||The Uninvited Guests||: A KNAUC TS. Chap 3(b) pg:14, 24/2. Complete

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Pad lia aakhir kaar 😕 eesekoi darata h bhala... bechare sukku umesh ur kirti... ur nisha too 😭 now how can i sleep 😡

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Vishru maar daala sacchi you killed me
I literally get scared when i was imaging sukku and umesh
Nisha was on true nisha gangwal mode
But now i am confused what happened to real soul of nisha
Do write more stories please

thanks for commenting sujay 😊

Nisha's soul is trapped and her body has been posessed 😉

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Omg... Omg... Omg... what a update yaar 👏
Loved it but it scares me alot
Do write more stories!!!

thanks anmol 😊

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
Pad lia aakhir kaar 😕 eesekoi darata h bhala... bechare sukku umesh ur kirti... ur nisha too 😭 now how can i sleep 😡

arey darane ke liye toh likhi thi 😆

Thanks for commenting mansi 😃 🤗

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Shats

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Parhi liya 😆 😆 😆
Back 2 back updates parliya 🥱 🥱 m sooo dead.last update 🥱 🥱 🥱 killer thrilling chilling literally mind blasting
Brilliant brilliant brilliant 👏 👏 👏 u killed it.hats off to u girl 👏 👏 👏
Sukkuuu 😭 😭
His face 😒
Umesh 😭 😭 😭
D way u described drs 😭 😭 heart wrenching 😭 😭 😭
Saurav omg 😭 😭 kirti 😭 😭
Nisha 👏 👏
But last me nishu ko bhi nahi chora 😭
More dn scary it was heart wrenching.
Yet again brilliantly portrayed 👏 👏
Loved it.
M in luv wid dis TS

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Shats
Parhi liya 😆 😆 😆
Back 2 back updates parliya 🥱 🥱 m sooo dead.last update 🥱 🥱 🥱 killer thrilling chilling literally mind blasting
Brilliant brilliant brilliant 👏 👏 👏 u killed it.hats off to u girl 👏 👏 👏
Sukkuuu 😭 😭
His face 😒
Umesh 😭 😭 😭
D way u described drs 😭 😭 heart wrenching 😭 😭 😭
Saurav omg 😭 😭 kirti 😭 😭
Nisha 👏 👏
But last me nishu ko bhi nahi chora 😭
More dn scary it was heart wrenching.
Yet again brilliantly portrayed 👏 👏
Loved it.
M in luv wid dis TS

thank you so much shats 🤗

Means a lot 😳

As I said before, I wanted it to be that way, wanted to convey how a single mistake of ours' can sometimes cost us our everything 😊

Glad u could pick up on that 😳

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Amazing read 2b just now

so I assume that they climbed the gate and then entered the compound of the house

and that's when they heard the sound and the sign board

amazing dear very spooky

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

vishu you killed it girl

loved the descriptions you gave of the house

kriti something is there in that room and that mirror

kriti saw something

sukku what happened to him

fear down my spine

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Amazing read 2b just now
so I assume that they climbed the gate and then entered the compound of the house
and that's when they heard the sound and the sign board
amazing dear very spooky

thanks ritika 😊

Nope they didn't climb the gate. As the compound was not very high they jumped over it. The voice Nisha heard was when she was about to jump over the compound and the rattling of signboard was when Umesh was about to open the door. 😆 a warning of sorts