NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Updating the second part already😉
Enjoy reading, haven't proofread as always 😳


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Chapter 2

Nisha and Kabir were sleeping peacefully and were cherishing the feeling of each other's warmth which they were loving to the core but this beautiful moment was disturbed due to the stupid speed breaker which made the car jerk and broke Kabir's sleep but he unconsciously placed his hand under Nisha's head to prevent it from falling which would disturb her sleep.

He opened his eyes lazily and the first thing he saw was a small smile on her face and her hold tight on his shirt which she had fisted in her hand, he then remembered the wound on her back and he got worried again.

He took off his jacket and somehow wrapped it around Nisha, she shirred a little in her sleep but again cuddled into Kabir and slept peaceful, Viraj turned to look at them if they were up or no and what he saw made him turn his face to the other side.

Kabir was busy staring Nisha and used his free hand to place that one strand of her hair that was blocking his view of her adorable face. Nisha hid her face more in his chest with smile on her face soon they had reached the Gangwal house.

"Miss Nisha aapka ghar aagaya" Viraj informed them bringing Kabir out of his trance, Nisha heard his voice and opened her eyes lazily rubbing them

"Ghar aagaya Kabir?" she asked innocently

"Haan agaya..." Kabir replied in a cute voice which made her smile

"Shayaad humne bhi yehi kaha tha..." Viraj murmured to himself as he stepped out of the car followed by Nisha and Kabir

"Kabir tune yeh jacket mujhe kyun pehna diya?" Nisha asked when she noticed that she had Kabir's jacket wrapped around her

"Kyunki agar teri chot ke bare main ghar pe kisiko bhi pata chala toh problem ho jayegi, aur tera jacket bhi..." he stopped as he felt awkward to tell her about her jacket being torn but Nisha understood and nodded her head

They walked a few steps and realised that Viraj wasn't following them, Nisha turned and called him out

"Sir, aap nahi aa rahe andar?" Nisha asked

"Vo hum..."

"Aaiye na sir, sab aap se milke bohut khush honge" Kabir said gloomily, Viraj tried to hide his irritation and was about to reply but Nisha spoke before him

"Haan sir aaiye na please" Nisha requested him in a cute way and Viraj gave in. Nisha and Kabir at each other and they went inside. The entire group of cousins were in the court yard waiting for Nisha to come back

"Nishu bro" Bunty said and ran to her followed by the cousins, soon they all were sharing a group hug with Nisha

"Guys, mujhe bhi koi dekh lo yaar" Kabir pouted and said, everyone looked at him and Bunty almost jumped on him and he hit the ground with Bunty on Top of him

"Bunty, kya kar raha hai?" he winched in pain and the others laughed at him

"Sorry, sorry" Bunty said and got up Umesh and Sukku helped Kabir get up and the trio shared a hug

"Kya baat hai Umesh, shadi taiy hogai aapki? Bhabhi ji ka naam kya hai?" Kabir winked as he pulled Umesh's leg who was blushing like a newly married bride...

"Kabir, very bad, Umesh bhaiya apne muh se Aman Bhabhi ka naam thodi lenge" Sukku joined him making Umesh blush more and become a Tomato and Sukku hi-fived Kabir

"How Blah, Umesh Bhaiya, aap groom hai bride nahi, aise blush mat kijiye please" Kirti said and Umesh looked here and there

Everyone giggled and continued pulling Umesh's leg for a while, hearing their voices the elders too had come down, Lakshmi came running to Nisha calling her name but instead went to Kabir and welcomed him surprising everyone.

"Maa, aap shayaad mujhe gale lagene aai thi" Nisha complained

"Tu kitni J hai yaar Nisha" Kabir taunted and showed her his tounge Nisha in return gave him a stern look

Lakshmi took Nisha in a hug too

"Kabir" Dadaji called him and he obeyed him walking towards him, he bent and took Dadu's blessings and hugged him too

"Kaise ho beta?" Dadaji asked him placing his hand on Kabir's head

"Aapke aashirwaad se bilkul theek hun Dadu" Kabir replied with a genuine smile on his face

"Acha hua tum wapas aagaye..." Dadaji said and smiled looking at Nisha

"Nishu, tu theek hai na beta?" Vimla asked as she walked to Nisha

"Haan Taiji main bilkul theek hun" Nisha assured her, Kirti notice Viraj and asked

"Nishu yeh tere boss hai na?"

"Haan" Nisha replied and introduced Viraj to everyone

"Shukriya Viraj Ji jo aapne humari beti ka itna dhyaan rakha" Ramesh thanked Viraj

"Shurkiya toh hume inke karna chahiye... Inhone humare Academy ka bohut bada nuksaan hone se bachaya hai aaj aur saath hi saath humari bhi jaan baccai hai" Viraj said looking at Nisha thankfully

"Jaan baccai matlab?" Viren asked as he thought something was wrong

"Arey Tauji, Academy hi toh sir ki jaan hai na" Kabir said trying to cover up and save Nisha

"Oh acha" Viren seemed little convinced at his words and nodded his head affirmatively

Viraj could sense that Kabir shared a really good bond with the entire family

"Hum chalte hai" Viraj said and once again everyone thanked him and he went out followed by the cousins

When they came out they saw the driver sitting out of the car looking at the front tire of the car

"Kya hua?' Viraj asked as he came towards him

"Sir, tyre puncher ho gaya" the driver replied and everyone looked at the tyre

"Toh, Stepney nikal ke change kar dijiye na" Viraj said in a casual tone

"Sir, abhi thodi der pehle hi toh change kit hi" the driver reminded him and he nodded his head

"Sir, aap aaj yahin rukh jaiyena" Umesh said and everyone agreed to him except Viraj

"Lekin hum kaise rukh sakte hai?" Viraj said as he was unsure but then everyone forced him and they all went inside again

"Dadu ko main sambhal lunga" Kabir said confidently which irked Viraj

After having a word with Dadaji everyone headed for dinner

"Aaj kitne mahino baad itna tasty khana khaya hai Maa, aapke haath kahan hai unhe chumna hai mujhe" Kabir said dramatically and everyone laughed. Viraj felt that Kabir was doing a bit over but he tried to hide his emotions and continued eating

"Arey, Viraj ji, aapne toh kuch liya hi nahi, lijiye na" Lakshmi served him some rice and he smiled at her, she then went to Kabir and started feeding him

"Kya Maa, jab se Kabir aaya hai aap se uski hi siva kar rahi hai, mera kya?" Nisha complained again and crossed her hands and leaned on the table like a cute kid

"Kyunki Maa mujhe tujhse zyada pyaar karti hai..." Kabir said and teased her

"Janti hun, aur Mamma aur Di hamesha se mujhe tujhse zyada pyaar karte the" Nisha said and soon regretted it as she realised what she had said, she looked at Kabir whose face had become emotionless

"Main aata hun" Kabir said as he excused himself, everyone looked at Nisha as she gave them an apologetic look and followed Kabir. Viraj was the only one who couldn't understand anything, but he excused himself as he got the driver's call who informed him about fixing the tyre calling a mechanic and he left telling everyone a bye as it was too late already.

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Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
res 😃
unres
behna 🤗
amazing as always 👏
kabir placing his hand under nisha head n then covering her with his jacket was such a adorable scene
viraj murmuring 🤣 🤣
kabir's bond with the gangwal family is so sweetly portrayed 👏
poor umesh😆
viraj getting j is the thing I love the most 🤣 🤣
waiting to know kabir's past
loved it behna u r awesome 👏
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Superb update 👏
Kabir ka koi past hai kya?
Nibir 😳
Viraj jealous singh rathore 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Lovely update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb update 👏
Kabir ka koi past hai kya?
Nibir 😳
Viraj jealous singh rathore 🤣

Thanks
Just like everyone he has a past too which will come infront soon😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Awesome Story ...
Loved both the parts ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome update nibir were so cute as usual...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Awsome update
loved nibir. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Sabse pehle to thanx for updating so early...🤗

Kabiraa Nishu ki kitniii care karta hai......luved the whole car scene...chahe vo Kabiraa ka Nishu ko jacket pehnana ho ya phir uski neend na tute uska dhyaan rakhna...😳

GH scene was superb...😃

Umesh kitna blush karta hai...🤣

Aur Viraj kitnaaa kitnaaa kitnaaa J ho raha hai...🤣🤣

Kabiraa sad q ho gaya??😭

Waiting for tge next part...hope ye bhi jaldi mil jae...😉...thanx for the pm...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Niyu such a beautiful is this
Just loved it 😳
First to fight scene 😉
Ahaa kiya entry thee hero ki 😉
Nisha kabir ka eye talk. 😳😳
Viraj ki irritation 😆😆
Kitne cutely understand karttey hn 😳
And their hug 😳😳

Then kabir ka stare ☺️
Ammm something something 😉
Viraj ki irritation 😆😆
That jacket scene
Kabir share such a good bond 😃
Lacmi ka pyar 😳
Nishu j ho ri ha 😆😆
Akhir aisa kiya hua ha ?? 😲
But totally amazing 👏
Loved it sooo much 😳

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