NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
If only i didnt know u... i would have thought it as a niraj story u know 🤣 kabira trying to jealous viraj... and all... 😆 but as i know well enough i know mere nibir ko koi khatra nhi h 😉

Na na NiBir ko no khatra😉😆

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
it was a super-duper part.
nibir bantering was cute..
viraj asking d driver to drive slowly in order to not disturb nibir sleep was lovely
update d nxt part soon

Thanks Shruti😃

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Na na NiBir ko no khatra😉😆

hona bhi nhi chahie 😃

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
hona bhi nhi chahie 😃

Why fear when I am here 😎

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu
res 😃
unres
awesome awesome
awesome
awesome
awesomeee
kabir ki entry hamara hero 😃
nibir convo was so sweet
the bond they share is so perfectly presented 👏
viraj getting j was the best 🤣 i love such scenes 😛
ending was the cutest part of the update
loved it a lot behna 🤗

Thanks Thanks Thanks 🤗

I love them too😳

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu
behna missed my comment 😔

I didn't see na 😛

Abhi kar diya reply😳

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Krishi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Answer to your question is that I have not decided anything yet, the next part decides what it will be😆
Thanks Krishi, your comment made me smile😳

Well, I'll wait for the next part then.. I can't do anything 😆 except studying 😔

It was my pleasure to make you smile Niyu 😳

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poornima_15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

awesome part ... 😊 fighting scene was nice and their aankhon hi aankhon me baate so lovely 😊 😳 update soon ...

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1060675

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Thanks Roopsha, next update jaldi hoga ki nahi yeh pata nahi😆

Koi baat nahi...I'll wait...😃

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Lovely start Niya!

The background sketch at the beginning, local goons attacking their car and Viraj ordering the driver and Nisha not to step out of the car, while he deals with them was so true to his character and very well written.

The goons attacking Viraj, Nisha asking the driver to help him, but he denying, fearing Viraj's orders seemed natural and real, as that's what anyone would have done in that situation 👍🏼

Kabir's entry dialogue was too good! Ekdum hero style ⭐️

The instant change in Nisha's mood seeing Kabir, she saving Viraj and Kabir saving her, and all the three fighting the goons, along with Kabir's dialogues were all very nice moments, again well written!

NiBir hug, Kabir getting to know about the wound, him reprimanding her for putting herself at risk, and Viraj getting jealous seeing their closeness were sweet and funny at the same time 😆

The last scene was very cute with them cuddling eachother in their sleep. 😳

Now, the best part of this story is the convo, not just between KN, but between all the characters! The KN covo was so wonderfully penned down that we could get a nice little glimpse of the bond they shared.

Not just in this update, but in all your stories, you write the interaction between the characters so beautifully, that we readers can very well imagine them conversing!

Also, you write the dialogues so brilliantly that it gives a crystal clear impression of the characters' state of mind / the bond shared by them. And I really adore that in all your stories ❤️

Back to the update 😆, eagerly waiting for the next part 😳

Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊