**NIBIR TS - ISHQ NASHEEN** part-3 page 20 complete - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Read the 2nd part. I always love the narration in first person so...ty for that mansi.

The description were awesome.
Especially the beginning part was amazing. Thoughts of nisha in the brackets were very realistic and funny.
Their meeting scene was the best part .
Overall a complete package , I loved it.

so award for the first comment goes to sarthak... *claps* 😆 thank u actuaaly i luv it as first person too... but its kind of a little hard to write... but yes being the topic marriage of a girl... its comes a little easily 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Res res res
kal after exam I will read
unres
mansi superb yaar
loved the narration from niIsha and kabir's view
the way nisha kept saying that it was just a attraction and not love shattered the moment she saw him
the passionate hug and the hug of need was awesome
heh kya nishu be mana kar diya
agree jaldi update karna raha nhi jayega mujhse
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

so award for the first comment goes to sarthak... *claps* 😆 thank u actuaaly i luv it as first person too... but its kind of a little hard to write... but yes being the topic marriage of a girl... its comes a little easily 🤣

don't worry problem kya hai 3aane ke baad aur easy ho jayega🤣afterall post khaas aapki demand par banega😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

don't worry problem kya hai 3aane ke baad aur easy ho jayega🤣afterall post khaas aapki demand par banega😆

i m waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Aww it was sho cute
Kabir said I love you
Nishu ek number ki duffer hai
Kabir knows Nisha very well
This time update soon
Thx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Read the first part...

Amazing... Mansi...it was damn superb...
I remembered a song while reading this..
Pehla nasha pehla khumaar...
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
But yaar yeh kya kiya kitne saare logo ki yaad dila di tumne...☺️🤣

kis ki yaad aagyi🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
are use ginti bhi yaad nhi naam kya yaad rhega 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Aha121

Aww it was sho cute
Kabir said I love you
Nishu ek number ki duffer hai
Kabir knows Nisha very well
This time update soon
Thx for pm

thanks sana... are are bechari nishu ko duffer mat bulao yaar kabira will get angry 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

are use ginti bhi yaad nhi naam kya yaad rhega 🤣

list bahut lambi mujhe har mahine saccha pyaar Jo hota hai..🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Lovely update!
Kabir's and Nisha's POVs were very well written!
Loved how you changed into third person narrative for their meeting and Kabir's confession!
Their pain when they feel that they are undeserving of the other was again well described in their respective POVs.
Is there an another part? If yes please continue soon 😳
Thanks for pm 😊

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