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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishri0209

Jerry u jst nailed it baby..

Loved it totally ..
Continue soon..!!

Thank u soo much but jerry tho mujhe sirf meri bhene bolati hain app koun si wali bhen ho 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sachi dear the update was very nice
I liked kabir's monologue a lot
the last kiss was really nice

Just a request plz a check on spellings mein kuch jagaho pe confuse ho gyi thi😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Sachi dear the update was very nice

I liked kabir's monologue a lot
the last kiss was really nice

Just a request plz a check on spellings mein kuch jagaho pe confuse ho gyi thi😛

Thank u soo much I loved it bcz u said what u feel while reading actually my ph is hanging lot isliye
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awesome update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
updated ks ab khush


kabir picked her up and kirti to bring a glass of water towards the near bench kabir as they were in party some peeps were shocked and some where loking at nibir with aww full eyes but 3 people were jelous and anghryly looking at them they were non other vsr.oh my my . and kaira
sukku and bunty also rush towards the bench were nisha was unconsious they were too shocked to see nisha in kabirs arm
kabir : nishu uth na yaar plz mujhe darra mat ...dhek agar tu nahi uthi na tho i main tujhsay baat nahi karunga
till then kirti come with water kabir flash some water on nisha softly kabir was super worried about why nisha fainted kabir looked at
sukku and bunty which they have hideing somthing
kabir : kya kiya tum dono ne ?? ...withn deadly glare

bunty : kabir bhaiya wo sukku bhaiya aur main nishu di ko bhaang pila di tki wo apko pite gi

kabir was shocked he dont know what to do just he said those magical words but nisha was only not in sence...kabir want to cry but not ryt now he have to control him self


nisha was grainig sence she opend her eyes kabir cant face nisha after the confesion
kabir (monologue) : kabir sham on u wo hosh main nahi thi but tu tho tha na abwo kya souchegi ...pyaar ke liye nahi bana hai tu kabiree ...wo teri bestie hai ab tho wo bhi nahi rahegi
kabir was about to leave he cant face nisha after some 2 steps ...taaaddd...kabir got a tight slap from vsr he dont know what the hell just happend alll were shocked

vsr : how dare u ...apne huari miss nisha ko chua kaise ...u ...

thaaaddd now vsr got slap from nisha kabir was shocked all cousins faceses were looking like kisi ne unki dono kidny mang li ho

nisha : how dare u mr rathod apne mere pati ke uppar haath kaise lagaya ...aur wo mujhe kuch bhi kar sakta hai cz main uski patni hoon jab apne mujhe jaan kar bhi mujhe samjha nahi trust nahi kiya tab mujhe kisi streanger ne
trust kiya ...jo mujhe janta bhi tha ...pyaar ka matlab hi trusth careee and being the reson to exist in this world jo ap kabhi nahi samjhunge
kyuki apne kisi ke upar trust hi nahi hai
aur haan tthank u soo much mr vsr agar us din apne mujhe akele nahi choda hota tho main kabhi mere true love ko samjh nahi pati aur agar phir kabhi mere pati ke upar haat lagana tho door
touch bhi karne ki koshish ki na tho mujhsay bura koi nahi hoga ...i hope u get it *all angry and rude tone was enough to leave viraj with is broken heart

nisha aur kabir ...all turn towards the source of voice ...it was dadaji with a clam on his face
cousins were shocked all were ready to have ak 47 fiaring with bombs

nibir were blank what to say now

dadaji : kya chal raha hai nisha ...ahaan say chalo ghar pe



GH

all memembers were present there with qoustion face
nibir were standing cousins were in difrent corner

dj : nisha jo kuch bhi tum ne viraj say kaha wo such tha
kabir : dadaji wo ...
dadji : haan ya na * bit loud
nisha : haan dadaji mere aur kabir ki shaadi ho joki hai
this comment was enough to give all memers attack
dadaji : nisha tumne ...isa kyu kiya jab tumhe kabir say shaadi karni hi thi tho hume bata deti hum baat karte par tumne aaj mera sar jhokadiya
kabir : main manta hioon dadaji apki narazgi sahi hai par humari ek baar bat tho sun ligiye
dada ji : bolo

kabir said all the matter of chandu and that gundaas
all family memebers were shocked but all sapported nisha they think it was faith of them distniy have planned we cant change the future ryt


dadaji : mujhe tum dono pe garav hai ki tum dono ne khud ki parvha na karte hoe kisi anjaan ladki ke liye itna sab kuch kiya par
shaadi koi mazak nahi hai yeh rishta hota hai ek bandhan vishwaas ,pyaar,samjh ne ka ek dosre ko nisha aur kabir
kya tumhe yeh shaadi manzoor hai

kabir : dadaji mujhe ek baar nisha say baat karni hai aagar apki permission ho tho
dadaji said yes
nibir go to tarace

tarrace
the sky was dark and angle decorate them with twinkleing starts and the moon was shing like never before to witness
the love birds the wind was make the moment more beutiful

kabir : dhek nisha i know ki its really complicated to start with new para of life but i donr want u to sacrifice any way
nisha i love u but love dosnt mean u will the get ir back with the same passion i love u but i dont want to force u to love me ba...
(BG MUSIC AGAR TUM MIL JAO )
before kabir could countinue nisha sealed her lips on his 1st kabir was shocked but after that kabir kissed her lover lips then upper lip yes it was again a freanch kiss
but the liq of oxygen they seprat there lipsand breathing havily nisha wwas blushing like fresh apple her lipes were swolen cz of such an wild kiss
they both hug soo tughtly the couldtnt get through them the un said qoutions of un toled answer they got were perfect just wprds broke the silence from nisha
nisha : kabir I LOVE U too


the stars started shineing more brightly as they were clappingj for these love birds


nibir got married once more and all leave together happy and understanding with each other for ever ...


EK TUTE HUE DIL KO JEENE KI WAJH BANGAI KABHI DOSTI THI AB MOHBBAT BANGAI KUCH IS TARAH DAKHIL HUI TUM ZUNDAGI MAIN TUMSAY LEPTE REHNA MERI ADAT BANGAI

BY ME
















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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Very nice update 👍🏼
Par mujhe MPINMW ka update chahiye wo bhi soonest
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Thank u soo much but jerry tho mujhe sirf meri bhene bolati hain app koun si wali bhen ho 😆

tum mjhe ni janti lyk seriously..
vry bad sachi..
main bhut gussa hu tmse
#tanisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
i hope uk me by nw..
its me baba.. tanisha
acha let it b..
abi gussa krne k mood m ni hu.. update was super awsm
nisha ne jo thappad lgaya.. waah.. ly 4 dat scn jerry..
n nibir scn to as usual awsm hona hi tha.. to on d whole.. loved d update totally
ill b waiting 4 u strt nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mishri0209

i hope uk me by nw..

its me baba.. tanisha
acha let it b..
abi gussa krne k mood m ni hu.. update was super awsm
nisha ne jo thappad lgaya.. waah.. ly 4 dat scn jerry..
n nibir scn to as usual awsm hona hi tha.. to on d whole.. loved d update totally
ill b waiting 4 u strt nxt

Awwieee thank I love u too ...haha I love that scene too
Tanuuu diii
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awesome sachi 👏
Loved it
Nibir kiss was ☺️
Thanks for pm

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