NIBIR SS:AGAR TUM SATH HO CHAPTER 1 UPDATED ON PAGE 3

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A girl in her early twenties was standing in the balcony trying to calm herself she have been going through hard time since he left her..she is going through the worst phase of her life..there is not a single minute in which she doesn't remembers him all those moments she had with him are the most precious moments..those memories will always be Cherished by her..all those memories comes in flashbacks those crazy cute fights the way he always treated her pamperd her protected her from all the evils he had took care of her he had always been there for her whenever she needed him their relationship was unique ..they understsnds eachother better then they know themselves..his memories always make her cry and smile together..i know I was wrong I always disappointed you you always stood next me supported me whenever I needed you stood with me..when I broke down you supported me..what I did is wrong and now I'm sorry I will fix everything please come back I need you..you promised me na that you won't leave me ever then why did you left ..she was crying uncontrollably when suddenly she heard a knock on the door she wiped her tears and went to open the door...she opened the door and saw lakshmi standing there...maa aap..aye na andar...lakshmi came inside and took nisha's hand in her hand and made her sit on the bed..tu ro rahi hai nishu tune dekhi ha apni haalat...Lakshmi relax me..dekho mujh kuch nahi hua hai mein bilkul happy hoon.said nisha trying to act normal..haan won dikh RHA hai k tu kitni theek apni shakal dehi hai mirror mein..maa aap mere shakal pe jaa rahi ho very bad she said cheekily trying to lighten the situation...nisha mein tere maa hoon or mein tujhe inside out jaanti hoon tu Sab se chupa sakti hai par tu mujhse or apne papa se kabhi nahi chupa sakti..mujhe dikhta hai tu uss k Jane k baad kitni udas rehne lag gayi har waqt tera cherha utra hua rehta hai jab dekho ankh nam hoti hai woh dard woh dukh tere chereh pe saf saf dikhayi deta hai..Jo cherha hemesha phool ki tarha khilta tha jab tu uss ke sath hoti thi har waqt tere chereh pe muskaan hoti thi ab woh he cherha aik murjahi hue phool ke tarha hogya hai..nisha couldn't control herself and hugged Lakshmi tightly and starts crying helplessly..haan maa mein nahi reh sakti uss k bina woh jab sath tha toh pta nahi chali uss ki value par jab aaj woh chala gya hai toh ab pata chal rha hai k woh mere liye kitna important tha maa mujh bas woh chahiyee or much nahi..lakshmi cupped her face and asked her to calm down..nishu kabhi kabhi jo cheez hamare paas hoti hai lekin Hume USS ki kadar nahi hoti issi liyw who cheez humse cheen le jati hai taa ke hum uss ki value kare tere sath jab woh tha tab tujhe uss ki parwha nahi thi par jab aaj woh tere sath nahi toh tujhe USS ki value ka pta chala.hai..har cheez k peeche kuch na kuch upar wale ka.reason hota hai tere or uss alag hone k peeche bhi koi reason hai...laksmhi kissed her forehead and she left the room..

A guy in his early twenties was sitting on a sofa in a big luxurious house..he was talking to someone on the phone when someone came from behind and place hand on her shoulder..he turned to face the person...mom aap aaj jaldi aagayi aap ki toh clients k sath important meeting thi na..
Han woh meeting cancel hogayi par tum batao yeh hum.kya sun rahi hai asked vj curiously..jee mom aap kya baat kar rahi hai..hamare manager ne Hume bataya k tumne India ki ticket karwai hai or tum India jaa rahi ho kaal tumhe pta bhi hai tumhare sath itna kuch hogya phir bhi..mom iss baar kuch nahi hoga I promise you that.. mein company k kaam se jaa rha hoon don't worry..kabir.please try to understand..mom trust me kuch nahi hoga...kabir ab tumhari zid hai toh hum kuch nahi kar sakte but tumhare sathe neha chal rahi hai..mom uss ki kya zarorat hai mein koi bacha tohdi na hoon woh mere sath kya karegi..kabir woh tumhari fiance hai tum.dono ki engagement ho chuki hai or woh india Jana chati thi toh ab tum.jaa he rahi ho toh woh tumhare sath chalegi..
Mom OK jaisa aap Kahe...


TBC..
Hi guys I'm radhika I'm diehard fan of nauc,nibir and mishri.. I am silent reader of this forum but this story popped up in my mind and I couldn't control myself and penned it. Down..please forgive my mistakes and typos...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi radhika
Awesome start radhika 👏
Interesting start 😛
Please update next part soon 😆
Next time pm me also 😊
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Nice start radhika..i want u to continue ds story
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nice prologue.
eagerly waiting for d first chap.
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Welcome to the k khaandaan first of all!
Awesome start, loved it!
Btw, I am Annie !
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi radhika
Awesome start
Pease do contiue
Please do pm me next time 😊
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Hi radhika... nice start

Hi..thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Hi radhika
Awesome start radhika 👏
Interesting start 😛
Please update next part soon 😆
Next time pm me also 😊

Hi..thank you😊
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

Welcome to the k khaandaan first of all!

Awesome start, loved it!
Btw, I am Annie !
Continue soon!

Hi Annie..
Thank you..
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Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu

Hi radhika
Awesome start
Pease do contiue
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Hi
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