NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED - Page 33

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Lovely update Niya!

Such a nice start with KN's scooty ride!
Nisha hugging Kabir, him declaring that she would officially be his in a short time span, she blushing at this, him asking about her marriage demands and she wanting the trio to be in the same coloured dress, him teasing her and she getting annoyed, his K-panti 😆 were all very well written moments!
Him complaining that her academy is too near and he could not spend time with her, she trying to pacify him by telling she'l be back early and asking him not to sulk as that would not let her concentrate, both parting with a hug were such lovely moments! 😳
Coming to Priyanka -Nisha scene, I actually did not get angry on priyanka here 😆, because for me she represented the society at large. That's how the society / world is, often insensitive to other's feelings. She just wanted to insult / instigate Nisha, and spoke filth with/without realizing what she's speaking.
Nisha's anger and her eyes welling up with angry tears was well portrayed!
Kabir giving it back to Priyanka in a calm and composed way was really good! 👏. Its this calm/ satairical reply that shuts such mouths. Him supporting her and calming her down was good.
I'm surprised that only Kaira came to appologise for Pri's behaviour and Viraj kept mum? Even after Nisha looked at him and said that she's quitting? 😳. I dont think I appreciate that behaviour / non-responsiveness of Viraj.
Hope we get to see him calling out on Priyanka for her unacceptable words, in the next update 😉
Liked that you ended the chapter with Kabir's K dialogue and Nisha's annoyance over it 😆
A nice update on the whole!
Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Thank you so much Vishrutha 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Superb mansi 👏
This prinkaaaprinkaaa 😡 😡 😡
Just want to kill her
Good one kabira 😉
I like it
Their scenes were so cute
Just loved it
Waiting for marriage

Main Niya hun😭😆
Thank you😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Priyanka...!!!

Y is she interfering in NiBir's life
Kaam -danda nahi hai usse ?
And kabir is really cute
He understands and cares for nisha very well
Update soon...

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikhad003

I just started reading the story from chapter 7 niyu aur pisle parts ke summary mila dusro ke comments se..bohot busy ja raha hain din yaar...I am really sorry but you know the story is going so niceee...Update soon yaar..tu to ekdam hit ho chuki hain...:*

Thanks Toddu🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789


Main Niya hun😭😆
Thank you😳

aimi mera bhoot chad gya kya tere sar p 🤣 waise mai abhi jinda hu 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
The story is about to end but this is a very lame update, hope you like it, not proof read as always 😆
Leave your comments and likes please and encourage me to update the story like this only, promise next time it will be a complete Adhyaa update for sure😳

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Chapter 8

Nisha and Kabir reached home with some packs of ice creams for everyone, it was Kabir's idea as he knew that one way to cheer up Nisha was giving her a good dose of ice cream, then Nisha decided to take some for everyone.

All the cousins were on the terrace along with Adhyaa, seeing her parents come back Adhyaa came running to them, Kabir bent on his knees and took his angel in his arms, he started playing with her by throwing her in the air, Adhyaa was as scared as she was excited, she was scared that she might fall but she knew her Dadda won't let her fall and so she started enjoying his game.

Nisha till then went and bought the ice creams in bowls with Aman following her

"Kabir, bas abh Princess ka ice cream khane ka time hai" Nisha went and took Adhyaa from Kabir and started feeding her ice cream which she relished to the core, Kabir took out his phone and started clicking pictures of hers as he wanted to capture all these adorable and lovely moments in his camera.

Soon the cousins joined in and they all started having their groupfiee session. After a while their masti came to an end when the elders asked them to come to the court yard. They all like obident kids went and assembled there.

"Abh sab aagaye ho toh batao, kon shadi ki konsi zimbedaari lega?" Dadaji asked the cousins who were eagerly waiting to take the responsibilities.

"Sab ke dresses main select karungi" Kirti was the first one to reply excitedly

"Music sambhalne ka kaam mera" Sukku replied the next

"Kahne ki zimbedaari humari" Aman and Umesh said together

"Sab ke entertainment ki zimbedaari humari" Bunty and Jwala replied and gave a hi-fi to each other

"Aur baki ki sari shopping main karungi" Dolly clapped enthusiastically clapping her hands just like Adhyaa does in excitement.

Everyone giggled at her and her excitement

"Aur dance toh main hi sambhalunga" Kabir said in his self-praising way but the cousins did his chop by responding in a big NO that too together

"Tumhari shadi main tum dono kuch nahi karoge" Dolly said or rather warned them and Kabir pouted

"This is no done yaar, ek toh aise hi umar kaid ki saaza suna di abh kya itna enjoyment bhi nahi kar sakta?" he complained and Nisha gave him a deadly glare

"Kabir" Dadaji warned him but he made a cute face trying to please him "Tum dono kuch nahi karoge" he declared making Kabir frown more.

"Toh kya karenge hum?" Kabir asked disinterestedly

"Tum dono ache parents banke Adhyaa ki care karoge, hum sab shadi main busy honge toh tumhe apni pari jaisi pyaari si beti ka dhyaan rakhna padega" Kirti exclaimed and Nisha smiled

"Ok done" Nisha replied and looked at Kabir who blinked his eyes and agreed to everyone, soon all got busy in their work.

Two days passed in just a blink of eye and it was the engagement day already. There were just family members and a few close friends like Saurav and his mom


Viraj and Kaira too had reached along with Priyanka seeing her there Saurav was little angry but he still went and wished them welcoming them warmly, the cousins too came to them and wished them, all had mingled with Kaira and Priyanka was trying to show attitude but the Gangwal cousins know how to deal with people like her.

"Adhyaa kahan hai?" Dolly asked as she was nowhere to be seen

"Adhyaa yahan hai!" Jwala exclaimed as Adhyaa walked in the room with her small toy in a beautiful pink and blue coloured frock, looking like a real angel


"Aww, she is looking so cutes" Dolly exclaimed dreamily looking at her

"Cutes and cute hota hai Dolly Di" Kirti corrected her and called Adhyaa to her and the little princess came running to her

"Maachhhiii" she called her cutely as she ran to Kirti

"Hi Adhyaa" Kaira wished her and forwarded her hand for a hand shake but Adhyaa looked at Kirti for permission, she is a very smart yet shy girl too, Kirti nodded her head and signalled Adhyaa to go ahead and wish Kaira and she did the same

"Aww, she is so adorable" Kaira exclaimed

"Hello Adhyaa" Viraj wished her too and also forwarded a chocolate towards her, Adhyaa wished him but denied taking the chocolate

"Choci kane(khane) se teeth khalab(kharab) hote hai" she replied sweetly which made everyone adore her

"Kabir" they all heard a loud scream and looked towards the direction of the passage from where Kabir came running and Nisha behind him

"Rukh Kabir" Nisha warned him as she ran behind him with her sandal in her hand

"Nisha, dekh sab dekh rahe hai" Kabir said as he tried running away from her

"Yeeeyy" Adhyaa started wriggling in Kirti's arms and started clapping seeing her parents play

"Nishu, kya hua?" Lakshmi asked as Kabir ran and hid behind her in order to save himself from Nisha

This wasn't new to everyone except Viraj, Kaira and Priyanka

"Sir, aap log aake baith jaiye" Saurav said as he guided them to their seat

"Saurav yeh?" Kaira asked

"Kuch nahi Ma'am yeh inka roz ka hai, aap kuch lijiye na" Sukku said and offered some drinks to them

"Maa ke peeche se bahar aa Kabir" Nisha asked him to come out

"Nahi aaunga" Kabir teased her by showing his tongue

"Ho kya raha hai yahan?" Ramesh who had just come was surprised to see the scene in front of him

"Dekho na Papa, yeh mujhe chida raha hai" Nisha complained to Ramesh

"Papa, maine kuch nahi kiya, sirf sach kaha" Kabir also tried defending him

"Hua kya, pehle yeh batao?" Ramesh asked again

"Maine bas itna kaha ki tu aaj bhi bilkul aisi hi lag rahi thi jaise 3 saal pehle lag rahi thi" Kabir said casually and bent down as Nisha threw the sandal in his direction but missed the aim

"Iska matlab hai ki main moti ho gai hun" Nisha said and huffed

"Nisha abh sach to sach hai na" Kabir teased her again

"Kabir tu..." Nisha warned him but Ramesh came in between

"Time out, time out" he stopped their fight "Tum dono abh 3 saal ke baache nahi ho, tumhari beti 3 saal ki hai" he pointed at Adhyaa who was jumping and clapping her hands, full on entertainment it was for her

"Aur aaj tumhari sagai hai" he reminded them

"Mujhe nahi karni iss se sagai" Nisha scowled

"Mujhe bhi nahi karni huh" Kabir replied in the same attitude

"Shuru inka drama" Sukku face palmed

"Par inki toh shadi ho chuki hai, phir yeh aisa kyun keh rahe hai?" Priyanka questioned as she wanted to prove that she was right and Nisha wasn't married, but Nisha and Kabir had already told them what happened in the academy so they were well prepared for this.

"Acha hua ho gai hai, warna pata nahi humara kya hota" Kirti looked at Nisha and Kabir hopelessly

"Adhyaa, jao Mamma aur Dadda ka jhagda kahatam karo" Dolly said her and Adhyaa nodded her head, she ran towards Nisha and Kabir

"Mamma" she went to Nisha and hugged her leg, Nisha picked her in her arms and Adhyaa signalled Kabir to come closer, at first he denied but then how could he not do something his daughter had asked for? He went to them and stood next to them

"Kisse" Adhyaa asked both of them to give her a kiss and both leaned forward and gave her a kiss on either of her cheeks

Kirti took her phone and started clicking their pictures

"Now this is a perfect family" Kirti exclaimed as she showed them the pictures

Nisha and Kabir looked at each other and then everyone they gave an embarrassed look to everyone

"Abh sagai ki rasam puri kare?" Lakshmi asked and gave them the rings, both of them exchanged the rings

"Chalo abh dance time" Sukku declared and pulled Nisha and Kabir in the centre of the room and they started dancing, after a while Adhyaa came to them and pulled Kabir's kurta

"Dadda, dance" she said innocently as she wanted to dance with her father, Kabir smiled at her and came to her level by sitting on his knees, Nisha backed off and let them dance, Kabir started twirling Adhyaa by holding her tiny finger and Adhyaa giggled as she enjoyed this moment with her father.

Everyone clapped for them and then got busy with having dinner, Kaira and Viraj came to them to great them

"Dubaara saagai mubarakho Nisha" Kaira wished her and Nisha thanked her

"Kya baat hai, life time jail ke liye bhi aaj kal log congratulate karte hai" Kabir replied dejectedly and for the first time Viraj giggled at his words while Nisha stamped his foot

"Ms Nisha" Viraj started but Kabir corrected him


"Its Mrs. Nisha Kabir Kumar, Sir" he said proudly as he looked at Nisha...


"Priyanka aapse kuch kehna chahti hai" Viraj continuted and asked her to come ahead and she came ahead, she asked for a sorry and Nisha forgive her

"Nisha, aapki beti bohut cute hai" Kaira said as she adored Adhyaa who was playing with Jwala and Bunty

"Thank you Ma'am, apne Dadda pe gai hai vo" Kabir said and again started his self-praising mode to which Nisha just gave him a whatever look

"Chaliye, abh hum chalte hai" Viraj asked for a leave as it was getting late

"Shadi main zaroor aaiyega please" Kabir requested and they agreed.

Soon everyone dispersed and went to their respective rooms as it was getting to late and they all were tired too.


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Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry niya abhi tak comment nahi kiya itne sare parts pe kaal pkka karogi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fareesha

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Sorry niya abhi tak comment nahi kiya itne sare parts pe kaal pkka karogi😊

Its ok take your time and buddy me if you want PM for future updates😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandal 🤣 🤣 hey ram ye dno kabhi nhi sudhrenge... par cute little princess can handle them well...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Sandal 🤣 🤣 hey ram ye dno kabhi nhi sudhrenge... par cute little princess can handle them well...

Jo sudhar jaye vo NiBir kahan🤣
Tum bhi nahi sudhrogi... do min wait kar leti, first spot chahiye tha mujhe iss page ka for the update

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