||The Uninvited Guests||: A KNAUC TS. Chap 3(b) pg:14, 24/2. Complete - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

3a

vishu you killed it girl
loved the descriptions you gave of the house
kriti something is there in that room and that mirror
kriti saw something
sukku what happened to him
fear down my spine

thank you 😳
Hope ur doubts are cleared in 3(b) 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: teju19

Nice and scary one!!!
Would love to read more stories from you..

thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was just amazing... I have no words to express how this story intrigued me... Everything was as perfect as it could be... Thanks a lot for such a story... Basically Kabir and Saurav were the only ones who made it out but all because of Nisha 😔 This was the exact Nisha Gangwal we saw... I wonder what happened to her soul? Free or trapped? Well an epilogue could do wonders 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks sana 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

It was just amazing... I have no words to express how this story intrigued me... Everything was as perfect as it could be... Thanks a lot for such a story... Basically Kabir and Saurav were the only ones who made it out but all because of Nisha 😔 This was the exact Nisha Gangwal we saw... I wonder what happened to her soul? Free or trapped? Well an epilogue could do wonders 😆

thank you so much krishi 😳
There's a reason why Kabir is the only one who came out unharmed.
Well, what do 'you' think about Nisha's soul? Free or trapped? 😉
About epilogue, The whole story stands on its ending and the last lines are specifically written to give the readers a chill 😆. So, an epilogue may take away that thrill is what I feel 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome vishu
you scared the hell out of me
sukku umesh kriti dead
sourav badly injured
and nisha nice to see her back in action
D Vaz she possessed nisha
hayee nisha ko bhi nhi choda
one question sabko maar kuan raha tha D Vaz ya usska assassin
and jo story DVaz ne sunnai woh sach thi ya a trap

Kash nisha kabir baat maan leti and uss villa mein nhi jaati toh Sab thik hota

Sequel milega kya
Story of possessed nisha
thanks for pm
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Awesome vishu

you scared the hell out of me
sukku umesh kriti dead
sourav badly injured
and nisha nice to see her back in action
D Vaz she possessed nisha
hayee nisha ko bhi nhi choda
one question sabko maar kuan raha tha D Vaz ya usska assassin
and jo story DVaz ne sunnai woh sach thi ya a trap

Kash nisha kabir baat maan leti and uss villa mein nhi jaati toh Sab thik hota

Sequel milega kya
Story of possessed nisha
thanks for pm
ritika

thanks ritika 😳
Well the story told by Dolce was Obvio a lie 😆. She wanted to take revenge on people so she killed them and to go outside nd fulfil her revenge she needed to enter a body and so she fabricated a story for Nisha to believe and save her which Nisha did 😆. Also, her assassin fled aftr killing her nd he did nt die 😉
I don't think I'll be able to write a sequel, but wil surely write another story if I can think of a good concept😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

thank you so much krishi 😳

There's a reason why Kabir is the only one who came out unharmed.
Well, what do 'you' think about Nisha's soul? Free or trapped? 😉
About epilogue, The whole story stands on its ending and the last lines are specifically written to give the readers a chill 😆. So, an epilogue may take away that thrill is what I feel 😊


@ coz he never wanted to go there is that the reason
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

thank you so much krishi 😳

There's a reason why Kabir is the only one who came out unharmed.
Well, what do 'you' think about Nisha's soul? Free or trapped? 😉
About epilogue, The whole story stands on its ending and the last lines are specifically written to give the readers a chill 😆. So, an epilogue may take away that thrill is what I feel 😊


@ red coz he never wanted to go there is that the reason
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

thanks ritika 😳

Well the story told by Dolce was Obvio a lie 😆. She wanted to take revenge on people so she killed them and to go outside nd fulfil her revenge she needed to enter a body and so she fabricated a story for Nisha to believe and save her which Nisha did 😆. Also, her assassin fled aftr killing her nd he did nt die 😉
I don't think I'll be able to write a sequel, but wil surely write another story if I can think of a good concept😊


poor nisha she believes whatever everyone say and now paid a hard price for it


will be waiting to read more from you


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