**NIBIR TS - ISHQ NASHEEN** part-3 page 20 complete - Page 9

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

are use ginti bhi yaad nhi naam kya yaad rhega 🤣

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

list bahut lambi mujhe har mahine saccha pyaar Jo hota hai..🤣

boys n unka sachha pyaar 🤣

Superb mansi
beautifully written ... loved it ❤️
cont soon

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Lovely update!

Kabir's and Nisha's POVs were very well written!

Loved how you changed into third person narrative for their meeting and Kabir's confession!

Their pain when they feel that they are undeserving of the other was again well described in their respective POVs.

Is there an another part? If yes please continue soon😳

Thanks for pm😊

thanks vishru... can i tell u something... u r slowly becoming one of my fav commenters... not onlyfor my stories but for others too 😳

Originally posted by: Amina...

<font color="#cc0099">It Was " AMAZING " Mansi ...!!!
Such A " BEAUTIFUL " Piece of Writing ...!!!
In The Start , The Way You Expressed The Feelings Of Two People Very Much In Love ... Was " Mindblowing " ... it was "Sweet" , "Cute" , "Funny" ,All At The Same Time ... The Way You Expressed Their Emotions ... like The Way Nisha Didn't Wanted To Meet Kabir But At The Same Time She Was So Eager To Meet Kabir ... On The Other Hand , Kabir , The Person Dying To Meet His Lady Love , At The Same Time Regretful Of His Doing , Was Something Very Beautiful ...!!!
And Then When They Finally Met ... How They Were Unable To Control Their Emotions , The Way You Expressed Their Love , Their Wait For Each Other ... Was "Amazing" ...!!!
And In The End ... How You Expressed Nisha'a Regret And Kabir Heart Broken State ... Was So " HEART TOUCHING " ...!!!
You Are One " AMAZING " Writer Mansi ...!!!
Today Am Even BIG BIG BIG FAN Of Yours ...!!!</font>

awww ami... inni taarif 😳 bus kar yaar...

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb mansi
beautifully written ... loved it ❤️
cont soon

thnks for pm

thanks anu

Mansi ...I m mad bCz I don't know how much u have explained the situation. ...Both the pov was for nibir but I truly feel the emotional and I don't know when my eyes experience the tear loved it ...The song of gangaa I loved

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awww ami... inni taarif 😳 bus kar yaar...

You Really Deserve It Mansi 😊

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

thanks vishru... can i tell u something... u r slowly becoming one of my fav commenters... not onlyfor my stories but for others too 😳

oh thanks 😳 What I feel is when we read a story we should honestly tell the writer the good points of the story and where there is a scope for improvement. In this way both the writer and the reader benefits. The writer because he/she can know his/her good points and retain them and improve on the not so good points. The reader as we will get an even better update / chapter to read. 😊