NIBIR TS- TU MERE PAAS HAI {completed } *page 13* - Page 12

Originally posted by: poornima_15

finally another awesome ending ... kabira ko uski jaan wapis mil gyi aur hme os ki jagah ts hmari jaan 😆 ... beautiful ..

thanks poornima 😆

Originally posted by: anu012

superb update mansi

thanks anu 😳

Originally posted by: Amina...

Awww , it was so Beautiful ...!!!
Loved it so so so so so so sooo Much ...!!!
Thanks for writing another chapter ...!!!

thanks ami 😳

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Awesome

thanks janvi 😳

Originally posted by: alisha17

Aw dat was a beautiful ending to ur story

Loved it

Thnku for the pm

thanks alisha 😳

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

wifey it was sho sho sho beautiful 🤗
I loved each and every bit if it
kabira ko uski jaan mil gayi
a beautiful happy ending 👏
awesome
amazing
beautiful
lovely
wifey 👏 👏

thanks hubby ☺️

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
Nishu thikh hui
Kabira usse kitna pyaar karta hai❤️

thanks shibu 😳

Originally posted by: itznimi003

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Unres

Yipieee finally mujhe dusra part mil Hi gya... 🥳

Firstly thanchu...so much Mansi for giving us its second part n making yr OS ...TS😊

Super duper update Mansi❤️

D way dey danced...😊 d way he was kissing her n she was moaning...I thought dat his jaan is back😊

But ye kya wo nisha gangwal Hi thi...😔

D way he steadied her top n immediately apologized to her made me drool over him yr he is a person of gem...😊

His pain ...dat was inside him all together came out... 😭

Kabir was on the terrace... crying his heart out. " waapas aa jao jaan... pls waapas aa jao... mai ur nhi kar paunga jaan... ur nhi hoga mjhse... meri jaan lauta do... mat karo esa..." he cried bitterly. "kya karne wala tha tu kabir... kya ho gya tha... vo teri hoke bhi teri nhi h kabir... kya soch rhi hogi vo tere baare m... tu esa kaise kar sakta h... kya hota agar... nhi... oh god what mess have u created kabir... kya asar hoga uspe..." he cursed himself hitting his head. " nisha... pls come back to me pls... i would die without u jaan... mar jaunga mai"

@blue I was literally crying like der is no 2morrow... 😭 I was feeling his pain yr...yr writing has such power dat u can make yr reader d pain dat ur character feels😊

Fir jab nishu ne awaaz lagai aur is baar kabira stair se slip hua...to nishu ke past n present k emotions mix ho gye...u wrote dat beautifully

Finally kabire ki tapasya puri hui aur use uski jaan wapis mil gyi...😊

Loved RL scene wid nibir ❤️

Nishu khud ko blame krri thi...

Loved d way kabira said ki agar tu meri jagah hoti to kya krti chhod deti tu mujhe akele...

Finally his j wali wifey is back...😊

Mansi u know wat u know verry well how to clean bowled yr readers😊

thank u nimzi... 🤗 waise agar uski jaan hoti to uska intzaar nhi karti seedha attack kar deti uspe 😉

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

I love it

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

thank u nimzi... 🤗 waise agar uski jaan hoti to uska intzaar nhi karti seedha attack kar deti uspe 😉

🤣🤣 ha sahi boli...😉...kash uski jaan ki jagah mai hoti