New NiBir FF:||On a Journey with You|| NEW UPDATE CHAP 10 - PAGE 34 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Superb chptr dear
loved it

thnks for pm sujay
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Awesome update nikhad
Mehendi scene was too awesome
And NiBir as usual cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesome update.
The dare game was really nice.
And kabir wrote N in nisha's hand. And he was unaware about the rasam. Really nice..
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Thanksss a tooon everyone..I love you guys..You people are the best! I will update on weekend! :D Be with my story please!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@niks sorry 12th boards hai..isliye abhi 14 march tak no insta no net😆
I will read it and unres it after 14.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@sarthak eagerly waiting for your feedbacks buddy! But first give your exams properly,...ALL THE BEST!
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Hi al!! 4th part is here...Messages will be send by Sujay as always!

CHAPTER 4

'I love you Kirti...I really do'...
'I love you too Ritesh', said Kirti looking at other way blushing...

'Uff, finally Ritesh bhai proposed and Kirti accepted', said Kabir breathing out in a relieved way...It was the wedding evening, Ritesh and Kirti were on the rooftop...Finally Ritesh listened to his siblings, Aman and Nisha, who gave him a long speech that morning about proposing Kirti..Nisha and Kabir were hiding behind the rooftop door to check on Ritesh that if he could actually propose at last or not...
Ritesh hugged Kirti...
Nisha: Aww they are so cute!
Kabir: Yeah they are.

Kirti: How am I looking Ritesh?
Ritesh: Nice, just a little cute bhootni in heavy makeup...*laughing*
Kirti: What?! What did you say?! *Angry* Wait, I won't spare you Ritesh Vij...
Nisha: Oh no Kabir, Ritesh will be in trouble now..He shouldn't have been so rude to Kirti..
Kabir: What rude? He was just telling the truth, afterall you are also looking the same, only differnce is you are looking just a very skinny bhootni...*Laughing like Ritesh*
Nisha: Kabiiirrr?! *Pissed off*

Kabir ran away and Nisha started running behind him...On the way, Nisha found a plate full of colours, the colours with which they played a kind of pre-wedding holi game that morning...Nisha took the plate in her hands, threw all the colour on Kabir's face and started laughing...For some seconds, Kabir could not believe what just happened and then he took Nisha's dupatta and started wiping his face with it...Nisha was trying to take back her dupatta, when both of them heard a third voice and looked behind...A lady was stading there and taking out Kabir's name...
-Kabir, Kabir son of mine...
Kabir: Buaji? Oh Maanlekha Buaji, when did you reach?
Maanlekha: Ah, just few moments back...*she looked at Nisha* Seems like, you have become very close to our handsome, talented youngest Vij hmm? Nice going...
Nisha: Excuse me?! *Surprised and feeling weird*
Kabir: Oh nothing Nisha...It is just my Buaji's usual stuffs...Buaji lets go, let me show you the wedding preparations...
Kabir took Maanlekha away because he knew how Maanlekha was...Maanlekha, Maanlekha vij, sister of Maanjeet Vij...She never got married and used to live with Maanjeet in Canada..In the whole family she was the different one...Always finding other's fault was her hobby and she had a very rude mouth...She was very proudy too of her brother's wealth...

It was the time for the garlands exachanging...Umesh was waiting for Aman impatienly...Then finally Aman came...She was looking so pretty that everyone drooled over the bride...Umesh could not take his eyes off from her..Kabir noticed Umesh and started teasing him...Nisha was bringing Aman down, Nisha looked at Kabir and smiled, Kabir smiled back...

At the time of taking 7 vows, everyone was throwing flower petals towards the bride and groom but Kabir was throwing it towards Nisha to irritate her...Suddenly Maanlekha came there, seeing her expression Nisha did not feel a good vibe and just left the place...Kabir understood Nisha's situation and then he started throwing the petals at Maanlekha...
Maanlekha: *Taking Kabir to a corner* What are you doing Kabir?
Kabir: What? I was throwing petals at you...
Maanlekha: Not that, before me why were you throwing the petals on Nisha? What is going on?
Kabir: What, what is going on? Is throwing petals a crime?
Maanlekha: No, but in movies hero throws petals on that girl with whom he gets married later, I mean the heroine you know?
Kabir: Uff buaji, you and your bollywood movies...In that case, I threw petals on you too...So lets go and get married maybe?
Maanlekha: Ouf Kabir, you are immposible...
Maanlekha left the place getting frustated...Kabir watched her going and laughed...Pammi saw Kabir laughing and came to him..

Pammi: What's the matter Kabir? Laughing so much, hmm?
Kabir: Maa, the hurricane had come finally...Damn, she won't ever be normal...
Pammi: Maanlekha? Kabir! How many times I have told you she is your buaji...Don't talk like that...
Kabir: Maa, she never leaves me any way to talk a nice thing about her...*Fed up face*
Pammi: *Ruffling Kabir's hair* Haha, she will be fine Kabir...
Kabir: No one knows when...*Sighed*

The wedding functions were almost at it's ending point...Kabir was looking for Nisha but could not find her anywhere...He came out of the Singh house and started finding her outside...There she was, sitting on a bench made of fence at the little garden behind their house...Kabir joined her on the bench...
Kabir: Aah, Nisha?! You are crying...
Nisha: *Wiping her tears* Umm, where? No Kabir...
Kabir: Come on Nisha, you can't lie properly..And to me? Not possible at all. Remember, I was your bestfriend in childhood? Haha...
Nisha: *Smiled a bit* Hmm Kabir...
Kabir: Aah, a little smile on your face at least...So tell me, what are the tears for? Aman bhabi right?
Nisha: Hmm...
Kabir: Hey, you were so strong the whole day at home...You were controlling your parents and bhabi also and making them understand to control emotions...
Nisha: Because I can't break down infront of them, if I did, then who would pacify them?
Kabir: Hmm..You know, don't take tension...You all will be always close to Aman bhabi..You can video chat with her, call her anytime and I myself will make sure that you get every update about her...
Nisha: Haha, Kabir...You are amazing..But actually I have another tension too...
Kabir: What is it? Anything serious? *Worried*
Nisha: Umm, tomorrow my scolarship result will come out...
Kabir: Wow! That's great...Aman bhabi will come for the Pak Phere tomorrow morning and Myself, Bhattu, Ritesh bhai along with Dolly di, Saurav jeeju, kids and Jwala will come at evening to pick her up...So, I guess I will be able to congratulate you in person...
Nisha: Kabir, I don't even know if I will be selected or not and if I don't get the scolarship, I don't know what I will do..Papaji can not afford my study expenses in any university of here too...He won't accept it but I can't be a burden on him...
Kabir: Come on Nisha, think positive always okay?..You will get it, trust me you will...I have faith on you...
Nisha: *Looking at Kabir in awe* Kabir, you are my childhood bestfriend you claim, but then why did you lie to me that day?
Kabir: What lie Nisha? *Amazed*
Nisha: That Palak Paneer was too salty...I tasted it later...
Kabir: *Chuckling* Oh that! I did not want you to be upset...Sometimes things just don't get perfect, not a fact Nisha...By the way, I am really sorry for Maanlekha Bua's behaviour..You know she is a bit like that...
Nisha: It is fine Kabir...In every family or other, there are some different people..We just need to cope up with them and handle them with love...
Kabir: With love and that too Maanlekha buaji? *Not so sure face* Nisha, you can come up with such ideas because you are too nice...
Nisha: *Smiles* Thank you for everything you said to me in last some minutes Kabir...It really feels nice now...
Kabir: Anytime Nisha and you don't need to thank me, afterall we are besties of childhood haha...*Wanting to hug Nisha from side* Umm may I?

Nisha laughed a bit and nodded her head in an affirmative way...Kabir smiled and hugged her from side...

TBC...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update nikhad
Loved it...!!
Update soon ...!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Lovely update 😳
Do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
lovely update😃😃😃
colours😳😳😳nibir😳love it
inn dhono ki love story kab start hogi😉😉
nikhadh👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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