Nibir TS- sirf tum (ch 3 pg 11 31/1/16) completed - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update thnx for the pm...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CH 3

Nibir room

Nisha and Kabir walks into the room

Kabir- Nisha jaa tu jake fresh hoja

Nisha - hmm

Nisha goes to get freshen up meanwhile Kabir starts unpacking his clothes and arranging them in the cupboard

After sometime Nisha enters and Kabir sees her

Kabir(while arranging the clothes)- kya yaar Nisha phele i love u bol deti toh kya jata kaam se kaam mujhe itna sara kaam toh nhi karna padta

Nisha- accha toh meri galti hai khayali pulao pakne ke liye mane kaha tha kya

Kabir- iss mein bhi teri hi galti hai

Nisha- accha aur woh kaise

Kabir- dekh agar tu aacha khana banati toh mujhe khayali pulao pakane ki zaroorat hi nhi padti samjhi

Nisha- tu kehna kya chata hai ki mein bura khana banati hun

Kabir- Nisha tu bura nhi jaanlewa khanbanti hai

Nisha- kabirr (and throws a pillow at him)

Kabir- ehh Nisha kya kar rahi hai

Nisha- abhi batati hun kya kar rahi hun (throws another pillow at him)

Kabir catches the pillow and throwing it back at her.

Both run in the entire room throwing pillows at him and finally crashes on bed

Kabir sits by taking support of the head rest while Nisha grabs a pillow put it on his lap and sleep

Kabir- Nisha i know hume abb in pillows ki need nhi hai par phir bhi yaar inhe aise waste nhi karna chahiye emergency mein kaam aa sakti hai

Nisha- emergency

Kabir- haan jab kabhi hamri ladai hogi toh hum yhi karenge na yaad hai na tune maa papa se inn pillows ke bare mein yhi kaha tha

Nisha- Kabir i love u kahe hua 24 gante bhi nhi hua aur tune abhi se jagde e bare mein soch liya (and pouted)

Kabir- abb jagdha toh hoga hi na

Nisha- accha kyun

Kabir- conflict of interests

Nisha- kya

Kabir- dekh mein chahunga ki mein 24*7 tere sath rahu aur kuch na karu par tut oh aisa hone nhi degi kabhi dukaan, kabhi cousins, kabhi kuch kabhi kuch

Nisha- oh aise (smiles at him)

Nisha- i love u Kabir thanks mere life mein anne ke liye

Kabir- thanks to u mujhe apni life ka hissa banana ke liye

And kissed her forehead

Just then there was aknock at their door

Kabir- yaar Nisha next time hum aisa ghar lenge jiss mein hamre room ka darwaja kissi ko bahar se na dikhe hamesha galat time pe disturb karte hain

Nisha- ruk mein dekhti hun

Nisha opens the door and it was vasundra standing there with her bags

Nisha- mom aap kahi jaa rahi hai

Kabirs too walks towards them

vj- hain beta hume viraj ko manana hai to hiss liye unke pass jaa rahe hain aur tum toh ho hi hamrae jojo ke sath toh hume innki koi fikar nhi hai hum chalet hain

nibir- ji mom

Kabir took her bag and hugged her

They bid bye to vj and came inside, it was already lunch time by then, Nisha crashed herself into the sofa

Nisha- Kabir mein bahut thak gyi hun mein khana nhi bana sakti hun

Kabir- no problems wifey chef Kabir aapki khidmat mein hazir hai mein abhi hamre liye noodles bana data hun

Nisha- hain tu noodles bana mein andar hun

After sometime Kabir enters theier room with a plate of noodles

Kabir- yeh lijye aapke noodles

Nisha- abir teri plate kaha hai

Nisha- mein hum dono ke liye ek hi mein le ayah un

Nisha= kyun ek hi plate se khane se pyaar badta hai iss liye

Kabir- nhi ek plate se kahane se kaam kam padta hai issliye

Nisha- kya

Kabir- ab dishes bhi toh mein hi dhounga na toh apna kaam kyun badau

Nisha was lookinh at him with a shocked expression,

Kabir- mujhe nhi plate ko dekh aur khana suru kar

Nisha shook her head at her k husband and stared eating the noodles

Nisha was cleaning the dishes when Kabir entered the kitchen

Kabir- Nisha tu yeh kya kar rahi hai

Nisha- dishes dho rhi hun

Kabir- arre mein kar deta

Nisha- haan phir do din tak mujhe kamchor bulata iss liye meine dho di

Kabir- axccgha aisa hai

He slid his arms around her waist and rested his head on her shoulder

Nisha- Kabir yeh kya kar raha hai tu

Kabir- kuch bhi toh nhi wifey

Nisha shook her head whie Kabir held her even more closely and sometime even use to nuzzle her neck and kiss her cheecks

After nisha's work finished he turned her around and pulled her closer

Kabir- abb romance time wifey

Nisha blushed and looked down

He put a finger inside her chin and made her look into his eyes

She could see only pure love in them

Kabir stared moving towards her lips, Nisha too parted her lips they were about to kiss when the door bell rang

Kabir was irritated beyond words

Kabir- Nisha chal hum idhar se kahi baag chalet hain idhar sab hamre romance ke dushmaan hain

And walked to open the door. It was viraaj at the door

Kabir- bade bhaiya aap andar aaiye na

Viraj- i hope humne aapko disturb nhi kiya kher chodie abb usse actually Kabir maa chati hai ki aap dono aaj dinner pea aye aur unhone aap dono ke liye yeh kapde bhi bheji hain

Kabir- hain woh toh thik hai par kya aapne maa kaha toh kya

Viraj- ji Kabir hmm bua ji se jail mein milne gya the unhone maa ki sari baato ka thik btaya toh humne maa ko maaf kar diya ek aur baat hai kal early morning hum aur maa London jaa rahe hain

Kabir- par aise accanak

Nisha- nhi Kabir sir ko academy ke kaam se jana tha par woh talte rahe

Viraj- ji Kabir Nisha sahi hain chaliye hum chalet hain aap 8 bhej aa jaiega

Nibir- ji

Kabir- Nisha mujhe kuch kaam hai mein abhi aaya

After some time Kabir returned

Kabir- chal Nisha ready ho jate hain

Nisha- hain

Kabir came out wearing his suit where as Nisha was still fidgeting with her saree

Kabir- Nisha jaldi late ho jaege

Nisha- par dekh nay eh saree thik se bandhi nhi rhi hai

Kabir- par uss din bhi toh tune pheni thin a saree

Nisha- uss din toh dolly di ne help kar di thi na

Kabir- hmm

kabir walked towards her, while Nisha was busy talking how diff it is to handle saree and all

Nisha kept talking non stop while Kabir started making her wear the saree and after comleting his job turned her around to the mirror

Nisha- Kabir tujhe saree phenana aata hai

Kabir- hain

Nisha- par kaise

Kabir- woh kya hai na mujhe god ne baata diya tha ki meri wifey ko nhi aati hogi iss liye maine hi sikh li

Nisha- Kabir yaar

Kabir- arre mein bachpanse maa ke sath reheta than a toh maa se zid karta tha ki mujhe bhi pheneni hai iss liye..

Nisha- Kabir tu saree main (and started laughing

Kabir- chal abb hashna band kar aur jaldi se taiyaar ho

Nisha- haan

Nisha walked towards the mirror and started setting her hair

She removed her earings and searching for something that would match the saree when Kabir forwarded his hand and it had the earings which were perfectly matching the saree

Nisha- wow Kabir tu yeh kab laya

Kabir- jab mein abhi bahar gya tha

Kabir made Nisha wear the earrings and they both headed out for dinner

Kabir and Nisha reached , vj and viraj welcomed the warmly, they talked for some time and then headed for dinner.

They all enjoyed the dinner and had some warm family moments. Later vj asked all of them of come to the hall, she had called a photographer as she wanted to take her entire family along.

Vj sat on a single sofa with Kabir and viraj standing on either side and Nisha standing on kabir's side

Both brothers clicked few pics and vj clicked photos with her son and dil.

But Kabir was getting restless to click some romantic photos with Nisha but with vj and viraj around he had to pose like decently with max a arm around her waist or shoulder. He texted viaraj asking him to take mom out for some time, viraj looked at him and he leaded, viraj laughed and lead vj out of the hall, Kabir gave a sigh of relief.

Kabir to photographer- suniye aap abhi jitni bhi photos chikenge woh mein ek address de dunga udhar bhejiega

Kabir and Nisha posed in the titanic pose, in some pics Kabir picked Nisha in his arms in bridal style, in one photo Kabir kissed Nisha;s cheecks without warming and her eyes were of shock while mouth open in shock, they clicked photos hugging each other and many more, finally Kabir heard sounds of viraj and vj entering and atopped the photo session, took a pen and paper and gave the address of their house to the photographer.

Vj to photographer- hume yeh photos aaj raat tak chaiye ho jayengi na

Photographer- ji ma'am

Vj- thik hai

After a few more talks nibir wished a happy journey to vj and viraj , they wanted see off them at airport but vj and viraj asked them not to take troubles. Nibir bid a bye to them and headed for their house.

Nibir bedroom

Nisha went towards the dressing table and started removing her jewelleries, Kabir enterded the room and back hugged Nisha, Nisha blushed.

Kabir (in husky voice, and only for her to hear) mein kuch help karu

Nisha turned towards him and hugged him , Kabir too hugged her back, after infinity they broke their hug and Kabir gently kissed her forehead, Nisha looked at his eyes, their eyes reflecting the depth of their love for each other. That night they became one and promised each other a lofe full of love, care and togetherness

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hope u like it

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Beautiful Update ...
The family reunion was very sweet ...
Kabir is such a big K haan 😉
Loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Lovely chptr dear
loved photo session scene
loved it

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
love this... u r awesome..and this update was also awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Aw beautiful ending to ur story
Nibir r so cute together
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Lovely update!!!! 👏
Photo session was awesome
K kabir 🤣
Loved it!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Red for part 3
Unres

Superb update ritssy...😊

Kabira apna samaan wapis rakh ra🤣pehli I love u bol deti to kya ho jata🤣🤣
Khayali pulaav🤣🤣
Nibir cute fight
Noodles❤️ek plate me khayenge to kaam kam krna padega🤣🤣

Nibir romance❤️but bich me tapak gya viraj🤣

Ye kabira...photo session nishu k sath❤️use mere address pe bhejna🤣

Nibir❤️

Superb ts loved d ending...👍🏼
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome ending ritika 👏
Loved it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Lovely ending😳
Thnx for the pm😊

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