A NiBir Drabble || Immortal Love||

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A NIBIR DRABBLE|| Immortal Love||

Nishaaa..." I took her name for the umpteenth time , trying to make her notice me since an hour, but she seemed to be extremely unconcerned about me, as she sat with him, wrapping her arms around him. The proximity between them was too much, I couldn't see her like this as Jealousy hovered over my head, and ,

That's it..." I shouted out of nowhere.

That's when she snapped open her eyes in astonishment.

Kya hain kabir...paagal hain kya chilla kyun raha hain...??" She shouted on me with a mere irritation in her voice.

Main kyun chilla raha hun nishaa...main kyun chilla raha hun...tu puch rahi hain ye mujhse...??" I asked her raising my eyebrows.

To chilla tu raha hain to tujhse hi puchungi naa...my baby is sleeping...he will get disturbed...to chillana bandh karr...!" she said shouting at me.

Nishaaa..."I raised my voice again.

Lower your damn voice kabirr..."she said again glaring at me.

I sighed and tried to lower my voice...but my inner feelings weren't letting me to.

Nishaa...i can tolerate anything...but not this...!" I shouted pointing at him.

He is my love kabirr..." she said breaking my heart.

But I am your husband...and your first love!" I said righteously.

I can't love you anymore kabir...i am over with you...!" she said, and tears immediately brimmed in my eyes.

But for this dog nishaa...you love this bloody dog more than me...really..??!" I shouted in extreme amazement and pain.

Don't you dare call him a dog...mind your words kabir! " she said

Abb kutte ko kutta nahi to kya bolu main..." I shouted.

I want a divorce ...that's it...! " said she shocking me.

What did I say...I just said that I can't tolerate your extra-marital affairs, that's it...was I wrong...??" I asked.

Nooo...you weren't wrong...I was wrong..that I trusted you...you brought him to me...now you are doing this...you are a hypocrite kabirr...a damn hypocrite! " she said as tears brimmed in her eyes.

She stood up from the sofa, and walked into our bedroom in rage, and he followed her smirking at me. she banged the door on my face, making the signboard on the door "DOGS NOT ALLOWED" fall on the floor. I sat down in the sofa with my shattered heart in my hands, that's when someone entered into my house, and said,

Meaaawww..." I looked at her, she looked at me.

Tujhee dekhaa to ye jaana sanamm...pyaar hota hain deewanaa sanam...ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum...teri baahon me marr jaaye hum..."

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P.S. Don't ask me what it was...just had the idea and wrote it...now you can like and bang your heads in the comments!🤣🤣🤣

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Niyati_T thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I want a cute dog too šŸ˜’
Dog ke samne pati ki value nahi hoti toh bhi koi probelm nahi bas dog hona chahiyešŸ˜†
Kutta nahi toh billi hi sahi... Kabir ko insaan ki tarah pyaar nahi mil raha 🤣
Much needed break
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg..it was hillarious.
nisha n kabir having divorce just bcoz of a dog n at last dat "meawww"
superb..rofling 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Baba ji yeh kya tha 😃
Awesome+hilarious šŸ‘
Dogs not allowed šŸ˜‰
Mewww 🤣
Full fun 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣
Bicharaa kabir 😭 doggi ne usse uska pyar cheen liya 😭 🤣
Kutte and billi k liye billi and kutte resp šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ (I hope u got what m trying 2 say) šŸ˜†
Hehehe luved it šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shats

🤣 🤣 🤣
Bicharaa kabir 😭 doggi ne usse uska pyar cheen liya 😭 🤣
Kutte and billi k liye billi and kutte resp šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ (I hope u got what m trying 2 say) šŸ˜†
Hehehe luved it šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

I understood🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cat and dogs are raining 🤣 dont u try to understand it baba 🤣 m not explaining
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lucky doggyyy...🤣
Becharaa kabiraaa..🤣
Loved it Annie...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
Edited by zaara610 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome šŸ‘
I was like 🤣 🤣 🤣
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res...
Unres

Superb drabble ABM😊
Kabira getting j🤣 wo b kutte se🤣🤣
Divorce🤣🤣
N sab se mast wo lags meow🤣
Tujhe dekha to ye jana sanam🤣
M rofling like a mad person🤣🤣
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago

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