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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

han meri jhansi ki raani 😳

jawab se moti :/

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

oho... miss philosopher ...
tu doctor kyu ban gyi?? 🤣

coz philosopher stone ni mila na 😛

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: vishesh_Tippani

coz philosopher stone ni mila na 😛

harry se sorcers stone ladun kya?? 🤣

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

harry se sorcers stone ladun kya?? 🤣

ni ek diamond ring ya earnings LA de 🤣

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

HY ALL now n updating last chapter of Khamoshiyan part .
& I need 2weeks Ka break from today. I may cum in between bt will post my next update directly in May.
Most
probably on 5 or 6th may of dis yr 😛

till den do whatever u want to do man...do double posting commenting &enjoyment.
and yeah I observed no on criticized my last chapter.inna accchhaaa likha h mene

Sacchi?!!
☺️ 😳 Thank u no return...

But
on a serious note
guys feel free to criticize. (not abusing) Kisi ko Jail ni karwaungi I promise. 🤣
So,
friends, please give me honest opinion about this chapter...
waiting for ur feedbacks...
😊

RABTAA~PART 1~KHAMOSHIYAN
chapter 8

She opened d door to see his parents der.She was thinking abt it only
And finally they arrived an elderly man wearing dhoti kurta, an elderly women wearing saari & a young boy in his 20s.

They were looking & behaving quite weird as in dis area where she has found bunty no one actually wears dis kind of attire...& they were communicating with themselves in another language which nisha is unaware abt.

Nisha wanted to click a selfie before leaving bunty with dem.
She cheered up bunty telling him dat he will b more happy with his own family& if he wants she will visit his home offen.

The Bunty's family members hardly talked with nisha &was in a hurry to leave dat place with bunty.
while that boy who came along knows sign language & was communicating with bunty quite well.still bunty was not showing any sing of joy or excitement on meeting his real parents & brother.
this striked nisha bt later on she dismissed her idea of thinking them as frauds coz
bunty had lost his memory so he might b not recognizing them for dat matter.

on repeatedly asking wat was his real name...His father only told dis - Virat S.R.
and they left immediately.

Leaving behind all memories of him captured in her smart phone...
& He is gone...
leaving her all alone again...taking with dem her sole source of happiness.

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Next morning she woke up horrified with her dream. she saw bunty in danger.That dream made her woke up early around 5am.
Nisha never had such dream for any1.
She felt uneasy as sumthing was not right
sumthing was inappropriate.

She rushed for her phone to check any call or msgs from Bunty...
Nisha was so smart she was aware of fact DAT dis family of bunty which had arrived for him to bring him back to his home were not so rich to give him a phone of his own.So she secretly presented him while he was getting ready to leave with them a small phone from which he can call or msg her anytym whenever he wanted...
Without informing her parents she handed over DAT cell to bunty so that he can stay in touch with her always.

And to her surprise der were msgs from bunty.
which states dat__

<-Didi I how r u?
missing u already.
-+91 *********0
6:15pm

<-Nisha Di kash aap b yaha hote bade bhaiyya ne dinner me Chinese order kiya h.Your favorite.
missing u di :(
-9:06pm

<-Di mujhe yahan accha ni lagra.
mujhe wapas ana h wahan.
-9:45pm

<-Nisha di ye log Sahi ni hain.
Mujhe room me band kardiya h.
ye mere parents b ni hain.
-10:23pm

<-Di ye log abi kahin le k Jane wale hain mujhe.uski tyaari kar rehen hain.
di mujhe bachalo di.mujhe kahin ni Jana h.
-11:06am

<-Di yahan pe Koi Rain forest k ander ek hut me mujhe rakha hua h di. mene Time note kiya h ye 5-6hrs door h Mumbai se.
Northern side.plz ajaao di yahan.mujhe or kahin ni Jana. di plz come here.
-5:04am

Nisha got worried, thought to help bunty b4 dey caught him with cell&took him away with dem.Den it would b more tough for her to track THEM.
She freshened up & was abt to leave when laxmi noticed her.She told her mother she was leaving to get bunty back.

Laxmi- bt beta sun ,hua kya bta toh mujhe.ruk nisha .itni subah kahan ja ri h.nashta to kar k jati.!!???
N- laxmi relax me. Me hun gayi hun ayi. tab tak masi apka khayal rakhengi.(their neighbor Rupal whom Nisha address as her masi)
She
Rushed to Police for der help.
They were nt ready to help her so she left to rescue him alone.
She was not sure which forest where exactly Bunty was.
searching every possible place.
she reached der n found d exact place described by bunty.
She hide herself in bushes & overheard their conversion dey discussing how to go abt & their plan of using money& after DAT killing him as well coz he had seen dem all.

Nisha waited der hiding herself in bushes for den to leave DAT place for few moment.. she waited der till sun was abt to go home to take rest.Bt Nisha was all alert on her toes, she just couldn't miss single opportunity to save Bunty .
& finally around 8pm der she got her chance all were left from der probably went for dinner leaving Bunty alone in hut.

She just can't afford to miss dis opportunity she swiftly moved & entered DAT hut...

To b continued...

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Awesome update 👏

Phir suspense me chod diya 😒

Continue soon!!!

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Awesome update👏
Phir suspense me chod diya😒
Continue soon!!!

don't b sad dear.
actually Neha ne bola ki Nibir story readers kafi smart h pta laga lenege so post ur assumptions wat u think will happen next. 😉
thanks :)