kuch ni hona... Go back to city n arrange for help.
coz u can't handle it alone wo log kafi powerful hain...


Kabir - ye Saurav kis ki baat kar raha h??
D- I can't tells u anything. reads d letter na.

Kabir continued reading...

So matter ye h ki- Sarpanch Shree Hemant waghela... kafi tym se mere Papa Herman Jain k peeche pada hua tha.Unki zameen ko Foreigners ko bechna chahta Tha. bt papa ne wo zameen Kisaano k liye rakhi this so bechne se mana kardiya.Sarpanch ne dhoke se papa se sign karwaliye or hum kuch bol na payen is liye
mujhe or mere gharwalon ko sarpanch or us k wafadaron ne Kidnap kar k yaha rakha hua h. or hamein badnaam kar rakha h ki hamne paison Ka Ghotala kiya h.so even if we get out of here ppl will consider us criminals only...
Abhi Kabira tu hi hmari last hope h help la de jaldi se..
- waiting for help from u
Saurav

After reading this letter he asked exact place where he was kept kidnapped.
Dolly described DAT place.. to Kabir

wo jagah Village se thoda hi door h .mujhko pta h wahan kaise pahuncha ja sakte hain bt wahan jana kisi ko b allows ni h...


to b continued...


so guys I hv updated 2chapters in one go...do read, like& comments :)
hope u will like these parts ...
Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both updates is awesome 👏
Continue soon...!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both the chapters are nice ... Kabir got to know abt saurabh situation through dolly now hope he finds him soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u have updated...WO bhi do do chapters...
Nice update...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update needa 👏
Thanks for pm neha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
cont soon
whr is nisha?

thnks for pm

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