Another heart-rendering update Mansi❤️Beautiful and mesmerizing indeed
Nisha circled her arms around his neck as they started flowing on the music. He danced with her just like he used to did earlier. Their high end passion reflecting in their moves. He traced her beauty bone making her shudder under his touch as he traced her arms lovingly. She felt as a current surged in her and as the last beat resonated she crashed herself in him. The music stopped but their heavy breaths echoed in the room. He called her out with all his love "jaan..." she looked up in his hazel brown eyes. Love... he saw love in her eyes... pure love. He inhaled a sharp breath as he can feel her breath on his lips. He took her face in his palms and showered it with his soft wet kisses. She closed her eyes feeling him on her. He moved to her neck kissing her all over. She just let soft moan feeling him. Her hands moved to his hair pushing him more on her. Kabir lost all control on himself as she called him out in her soft moan. He placed his hand on her waist and pulled her sleeve down her arm exposing her creamy skin to him he moved to shoulder and kissed her up and down when she pulled him up.She closed her eyes parting her lips. How much he have yearned to taste her... his jaan. He placed his lips on her when she shuddered again- This part❤️ So hot and romantic😳
Love how you described his broken state. His courage slowly withering away, his hope dying Felt bad for Kabir
Love how even in her dream, Nisha was looking for Kabir to protect her. Just shows how much she relies on him and trusts him with her life😳
Loved how u described Nisha's dream merging with reality👏👏
Love how they both are so concerned about each other😳😳. Kabir sprained his leg but all he was worried about was Nishu . And Nishu despite being so weak was only worried about Kabir😳
He made her lie down on the bed. "u fine na nishu..." he asked. She nodded. He got up and brought her food and medicines. "so jao jaan..." he patted her head as she smiled at him closing her eyes. Its been an hour since he was in the same position patting her head listening to her heart beats. The breaths of this one person was imp for him above all the things. He wanted to love her... tell her how much he misses her... how only a slight hope is his only survival. He didn't knew when his tears started flowing again, he didnt knew why... but today his hopes are slipping... his strength was giving way... he was weak now... he was tired. Nisha woke up due to his silent sob. "kabirr..." she wiped his tears. He came back to his senses on her touch. "m sorry jaan... meri wajah se neend kharab ho gyi na... u sleep mai abhi aaya..." he tried to get up when she held his hand. "mjhse bhi apna dard chhupa lega... mere k wala hubby..." his world stopped with the last past of her sentence. A no. Of emotions pierced his heart. He closed his eyes for a brief moment before turning to HER. "ni...nishu... kya kha tune?" he was almost breathless. "mere k wale hubby..." tears prickled through her eyes when he crashed her in himself. "tu... tu waapas aa gyi nishu... meri jaan... meri nishu waapas aa gyi..." he rubbed her back making sure he wasn't dreaming. "fir se bol jaan... fir se bula mjhe" he cupped her face. "kabiraaa... m here... ur j wali wifey... ur jaan" she cupped his face and kissed his eyes as he cried again. "nishu... tu aa gyi mere paas...meri nishu... meri jaan" he hugged her again as he roamed his hand on her body making sure she was there. "m here hubby... m with u" she pulled his hands on her face and kissed his palm "nibir promise..."she replied.she slid themselves in the duvet letting him cry his heart out. He kept his head on her chest clinging on her for his dear life. She kept caressing his hair as he kept crying for a long time. When she couldn't take it anymore... she pulled him up. "stop kabira... pls dont cry more... i cant see u in so much pain... i would die rather than giving u such pain" she said as her own tears made their way. "no nishu... don't say that... and pls dont do this to me again... i won't be able to live through it this time... i just can't... i luv u beyond anything and everything nishu... dont do this again to me" he said. "i know kabira... i know.." she pulled him on her again. He hugged her again... today he just cant get enough of her... he wanted to keep her safe keep her close... close to his heart... his soul. She was his life in every true sense. " m sorry kabir... m sorry to give u such pain... pls mjhe maaf karde kabira" she hugged him back. "teri koi galti nhi h nishu... kisi ki koi galti nhi" he hitched in a deep breath controlling himself. He cherished her face as she did the same. It felt like they have met after a long time. "nishu..." he said. "hmmm.." she said looking back into his hazel brown eyes. "jaan... mjhe hospital m hi kyu nhi btaya... itna kyu tadpaya mjhe" he asked stroking her cheeks. "
yaad to shayad tabhi aa gya tha jab tjhe stairs se girte dekha par kuch samaj hi nhi aaya... itna khoon... tera dard se bhara chehra... mjhe kuch bhi samaj nhi aaya..." she said still trying to find some wound mark on his forehead cherishing his handsome face as he lie on her almost crushing her. "hey nishu... itna mat soch... aaram kar jaan" he kissed her forehead as her head throbbed."par jab hospital m jaagi to... to samaj gyi thi... par phir tu itna pareshan ho rha tha... socha thoda aur pareshan karu..." she said so seriously but smiled the next moment."socha to tha tjhe kal subah jagaungi... jaise hmesha jagati thi... par mjhe nhi pta tha maine itna pareshan kia tjhe.. itna rulaya..." she said as tears flooded in her beautiful orbs again. "nhi jaan... esa nhi h..." he kissed her cute nose. "ab so jao jaan... subah maa papa ko bhi to btana h sab" he covered her properly and lie by her side patting her head. They kept looking at each other till sleep came and over powered them- This part was my fav❤️ Their pain, longing, love for each other, relief to be with each other was penned down so beautifully👏👏👏 Their love just gives me goosebumps Mesmerizing indeed
"tune mera itna intzaar kaise kia kabir... tu chahta to chhod sakta tha mjhe... mjhe to kuch yaad bhi nhi tha... kaise kia ye sab... tere paas hoke bhi nhi thi kabir... isse jyada takleef ur kis baat ne di hogi tjhe...tu" she was silenced as he pecked her lips suddenly. "nishu... agar us din teri jagah mai hota... mjhe kuch yaad nhi rehta to... to tu chhod deti mjhe... chali jati mjhe chhodke... nhi rehti mere sath mere paas..." he pulled her face. She closed her eyes and he can the pain in her face. "jab tu nhi reh sakti mere bagair... to mai kaise reh pata... tjhe khud se alag nhi kar sakta nishu..." he kissed her tears away. "itna pyaar kaise kar sakta h tu mjhse..." she asked. "jaise tu kar sakti h waise hi... kya mjhe nhi pta... subah se apne aap ko kos rhi h meri wajah se... mjhe pta h meri nishu mjhe koi takleef nhi degi... kabhi bhi nhi" he said. - Hayee😳 Inka pyaar dekh kar hi main mar jawaan Love Kabir's faith in Nishu and their love that he knew if anything were to happen to him, Nishu would react the same way and support him the same way he did❤️ Indeed aisa pyaar kismat waalon ko hi milta hai😳
And loveddd the last part😆😆
"tu mjhe sorry kyu bol rha tha..." she asked being innocent.
"kyu... tjhe yaad nhi" he smirked.
"nhi to... kya hua tha... k wale hubby" she asked mischievously, turning to him.
"abhi batata hu j wali wifey..." he closed in and captured her lips in a passionate kiss. she too responded with the unmatched pace as they both went on kissing each other hungrily for a stretch of time. His hands roaming on her body while hers pulling him down through his nape. Finally they parted due to the lack of oxygen but still maintained their connect as their lips were still touching seeping in each others warmth. She felt a little dizzy due to weakness as he smiled and tucked her carefully. "so ja nishu..." he kissed her eyes. She snuggled in him staring in those hazel brown orbs of his.-☺️☺️ ☺️Ab itne intense baaton ki Nibir romance toh banta hai😆☺️ How we missed the K and J dialogues😳😆😃
All in all, a fabulous story👏
Lovely read😳😉🤗
Aakhir hume humari happy ending mil hi gayi😳😆 Good job K khandaan😎👍🏼😆
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago