NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Amazing update niya
loved nibir cute nok jok on bike ... trio on wedding same dress ... nice
correct kabir entry timing
loved it
cont soin

thnks for pm

Quote

.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Lovely update Niya!

Such a nice start with KN's scooty ride!

Nisha hugging Kabir, him declaring that she would officially be his in a short time span, she blushing at this, him asking about her marriage demands and she wanting the trio to be in the same coloured dress, him teasing her and she getting annoyed, his K-panti 😆 were all very well written moments!

Him complaining that her academy is too near and he could not spend time with her, she trying to pacify him by telling she'l be back early and asking him not to sulk as that would not let her concentrate, both parting with a hug were such lovely moments! 😳

Coming to Priyanka -Nisha scene, I actually did not get angry on priyanka here 😆, because for me she represented the society at large. That's how the society / world is, often insensitive to other's feelings. She just wanted to insult / instigate Nisha, and spoke filth with/without realizing what she's speaking.

Nisha's anger and her eyes welling up with angry tears was well portrayed!

Kabir giving it back to Priyanka in a calm and composed way was really good! 👏. Its this calm/ satairical reply that shuts such mouths. Him supporting her and calming her down was good.

I'm surprised that only Kaira came to appologise for Pri's behaviour and Viraj kept mum? Even after Nisha looked at him and said that she's quitting? 😳. I dont think I appreciate that behaviour / non-responsiveness of Viraj.

Hope we get to see him calling out on Priyanka for her unacceptable words, in the next update 😉

Liked that you ended the chapter with Kabir's K dialogue and Nisha's annoyance over it 😆

A nice update on the whole!

Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aimna khan

@star.angel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Superb mansi 👏
This prinkaaaprinkaaa 😡 😡 😡
Just want to kill her
Good one kabira 😉
I like it
Their scenes were so cute
Just loved it
Waiting for marriage

Quote

Soundharya

@Feltonate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Priyanka...!!!

Y is she interfering in NiBir's life

Kaam -danda nahi hai usse ?

And kabir is really cute

He understands and cares for nisha very well

Update soon...

Quote

Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#315

I just started reading the story from chapter 7 niyu aur pisle parts ke summary mila dusro ke comments se..bohot busy ja raha hain din yaar...I am really sorry but you know the story is going so niceee...Update soon yaar..tu to ekdam hit ho chuki hain...:*

Quote

Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: alisha17
Awesome update
Hate Priyanka
Loved how Kabir made his entry n supported Nisha
Can't wait for next part

Thanks😊

Quote

Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Niyu 😃
aj hi update dedi tune yayy
was awsm to read nibir on skuty
cute kabir when nisha goes
aur jo drama hua u wrote it very well
the scenario whr kabir walks in...nisha ki feelings aur then their moment kabir comforting her
well written 😃

Thanks Jaan😃😃

Quote

Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Geetu se baat hui fb pe
ek mahine pehle yar
wo bol ri thi thk h nd mene kaha tune yad kiya tha so usne bola tha tym mile to karegi teko pm
busy h shayad aj msg krti hu mai

I mish her

Birthday pe bhi wish nahi kiya tha ussne😭

Good news mili kya?😳

Quote

Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: naucfan
Awesome...👏
Priyanka...😡

Thanks😊

Quote

Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: anu012
Amazing update niya
loved nibir cute nok jok on bike ... trio on wedding same dress ... nice
correct kabir entry timing
loved it
cont soin

thnks for pm

Thank you😊