NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete)

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Chapter 1
Awesome shibu 👏
Do ladki ek ladka 😉
Bechara kabir toh gaya vo ek nisha ko nahi sambhal pa raha tha ab do do ko sambhalana hai 🤣

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Soundharya

@Feltonate

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Shibu great yaar and the chapter title is awesome...

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Shats

@Shats

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Supr interesting but dis navya hw can she do dis kahi yahi kabaab me haddi naa ban jaaye 🥱
Nibir ❤️
Update soon

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

awsum..
kabir n nisha both lost in each oteer's thoughts...
bas navya twin hone ka galat fayda na uthaye

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

awsum..
kabir n nisha both lost in each other's thoughts...
bas navya twin hone ka galat fayda na uthaye

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: naucloverkittu
Interesting nisha navya both like him bt kabira love nisha...ohh god nisa kabir ki itni adat ho gayii h muje k navya ko bhi as aneri imagine kr rhi hu tb bhi muje wo achi ni lg rhi nisha naam se jyada hi pyr h muje...
Nice part

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Shibu awesome story and awesome character sketch 👏
Loved it
Sorry for late comment

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Chapter 1
Awesome shibu 👏
Do ladki ek ladka 😉
Bechara kabir toh gaya vo ek nisha ko nahi sambhal pa raha tha ab do do ko sambhalana hai 🤣

Originally posted by: itssound
Shibu great yaar and the chapter title is awesome...

Originally posted by: janvi0513
Nice start

Originally posted by: Shats
Supr interesting but dis navya hw can she do dis kahi yahi kabaab me haddi naa ban jaaye 🥱
Nibir ❤️
Update soon

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
awsum..
kabir n nisha both lost in each oteer's thoughts...
bas navya twin hone ka galat fayda na uthaye

Thanks a lot fr Commenting guys😃

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Chapter 1- Lovely update😃😆😆

Very intriguing👏

Love how Kabir was annnoyed when Vasu called him Jojo😆

Loved Vasu-Kabir's conversation😆 And Arjun too joining in😆

Vasundhara- (murmuring to herself) jaisa baap, waisa beta...🤣🤣

Love the girls' reactions on seeing Kabir😆

She wasn't wailing for help though, infact, she was firing the person who hit her- Love this fact😃😆

Loved Nisha's intro' 😉

She turned and the world stopped for Kabir. Dressed in blue jeans and white t-shirt, she looked as innocent as a baby, as beautiful as an angel and yet was strong enough to handle the situation.- hayee😳 pehli nazar mein hi Kabir ki duniya hil gayi😆

Loved how just a mere glance at each other was enough to melt their hearts for each other😳

Loved how Nisha wanted to hide about the accident to save her parents from worrying😳😃

She looked so cute. Hold on! Main raste pe khade rehkar ek ladki ko admire kar raha hoon? He face palmed mentally - This part was too cute and adorable

Loved how both of them couldnt stop thinking about each other😳

Navya spoke to Kabir😆 Uske dil mein bhi laddo phoota😆 She hated lying but now she is lying to meet Kabir. Iss situation mein mujhe ek hi gaana sujhta hai "Pyaar hume kis mod pe le aaya"😆😉

So now Navya madam has planned to meet Kabir as Nisha😎

I love how u have built up the suspense👏😆 The development of the story has been done well👏

All in all, an interesting and pleasant read😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Shibu 🤗
Love the prologue😃😃😃
I m so excited and curious to read this story
Love ur concept😳😳😳
Aneri ka double role😆😆😆
This in itself has got us glued to ur story😆😉
Your banner looks amazing😃
The pics of the characters is also great👍🏼 Especially of Navya and Nisha as it helps us visualize the characters and view them in that light😊
And I love the fact that u r writing a thriller😃😉

Than u fr commenting Mihu🤗
ab chappy 1 pe unres kar lena😆