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Yipieee finally mujhe dusra part mil Hi gya... 🥳
Firstly thanchu...so much Mansi for giving us its second part n making yr OS ...TS😊
Super duper update Mansi❤️
D way dey danced...😊 d way he was kissing her n she was moaning...I thought dat his jaan is back😊
But ye kya wo nisha gangwal Hi thi...😔
D way he steadied her top n immediately apologized to her made me drool over him yr he is a person of gem...😊
His pain ...dat was inside him all together came out... 😭
Kabir was on the terrace... crying his heart out. " waapas aa jao jaan... pls waapas aa jao... mai ur nhi kar paunga jaan... ur nhi hoga mjhse... meri jaan lauta do... mat karo esa..." he cried bitterly. "kya karne wala tha tu kabir... kya ho gya tha... vo teri hoke bhi teri nhi h kabir... kya soch rhi hogi vo tere baare m... tu esa kaise kar sakta h... kya hota agar... nhi... oh god what mess have u created kabir... kya asar hoga uspe..." he cursed himself hitting his head. " nisha... pls come back to me pls... i would die without u jaan... mar jaunga mai"@blue I was literally crying like der is no 2morrow... 😭 I was feeling his pain yr...yr writing has such power dat u can make yr reader d pain dat ur character feels😊
Fir jab nishu ne awaaz lagai aur is baar kabira stair se slip hua...to nishu ke past n present k emotions mix ho gye...u wrote dat beautifully
Finally kabire ki tapasya puri hui aur use uski jaan wapis mil gyi...😊
Loved RL scene wid nibir ❤️
Nishu khud ko blame krri thi...
Loved d way kabira said ki agar tu meri jagah hoti to kya krti chhod deti tu mujhe akele...
Finally his j wali wifey is back...😊
Mansi u know wat u know verry well how to clean bowled yr readers😊
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