Nibir TS- sirf tum (ch 3 pg 11 31/1/16) completed - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: star.angel

Lovely 👏

Kabira duffer ha 😆
Vj 😡
Ab vo kia karay g 😲
Loved it update soon 😳

thanks star
will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CH- 2

Kabir enters the hall where vasundra was sitting with a winner's smile reading a magazine.

Kabir- mom

Vasundara gets shocked hearing kabir's voice and gets up from the sofa

Vj- Kabir aap toh London jane wale the na toh

Kabir- mom woh jiss wajah se mein jar aha tha mujhe pata chal gya ki woh wajah abhi sahi thi hi nhi iss liye mein nhi gya

Vj- aap kya kehena chate hain Kabir

Kabir- xzyada kuch nhi bas yeh ki mujhe kuch galat famili hiu thi aura bb nhi hai iss liye mein nhi jaa raha

Vj- par Kabir aap ka career aur aur idhar aap kis ke liye rukege Nisha toh aap se pyaar bhi nhi karti aur yeh jaante hua bhi app

Kabir cuts in between

Kabir- nhi mom aap galt bol rhi hain Nisha sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai aur usse chod ke mein kahi bhi nhi jaa raha

Kabir goes to his room and comes out with Nisha holding hands

Kabir- mom mujhe misunderstanding hui thi ki Nisha viraj se pyaar karti hai par abb sab clear ho chukka hai iss liye humne ek hone ka faisla liya hai

Vj- yeh toh acchi baat hai Kabir par kya aap ko Nisha pe pura yakin hai

Kabir- ji mom pura hai kyonki mujhe pata chal gya hai ki hum dono ko dur karne ki kosish kon kar raha tha

Vj- yeh aap kya kahe rahe hain Kabir koi aap dono ko alag karne ki kosish kar raha tha

Kabir- haan mom aur maine kabhi nhi socha tha ki woh kuxch aisa kar sakta hai (circling around vj) toh kya mein jaan sakta hoon ki kyon aap apne badle mein itni aandhi hogyi ki mere dard nhi dikha appko, yeh nhi dikha ki mujhse alag hoke jinta Nisha tadpegi utna hi mein tadpunga, yeh nhi dikhs aapko ki jinte aasu aap Nisha ko dengi utne hi mein bhi rounga boliye mom ka meri khushiya aap ke badla kea age kuch bhi nhi hai (with eyes full of tears, anger and hurt) boliye(shouts)

Vj steps a foot back seeing Kabir so angry

Vj- Kabir beta

Kabir cuts nhi

Kabir- nhi beta toh mat hi kahiye aisa lagta hai ki koi mujhe baddua de raha ho

Vj- jojo(shocked)

Kabir- (joining his hands) chahe aap mujhe kuch samajhe na samjhe mein aapki iizat karta hun iss liye appse hath jodke binti kar raha hun chali jieye idhar se iss phele ki mein kuch galat kar du

Nisha- Kabir..

Kabir- nhi Nisha aaj nhi rokegi tu mujhe (to vj) meri aur meri patni ki zingdgi se hamesha hamesha ke liye chali jayie taki hum dono ek durse ke sath ek nayi zindgi ki shruwat kar sake

" yeh aap kya kahe rahe hain Mr Kabir"

All turned to see viraj standing at the door step

Vj gets shocked to see who is viraj

Viraj- (walks in) yeh kya natak laga rakha hai aapne

Kabir- bade bhaiya koi natak nhi hai

Viraj- phir yeh sab kya hai Mr kumar aap toh jane wale the na toh phir abhi tak idhar kya kar rahe hain

Kabir- mein jaa raha tha kyonki mujhe laga ki Nisha ki khushiyan aap ke sath hai par mein galat tha Nisha sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai iss liye mein kahi nhi jaa raha (intertwines his fingers with nisha's)

Viraj- waah aapne kah diya aur humne maan liya. Hum jaante hain ki Miss Nisha sif humse pyaar karti hain

Nisha- nhi Mr viraj humne na aapse kabhi pyaar kiya tha na karte hain aur na hi kabhi kar sakege

Viraj goes to Nisha and holds her by her shoulders- aap ko inse daar ne ki koi zarrorat nhi hai(pointing Kabir) hum aapko kuch nhi hona denge

Nisha removes his hands- mein kisise daar kar yeh nhi bol rhi hun balki iss liye bol rhi hum kyunki mein sach mein Kabir se pyaar karti hun aur plz aap se ek request hai plz plz meri zidgi se chale jaiye aaj job hi yeh misunderstandings hui hai na mere aur Kabir ke beech mein kahi na kahi uss ke zimedaar aap bhi hai sir plz mein aapki iizat karti hun aura age bhi karti rehna chahati hun plz chale jaiye

Viraj- hume pata hai zaroor iss dhakebaaz ne hi kuch kiya hai (pointing at Kabir)

Kabir- viraj bahut hogaya abb toh Nisha ne bhi bol diya abb niklo idhar se

Viraj goes and holds Kabir's collar - aap ne yeh thik nhi kiya hum jaante nhi the ki aap itne gire hua hain ki Nisha ko pane ke liye unhe force karenge

Kabir- viraj(holds his collar) zuban sambhal ke baat karo

Viraj- nhi toh aap kya karege

Vj- bas kijiye aap dono hum hamare dono beto ko aise ladta hua nhi dekh sakte (and stumbles to ground)

Nisha runs to her and holds

Kabir- dono bte

Vj- hain jojo jis ladke ki photo leke tum india aaye the xvoh viraj ki hi hai

Kabir- kya (shocked)

Nisha - matlab viraj sir Kabir ke bade bhaiye hain

Vj- hain Nisha

Kabor- yani jise aaj tak mein bade bhaiya bhulata thaw oh sach mein mere bhai hai

Vj- hain Kabir

Kabir- par aap ne toh uss din kaha tha ki woh maar chuke hain

Vj- humne jooth kaha tha aapse Kabir

Kabir(disgusted)- kya aap ne mujhse koi bhi baat sach kahi hai (turns his face away)

Nisha gets upand goes to Kabir- Kabir jis bhai ko tu dhunte dhundte tu indis aaye uss se milega bhi nhi

Kabir looked at Nisha and nodded

Kabir- bade bhaiya kya hum sab kuch bhula kar ek nyi shruwat kar sakte hain

Viraj- woh hum tabhi kar payege jab aap aur Nisha hume maaf kar denge

Kabir smiles and hugs viraj , viraj too hugs him back

Vj and Nisha smiles at them

Vj- viraj

Viraj- hume aapse koi baat nhi karni hai

Vj- viraj hum maa hain aapki

Viraj- accha phir hume chod kar kyun chali gyi thi

Vj- hamari kuch majboori thi viraj

Viraj- kya hum jann sakte hain kaisi majboori

Vj- aapke papa ki death ke baad aapke dada ji ne aapko humse dur kar diya hamara saya bhi aap par nhi padene diya, woh hume waise bhi pasand nhi karte the kyonki hum rajput nhi the par aapke papa ke khatir hume aapnaya tha par unke jane ke baad humse unhone hamara beta chinliya aapko chinliya, uss wqat hum pregnant the par yeh baat kisi ko bhi nhi pata thi par hume pata tha ki kisi ko bhi pata chala toh woh humse hamare dusre bache ko bhi chin lege aur hum yeh nhi hne de sakte the iss liye hum dubai chale gaya aapko akela chod ke par hu maazbur the viraj hume maaf kar dijye

Viraj- accha thik hai par phir aapne akbir ki life kyun barbad karni chahi

Vj- hum apne badle mein aandhe ho gye the plz hume maaf kar dijiye plz jojo plz viraj plz

She joined hands and pleaded her sons

Nisha squeezed kabir's shoulder, Kabir looked at her

Nisha- Kabir gussa chod de plz mere liye

Kabir nodded

Kabir- thik hai mein aapko maaf kar dunga par aap abb se mere life mein interfare nhi karengi

Vj- hume manzoor hai Kabir

Nisha- sir app bhi

Viraj- nhi Nisha hum itni aasani se inhe maaf nhi kar sakte

Saying this viraj walked out of the house

Vj- viraj (crying)

Nisha- maa woh bh aapko maaf kar dege thoda waqt dijiye unhe

Vj turns and keeps her hand on Nisha forehead and goes to her room

Kabir walk towards her and takes her in a hug , Nisha too hugs him back

hope u like it

thereis one more part to it

will update soon

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Res 😃
Awesome ritika 👏
Loved it
Vasu and viraj 😡 but viraj pe starting pe gussa hu jab usna kabir ka collar pakda but baad ke scenes mai nahi 😆
But kash show mai bhi aise dikhate
One more part to go toh jaldi karo varna irritating sujay vapas aajayega 😈



P.s- Please update raabta also
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Very nice update 👍🏼
Nibir together 😳 loved it
Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Very nice
Thx for pm
Update soob
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
I have no clue why but I have always found Viraj and Kabir confrontation funny🤣
Read karte karte onscreen fight yaad aajaati hai... And their expressions were🤣
Kash show main bhi aise hi without drama kar dete🤔
But then hume railway romance nahi milta dekhne
Index toh bana do ek Ritika, hume stories re-read karne ki aadaat hai tab chapters dhundhna easy hoga😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Res
Unres

Superb update😊
Kabira ne vj ko kya sabak sikhaya😊
Vj 😲
Viraj galat fehmi me...
Nibir confessed der love in front of viraj❤️
Rajbir fight😊
Rajbir confrontation ki dey are brothers😉
Viraj ne mango kabir se maafi😊
Nibir ne maaf kia vj ko...
Viraj...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Read both the parts together it was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice update read both together do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awesome update
Thnku for the pm

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