Nibir TS- sirf tum (ch 3 pg 11 31/1/16) completed

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hi guys janti hu bahut 3 stories ongoing hai par isse type karne se khud ko rokh nhi pai
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SIRF TUM

The story starts from the point when Kabir tells Nisha that he is leaving for London and Nisha tries to stop him but he goes into their room and closes the door.

Nisha sits by the door and keeps weeping and calling Kabir, pleading him to open the door but he don't.

Nisha - Kabir plz dewaza khol plz Kabir ek baar meri baat sun le plz Kabir plz

Nisha kept pleading Kabir sitting by the door

Next morning

Kabir opened the door and came with his bag when he saw Nisha sitting on the floor resting her head on the wall. At first he wanted to walk past her but was not able to do that. He could clearly see the tear marks on her cheeks and she was continuously mumbling his name.

Kabir (monologue) kyun kar rhi hai yeh Nisha kyun mera jana aur mushkil bana rhi hai. Tu hi toh chahati hai na ki mein chala jau taki tu viraj sath ke apni nyi zindgi suru kar pake phir kyun ...

He slowly wiped the tears marks from her face

Nisha opened her eyes saw him sitting in front of her and threw herself into his arms

Nisha- kair plz mat ja plz mat ja mujhe chod ke plz Kabir mein tere bina marjaungi Kabir plz Kabir mat ja plz Kabir (crying and tighting her grip on him)

Kabir was shocked he didn't know what to do

He picked her and went to their room made her lie on the bed

Nisha kept asking him not to go all the while and looking at him for a answer.

Kabir- kal sari raat nhi soyi na aaram kar le warna tabyat kharab ho jaegi

Saying this he got up from the bed and was about to leave when Nisha held his hand

Nisha- nhi phele bol kit u nhi jayega phir hi mein teri baat manugi

Kabir- accha toh tujhe fark padhta hai mere hona na hona se

Nisha- padta hai Kabir bahut fark padta hai mujhe tere hone na hone se jab pass hota hai toh mein sirf hasti hun jab dur hota hai tab mujhe dar lagta hai Kabir ki mein shayad rahu hi nhi

Kabir kept looking her shocked

Nisha- tu meri zindgi hai Kabir aur tu mere pass nhi hoga toh toh mein jeeungi kaise

Kabir- agar yeh sach hai toh pyaar bhi toh mujhe karna chahiye na par par tut oh aaj bhi viraj se pyaar karti hai

Nisha- yeh maine kaha kya

Kabir- nhi

Nisha - phir jo maan mein aaya woh soch liya maan liya mujhse puchne ki zaroot bhi nhi samjhi tune

Kabir- cha lab puchta hun karti hai kya mujhse pyaar (kneeling on the ground)

Nisha- haan duffer mein sirf aur sirf tujhe pyaar karti hun sirf tujhse pyaar karti hun (holding his collar) viraj se maine kabhi pyaar nhi kiya sirf attraction thi woh aur kuch nhi maine agar kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya hai toh sirf tujhse kiya hai pheli baar aur aakhri baar. (tears falling from her eyes)

Kabir pulls her into a bone crushing hugs she too reciprocate it.

Kabir- mein bhi tujhse bahut pyaar karta hun Nisha par mujhse laga ki teri khusi viraj ke sath hai iss liye mein jaa raha tha maaf kar de mujhse

Nisha breaking the hug- meri khusi sirf tujhse hai Kabir sirf tujhse

Kabir - aur meri tujhse

Kabir cups her face - tu hamesha thik keheti thi mein bewakoof hun duffer hun gadha hun dhakkan hun tabhi toh pagaloon jaise apni zindgi ko chod ke jaa raha tha

Nisha- woh toh meinhamesha se hi jaanti hun kit u duffer gadha aur bewakoof hai

They both giggle

Kabir places a kiss on her forehead and rest their heads against each other.

They remain like this for some time

Kabir gets up and heads towards the door when Nisha again holds his hand

Kabir- mein apna bag wapas lane jaa raha hu

Nisha smile and lets him go

Kabir goes to the hall to take his bag when he sees his mother staring at the photos of Nisha and her family which was there on the wall

Kabir happily goes towards her to tell her that she was wrong Nisha loves him and only him but stops when he hears her talking to the photos

Vj- dekho na ramesh kismet bhi kitni ajjeb hai saalo phele tum mujhe aur mere pyaar ko chod ke apne sapne pure karne chale gye the mujhe akela chod kar meri aakho mein aasu de kar aur aaj wahi cheexz phir se hui hai bas iss baar rooege hum nhi bulki tum aur tumhari beti Nisha.. bahut pyaar karti hai na woh Kabir se par Kabir toh chala gya abb tum aaoge aur mere samne jookoge gidgidaoge bikh maangoge apni beti ki hasi ke liye par tumhe wh kabhi nhi milega.

Pata hai ramesh jab pheli baar Nisha se mile the woh hume bahut pasand aayi thi jab pata chala ki jojo ne uss se shadi ki hai toh behat khush hua the hum par jab yeh maalum hua ki woh Nisha gangwal hai ramesh gangwal ki beti toh dukh hua ki hamere bete ko bhi yhi mili. Hume Nisha se koi problem nh hai agar hai toh iss baat se ki woh tumhari beti hai aura bb tumhare karmo ki saja woh buktegi khoon ke aasu roegi Nisha.

Kabir is totally shocked to hear all this and just go to his room and locks it and starts weeping against the door

Nisha saw that he was pale and shocked and runs to him

Nisha- kabir kya hua (cupping his face)

Kabir hugs her - Nisha yeh sab kuch hum dono mein ladai sab kuch mom ne kawaya tha Nisha mom papa se baadla lena chati thi aur iss liye unhone meri khushio ki bhi parwa nhi ki.. unho ne jo kaha bachpan se woh sahi aur sach maana aaj pata chal raha hai ki shyad hi koi baat unki sach thi

Nisha- Kabir tu yeh kya kah rha hai maa asa kyun karegi

Kabir- par unho ne kiya Nisha. Nisha mein unhe iss sab ke liye kabhi maaf nhi kar paaunga kabhi nhi

Nisha - dekh Kabir asie nhi bolte maana unse galti hui hai par Kabir woh teri mom hai tujhse bahut pyaar karti hai

Kabir- agar pyaar karti toh kabhi aisa nhi karti Nisha kabhi nhi karti.

Nisha- Kabir ..

Kabir cuts Nisha in middle

Kabir- nhi Nisha mein iss baare mein kuch nhi sunuga plz

Nisha- accha thik hai mat sunn par plz rona band kar aur aaya baith idhar

Nisha makes him sit on the bed and makes him sleeps on her lap and moves her hands on his hair trying to calm him down

After some time

Kabir- Nisha chal maa se baat karni hai...


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Index

ch 2 pg 6

ch 3 pg 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
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kya likha h ritssy😊 dil jeet lia tune aaj😊 kash aisa hi hota❤️

loved d proposal of nibir❤️ der bone crushing hug🤗

finally vasu ka bhanda fut gya kabir k samne😊

bechara kabir😔

nisha ne kinni acchi tarah use console kia

update nxt part asap😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha205

loved it😃😃

👏👏👏

thanks nihu
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Totally awesome 👏
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ritika... tu sach m meri sis h...😆 😆
btw nicely written..
actually serial m bhi confession aise hi hona chahiye tha par...🤢
khair tune to kar dia...
well done
perfect 👏 👏
Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

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kya likha h ritssy😊 dil jeet lia tune aaj😊 kash aisa hi hota❤️

loved d proposal of nibir❤️ der bone crushing hug🤗

finally vasu ka bhanda fut gya kabir k samne😊

bechara kabir😔

nisha ne kinni acchi tarah use console kia

update nxt part asap😊

thanks nimissy😊
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thanks
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Totally awesome 👏
Update next part soon

thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina.majik

ritika... tu sach m meri sis h...😆 😆

btw nicely written..
actually serial m bhi confession aise hi hona chahiye tha par...🤢
khair tune to kar dia...
well done
perfect 👏 👏

aww maine kab kaha ki mein teri sis nhi hun
thanks 😳
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

aww maine kab kaha ki mein teri sis nhi hun
thanks 😳

tune kha nhi...
mai tujhe bta rhi hu..
hum dono similar cheeze bolte aur karte h..
tune nibir ss k lie bhi same track select kia islie..😃

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