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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
arey tu meri phuphs h Vivian fan ki...
try ni karte hum... try ka Hindi word koshish h na!!
kyunki jab koshish ka pata chalta hai uska pala rk/Vivian fan se pada hai toh wo apne ap kamyaab ho jati hai!!! 😉 ahaan
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

arey tu meri phuphs h Vivian fan ki...
try ni karte hum... try ka Hindi word koshish h na!!
kyunki jab koshish ka pata chalta hai uska pala rk/Vivian fan se pada hai toh wo apne ap kamyaab ho jati hai!!! 😉 ahaan

he bhagwan 🤣
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U K'S ARE VERY BAD... LIKHWA HI LIA NA ISKA SECOND PART... 😡 BHOT DUSHT HO TUM LOG 🤣 UR MAI BHI... HMESHA MAAN JATI HU 😔 k kahiki... 🤣 kitti sharif k hu mai dekho... 🤣 lo ab bhugto tum sab...


PART - 2 {TU MERE PAAS H}

Nisha circled her arms around his neck as they started flowing on the music. He danced with her just like he used to did earlier. Their high end passion reflecting in their moves. He traced her beauty bone making her shudder under his touch as he traced her arms lovingly. She felt as a current surged in her and as the last beat resonated she crashed herself in him. The music stopped but their heavy breaths echoed in the room. He called her out with all his love "jaan..." she looked up in his hazel brown eyes. Love... he saw love in her eyes... pure love. He inhaled a sharp breath as he can feel her breath on his lips. He took her face in his palms and showered it with his soft wet kisses. She closed her eyes feeling him on her. He moved to her neck kissing her all over. She just let soft moan feeling him. Her hands moved to his hair pushing him more on her. Kabir lost all control on himself as she called him out in her soft moan. He placed his hand on her waist and pulled her sleeve down her arm exposing her creamy skin to him he moved to shoulder and kissed her up and down when she pulled him up.She closed her eyes parting her lips. How much he have yearned to taste her... his jaan. He placed his lips on her when she shuddered again. "kabiraa..." she moaned and her moan brought him back to reality. She was nisha... nisha gangwal... not his wifey not his jaan... he immediately pulled back. Nisha looked at him confused. "m sorry nishu... m sorry..." he looked at the ground cursing himself for losing his control. "kabiraa..." she called out him making him look at her. He immediately steadied her top and hugged her. "m sorry jaan... i shouldnt have done that" he left her and turned to terrace leaving her there.

Nisha stood their engulfing what just happened. He was going to kiss her but... and why she let that happen why she didn't stopped him from touching her. Her head throbbed badly as she turned and went to the sofa collapsing on it.

Kabir was on the terrace... crying his heart out. " waapas aa jao jaan... pls waapas aa jao... mai ur nhi kar paunga jaan... ur nhi hoga mjhse... meri jaan lauta do... mat karo esa..." he cried bitterly. "kya karne wala tha tu kabir... kya ho gya tha... vo teri hoke bhi teri nhi h kabir... kya soch rhi hogi vo tere baare m... tu esa kaise kar sakta h... kya hota agar... nhi... oh god what mess have u created kabir... kya asar hoga uspe..." he cursed himself hitting his head. " nisha... pls come back to me pls... i would die without u jaan... mar jaunga mai" he closed his eyes letting his tears fall. He still was in the same position when he heard her scream.

"kabirrr..." she screamed as she started hyperventilating in her dream. She saw herself falling from stairs, she was lying in the pool of blood. Kabir was not there to protect her. She screamed again "kabirrr..." and opened her eyes finding him all over. She stood up and shouted his name again.

He came running to her. "nisha... kya hua..." he stepped down in a hurry and slipped from the stairs. Thankfully it was just two steps and he had a minute sprain in his ankle but the scene horrified nisha to no extent. She just saw him falling from stairs. She can see him lying in pool of blood. Her dream and reality merged to shock her beyond senses, she sat by his side as he tried to sit back "khoon... kabir... khoon.." she saw her hands in blood she can still see him lying there lifeless. "nisha... m ok jaan... kya hua kha h khoon" he was confused while she was half standing looking at him horrified. "kabirrr..." she shouted last time as she fainted with a thud. "nisha..." he saw her falling and catched her in a nick of time. "nisha... nisha uth... uth ja... kya hua jaan..." he tried to wake her up but all in vain. He stood up with a great difficulty as his ankle refused to take up his weight. But he stood up and carried nisha to their bedroom. "nishu... nishu uth ja pls... pls uth ja nishu... dekh phir se mat kar mere sath esa..." he cried again but controlled and decided to take her to the hospital.

Kabir was waiting outside as the doctors were doing their work inside. He was praying when the doctor came. "mr. Rathore... she is fine... but we have done certain tests so u have to wait for it till then u can see her." he immediately went to be with her. "nishaaa..." he hugged her tightly as she slowly opened her eyes to him. "m so sorry jaan... m so sorry..." he said. She just hugged him tight. "kabiraa... mai thik hu..." she whispered. "it is all my mistake jaan... i shouldn't have done that... m so so sorry" he cried again. "tumne kuch nhi kia..." she said. He cupped her face " pls forgive me jaan..." he said. She kissed his forehead silently. "pair kaisa h?" she asked as he looked at him confused. He realised he had sprained his leg. "that's ok... absolutely fine" he lied. "show me..."she eyed him. "but..." he couldn't complete before that she started climbing down the bed. "ok ok fine jaan... i will take care of it... u rest" he made her lie down again. "promise..?" she asked. "yes jaan..." he kissed her forehead.

All the tests were done and surprisingly her clot was vanishing. "mr. Rathore... it's a good news... but i don't know if she will be back or not... because the damage has been done" he sighed. Kabir controlled his pricking tears and took her home.

He made her lie down on the bed. "u fine na nishu..." he asked. She nodded. He got up and brought her food and medicines. "so jao jaan..." he patted her head as she smiled at him closing her eyes. Its been an hour since he was in the same position patting her head listening to her heart beats. The breaths of this one person was imp for him above all the things. He wanted to love her... tell her how much he misses her... how only a slight hope is his only survival. He didn't knew when his tears started flowing again, he didnt knew why... but today his hopes are slipping... his strength was giving way... he was weak now... he was tired. Nisha woke up due to his silent sob. "kabirr..." she wiped his tears. He came back to his senses on her touch. "m sorry jaan... meri wajah se neend kharab ho gyi na... u sleep mai abhi aaya..." he tried to get up when she held his hand. "mjhse bhi apna dard chhupa lega... mere k wala hubby..." his world stopped with the last past of her sentence. A no. Of emotions pierced his heart. He closed his eyes for a brief moment before turning to HER. "ni...nishu... kya kha tune?" he was almost breathless. "mere k wale hubby..." tears prickled through her eyes when he crashed her in himself. "tu... tu waapas aa gyi nishu... meri jaan... meri nishu waapas aa gyi..." he rubbed her back making sure he wasn't dreaming. "fir se bol jaan... fir se bula mjhe" he cupped her face. "kabiraaa... m here... ur j wali wifey... ur jaan" she cupped his face and kissed his eyes as he cried again. "nishu... tu aa gyi mere paas...meri nishu... meri jaan" he hugged her again as he roamed his hand on her body making sure she was there. "m here hubby... m with u" she pulled his hands on her face and kissed his palm "nibir promise..."she replied.she slid themselves in the duvet letting him cry his heart out. He kept his head on her chest clinging on her for his dear life. She kept caressing his hair as he kept crying for a long time. When she couldn't take it anymore... she pulled him up. "stop kabira... pls dont cry more... i cant see u in so much pain... i would die rather than giving u such pain" she said as her own tears made their way. "no nishu... don't say that... and pls dont do this to me again... i won't be able to live through it this time... i just can't... i luv u beyond anything and everything nishu... dont do this again to me" he said. "i know kabira... i know.." she pulled him on her again. He hugged her again... today he just cant get enough of her... he wanted to keep her safe keep her close... close to his heart... his soul. She was his life in every true sense. " m sorry kabir... m sorry to give u such pain... pls mjhe maaf karde kabira" she hugged him back. "teri koi galti nhi h nishu... kisi ki koi galti nhi" he hitched in a deep breath controlling himself. He cherished her face as she did the same. It felt like they have met after a long time. "nishu..." he said. "hmmm.." she said looking back into his hazel brown eyes. "jaan... mjhe hospital m hi kyu nhi btaya... itna kyu tadpaya mjhe" he asked stroking her cheeks. " yaad to shayad tabhi aa gya tha jab tjhe stairs se girte dekha par kuch samaj hi nhi aaya... itna khoon... tera dard se bhara chehra... mjhe kuch bhi samaj nhi aaya..." she said still trying to find some wound mark on his forehead cherishing his handsome face as he lie on her almost crushing her. "hey nishu... itna mat soch... aaram kar jaan" he kissed her forehead as her head throbbed."par jab hospital m jaagi to... to samaj gyi thi... par phir tu itna pareshan ho rha tha... socha thoda aur pareshan karu..." she said so seriously but smiled the next moment."socha to tha tjhe kal subah jagaungi... jaise hmesha jagati thi... par mjhe nhi pta tha maine itna pareshan kia tjhe.. itna rulaya..." she said as tears flooded in her beautiful orbs again. "nhi jaan... esa nhi h..." he kissed her cute nose. "ab so jao jaan... subah maa papa ko bhi to btana h sab" he covered her properly and lie by her side patting her head. They kept looking at each other till sleep came and over powered them.

Next morning... ramesh and laxmi were at their doorsteps to meet their daughter. Laxmi cried hugging her while ramesh too couldnt stop himself from being emotional. Nisha spent the whole day in her parents warm embrace trying to sooth their pain. Kabir cherished the moment. Seeing his nisha back... that love filled eyes... that rosy lips which smiled on him giving his life back to him was enough for him to be happy. Ramesh and laxmi took their leave in the evening as they know their children needs time alone after all kabir has waited for more than a year and today finally his wait was paid off. They had their dinner in utter silence just letting each other feel the other one. Kabir fed her through his hands while she did the same. He made their bed and asked her to rest while he himself went to change. He came and was surprised to see nisha by the side of balcony. "nishu... soi nhi... aaram kar le" he turned her to saw tears in her eyes. "hey jaan... ro kyu rhi h... kya hua" he asked worried. "thank u kabir thank u so much..." she crashed herself in him sobbing. "thank u kyu bol rhi h nishu" he asked wiping her tears away. "tune mera itna intzaar kaise kia kabir... tu chahta to chhod sakta tha mjhe... mjhe to kuch yaad bhi nhi tha... kaise kia ye sab... tere paas hoke bhi nhi thi kabir... isse jyada takleef ur kis baat ne di hogi tjhe...tu" she was silenced as he pecked her lips suddenly. "nishu... agar us din teri jagah mai hota... mjhe kuch yaad nhi rehta to... to tu chhod deti mjhe... chali jati mjhe chhodke... nhi rehti mere sath mere paas..." he pulled her face. She closed her eyes and he can the pain in her face. "jab tu nhi reh sakti mere bagair... to mai kaise reh pata... tjhe khud se alag nhi kar sakta nishu..." he kissed her tears away. "itna pyaar kaise kar sakta h tu mjhse..." she asked. "jaise tu kar sakti h waise hi... kya mjhe nhi pta... subah se apne aap ko kos rhi h meri wajah se... mjhe pta h meri nishu mjhe koi takleef nhi degi... kabhi bhi nhi" he said. She snuggled in him smiling. "ander chale..." he took her inside and lie by her side. "kabiraaa... "
"hmmm..."
"tu mjhe sorry kyu bol rha tha..." she asked being innocent.
"kyu... tjhe yaad nhi" he smirked.
"nhi to... kya hua tha... k wale hubby" she asked mischievously, turning to him.
"abhi batata hu j wali wifey..." he closed in and captured her lips in a passionate kiss. she too responded with the unmatched pace as they both went on kissing each other hungrily for a stretch of time. His hands roaming on her body while hers pulling him down through his nape. Finally they parted due to the lack of oxygen but still maintained their connect as their lips were still touching seeping in each others warmth. She felt a little dizzy due to weakness as he smiled and tucked her carefully. "so ja nishu..." he kissed her eyes. She snuggled in him staring in those hazel brown orbs of his.
"i luv u kabiraa"
"i luv u... jaan"


A/N- LO HO JAO KHUSH... 🤣 HAPPIES ENDINGS 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome awesome ending 👏
I became speechless now 😛
Write more stories please
Thanks for the pm
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Another heart-rendering update Mansi❤️
Beautiful and mesmerizing indeed
Nisha circled her arms around his neck as they started flowing on the music. He danced with her just like he used to did earlier. Their high end passion reflecting in their moves. He traced her beauty bone making her shudder under his touch as he traced her arms lovingly. She felt as a current surged in her and as the last beat resonated she crashed herself in him. The music stopped but their heavy breaths echoed in the room. He called her out with all his love "jaan..." she looked up in his hazel brown eyes. Love... he saw love in her eyes... pure love. He inhaled a sharp breath as he can feel her breath on his lips. He took her face in his palms and showered it with his soft wet kisses. She closed her eyes feeling him on her. He moved to her neck kissing her all over. She just let soft moan feeling him. Her hands moved to his hair pushing him more on her. Kabir lost all control on himself as she called him out in her soft moan. He placed his hand on her waist and pulled her sleeve down her arm exposing her creamy skin to him he moved to shoulder and kissed her up and down when she pulled him up.She closed her eyes parting her lips. How much he have yearned to taste her... his jaan. He placed his lips on her when she shuddered again- This part❤️ So hot and romantic😳

Love how you described his broken state. His courage slowly withering away, his hope dying Felt bad for Kabir
Love how even in her dream, Nisha was looking for Kabir to protect her. Just shows how much she relies on him and trusts him with her life😳
Loved how u described Nisha's dream merging with reality👏👏
Love how they both are so concerned about each other😳😳. Kabir sprained his leg but all he was worried about was Nishu . And Nishu despite being so weak was only worried about Kabir😳

He made her lie down on the bed. "u fine na nishu..." he asked. She nodded. He got up and brought her food and medicines. "so jao jaan..." he patted her head as she smiled at him closing her eyes. Its been an hour since he was in the same position patting her head listening to her heart beats. The breaths of this one person was imp for him above all the things. He wanted to love her... tell her how much he misses her... how only a slight hope is his only survival. He didn't knew when his tears started flowing again, he didnt knew why... but today his hopes are slipping... his strength was giving way... he was weak now... he was tired. Nisha woke up due to his silent sob. "kabirr..." she wiped his tears. He came back to his senses on her touch. "m sorry jaan... meri wajah se neend kharab ho gyi na... u sleep mai abhi aaya..." he tried to get up when she held his hand. "mjhse bhi apna dard chhupa lega... mere k wala hubby..." his world stopped with the last past of her sentence. A no. Of emotions pierced his heart. He closed his eyes for a brief moment before turning to HER. "ni...nishu... kya kha tune?" he was almost breathless. "mere k wale hubby..." tears prickled through her eyes when he crashed her in himself. "tu... tu waapas aa gyi nishu... meri jaan... meri nishu waapas aa gyi..." he rubbed her back making sure he wasn't dreaming. "fir se bol jaan... fir se bula mjhe" he cupped her face. "kabiraaa... m here... ur j wali wifey... ur jaan" she cupped his face and kissed his eyes as he cried again. "nishu... tu aa gyi mere paas...meri nishu... meri jaan" he hugged her again as he roamed his hand on her body making sure she was there. "m here hubby... m with u" she pulled his hands on her face and kissed his palm "nibir promise..."she replied.she slid themselves in the duvet letting him cry his heart out. He kept his head on her chest clinging on her for his dear life. She kept caressing his hair as he kept crying for a long time. When she couldn't take it anymore... she pulled him up. "stop kabira... pls dont cry more... i cant see u in so much pain... i would die rather than giving u such pain" she said as her own tears made their way. "no nishu... don't say that... and pls dont do this to me again... i won't be able to live through it this time... i just can't... i luv u beyond anything and everything nishu... dont do this again to me" he said. "i know kabira... i know.." she pulled him on her again. He hugged her again... today he just cant get enough of her... he wanted to keep her safe keep her close... close to his heart... his soul. She was his life in every true sense. " m sorry kabir... m sorry to give u such pain... pls mjhe maaf karde kabira" she hugged him back. "teri koi galti nhi h nishu... kisi ki koi galti nhi" he hitched in a deep breath controlling himself. He cherished her face as she did the same. It felt like they have met after a long time. "nishu..." he said. "hmmm.." she said looking back into his hazel brown eyes. "jaan... mjhe hospital m hi kyu nhi btaya... itna kyu tadpaya mjhe" he asked stroking her cheeks. "
yaad to shayad tabhi aa gya tha jab tjhe stairs se girte dekha par kuch samaj hi nhi aaya... itna khoon... tera dard se bhara chehra... mjhe kuch bhi samaj nhi aaya..." she said still trying to find some wound mark on his forehead cherishing his handsome face as he lie on her almost crushing her. "hey nishu... itna mat soch... aaram kar jaan" he kissed her forehead as her head throbbed."par jab hospital m jaagi to... to samaj gyi thi... par phir tu itna pareshan ho rha tha... socha thoda aur pareshan karu..." she said so seriously but smiled the next moment."socha to tha tjhe kal subah jagaungi... jaise hmesha jagati thi... par mjhe nhi pta tha maine itna pareshan kia tjhe.. itna rulaya..." she said as tears flooded in her beautiful orbs again. "nhi jaan... esa nhi h..." he kissed her cute nose. "ab so jao jaan... subah maa papa ko bhi to btana h sab" he covered her properly and lie by her side patting her head. They kept looking at each other till sleep came and over powered them- This part was my fav❤️ Their pain, longing, love for each other, relief to be with each other was penned down so beautifully👏👏👏 Their love just gives me goosebumps Mesmerizing indeed

"tune mera itna intzaar kaise kia kabir... tu chahta to chhod sakta tha mjhe... mjhe to kuch yaad bhi nhi tha... kaise kia ye sab... tere paas hoke bhi nhi thi kabir... isse jyada takleef ur kis baat ne di hogi tjhe...tu" she was silenced as he pecked her lips suddenly. "nishu... agar us din teri jagah mai hota... mjhe kuch yaad nhi rehta to... to tu chhod deti mjhe... chali jati mjhe chhodke... nhi rehti mere sath mere paas..." he pulled her face. She closed her eyes and he can the pain in her face. "jab tu nhi reh sakti mere bagair... to mai kaise reh pata... tjhe khud se alag nhi kar sakta nishu..." he kissed her tears away. "itna pyaar kaise kar sakta h tu mjhse..." she asked. "jaise tu kar sakti h waise hi... kya mjhe nhi pta... subah se apne aap ko kos rhi h meri wajah se... mjhe pta h meri nishu mjhe koi takleef nhi degi... kabhi bhi nhi" he said. - Hayee😳 Inka pyaar dekh kar hi main mar jawaan Love Kabir's faith in Nishu and their love that he knew if anything were to happen to him, Nishu would react the same way and support him the same way he did❤️ Indeed aisa pyaar kismat waalon ko hi milta hai😳

And loveddd the last part😆😆
"tu mjhe sorry kyu bol rha tha..." she asked being innocent.
"kyu... tjhe yaad nhi" he smirked.
"nhi to... kya hua tha... k wale hubby" she asked mischievously, turning to him.
"abhi batata hu j wali wifey..." he closed in and captured her lips in a passionate kiss. she too responded with the unmatched pace as they both went on kissing each other hungrily for a stretch of time. His hands roaming on her body while hers pulling him down through his nape. Finally they parted due to the lack of oxygen but still maintained their connect as their lips were still touching seeping in each others warmth. She felt a little dizzy due to weakness as he smiled and tucked her carefully. "so ja nishu..." he kissed her eyes. She snuggled in him staring in those hazel brown orbs of his.-☺️☺️ ☺️Ab itne intense baaton ki Nibir romance toh banta hai😆☺️ How we missed the K and J dialogues😳😆😃

All in all, a fabulous story👏
Lovely read😳😉🤗
Aakhir hume humari happy ending mil hi gayi😳😆 Good job K khandaan😎👍🏼😆
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Mansi yaar love u for this
I am at lack of words
loved it
beautifully written
meri dictionary bekar ho gyi hai aaj
samajh nhi aa rha ki kya kahu
it was beyond perfect mansi
thanks for pm
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waah waah os se ts bn gya lovely update as always...finally sb kch is hpy hpy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Res
Awesome awesome ending 👏
I became speechless now 😛
Write more stories please
Thanks for the pm

thanks sujoy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Mansi yaar love u for this

I am at lack of words
loved it
beautifully written
meri dictionary bekar ho gyi hai aaj
samajh nhi aa rha ki kya kahu
it was beyond perfect mansi
thanks for pm
ritika

awww ritzy ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally another awesome ending ... kabira ko uski jaan wapis mil gyi aur hme os ki jagah ts hmari jaan 😆 ... beautiful ..

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