Everything I have, is You||Nibir TS||CHAP 3 page 22||last page-29 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Annie sissy awsome say bhi koi uppar ka word hai kya its ooo much fill with emostionss
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Thankyou so much aimi n saachii.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start to ur ts
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intresting prologue animish👍🏼
kabiraa ne aisa kya kiya😕
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi annie 😊
lovely prologue 😳
awee.. so cute jojo and chirpy😳
please update soon 😊want to know answers who's questions in my mind 😆
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Thankyou Alisha, ammu daadi n tasyam.
@tasyam u r a new member...??welcome to the k khaandaan, n thankyou for liking my work.
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my dear freind 😳every writer of this forum deserves my likes and coments 😳because you all are awesome writers 👍🏼
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thread revive..!!chapter will be updated soon..!!
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He continuously moved his hands and legs in his sleep, as he wasn't able to control them, tears escaped his closed eyes, he was in immense pain, the pain in his heart was killing him. he was hearing something...the voice of a known.

Happy b'day kabirr... I have a surprise for you..."said the voice.

He smiled in his sleep.

You are going to be a father kabirr...i..i..am pregnant...!!"said the voice again hesitatingly.

A wide smile appeared on his face again... then he heard some noise of laughter...excitement...happiness. then,

Screeecchhh..."he heard the screeching sound of a car...and then a sound of " thuddd".

Aahhh...kabirrr..."he heard a scream, his face grew pale, he snapped open his eyes, sat straight on his bed and shouted,

Nishaaa..."as if he was trying to stop some mishappening.

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui..



Aahhhrrr..."he shouted sitting on his bed...he started crying out his heart loud,

He had been having this nightmare from the last one and a half months .no night was peaceful for him since that unwanted day, his birthday, he always had been saying that his birthday was unlucky, and every time it proved to be one.

Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi

I am sorry nishaa...I am sorry...i never meant to create so much fuss in your life...I snatched your everything that day...I am sorry..." He started crying out loud and screaming as he wasn't able to hold that pain within him anymore. he held his head with both his hands, and rested it on his half-folded up legs, he kept both his hands on the back of his neck and massaged it a little.

Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein.

The pain within him was no less, it was eating him up every day, making him guilty for what he hadn't done purposely, tears kept flowing from his eyes, they were not ready to stop today, as the pain within him has become so abundant that, it was out of his control.

He remembered all those good moments he spent with her, the happiness he shared with her,

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan

Then he remembered his surprise, which she gave him, the best moment of his life,

Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan


Then he remembered the incident, which took away his happiness, and her everything.

Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

He couldn't control this anymore, he pulled out the drawer of his side table, and took out a bottle of medicines from it, he took out five complete pills of his anti-depressants, and gulped them down, and drank a glass full of water,

He then slowly slipped back into his deep sleep , as the medicines started showing their effect.

"I miss you a lot..., I never meant to hurt you..., that was all my fault..., I have no right to be with you, I will go away soon" he mumbled in a monotonous way in his sleep.

He went into the place, with complete peace, where he had not done any sin, when he and she were together and their life was beautiful, the place of his dreams, he smiled as he saw her, he walked towards her, she walked towards him, and as he touched her cheek with his hands, and said, I love you" , there was a loud sound which made him comeback from that place,

Trriiinnnggg..."came the sound from his alarm clock, as it struck 9:00 AM.

He opened his eyes, and switched off the alarm,

Got to go...she must be waiting...I am late once again..she'll kill me..!!" blabbered he as he stood up from his bed to get ready. Within half an hour, he got ready , had his breakfast of bread-butter-jam, grabbed his bag and his car keys to reach the hospital.

Within another half an hour, he reached the hospital, with her favorite chocolate. And as he entered her room, he saw her sleeping, she wasn't waiting for him today, as she did regularly, he was worried for her, he walked up to her bed and asked the nurse, who stood there checking something.

Kya hua hain nishaa ko...abhi uthi kyun nahi...??"he asked with a line of tension on his forehead.

Kuch nahii...abhi tak intezaar kar rahi thii...aur ab intezaar karte karte so gayii..."said the nurse smiling and walked out of her room.

He looked at her innocent sleeping face, and tugged the hair which was falling on her face behind her ear. He kissed her forehead, and wished her a good morning,

She was sleeping peacefully. She opened her eyes as she felt someone sitting beside her on her bed, she looked up at the face innocently, and said,

Jojoo...tum aagayee...itnaa latee kaisee ho gayee..."she said in her sleepy voice and sitting up straight with the help of him.

Wo main late uthaa thaa...!" He said smiling sheepishly.

Bhook lagi hain mujhee...mera chocolate kahan hain..??" she said making a pout.

He took out her chocolate from his bag, and handed it over to her. she tore the wrapper and started eating it like a kid.

Story nahi sunegii..??"he asked widening his eyes.

Tum nahi sunaogee...??"she asked making innocent face.

Issliye to main aaya hun na chirpy...!! To kahaan tak sunaaya maine...??" asked jojo.

She kept her finger on her chin and started to think as jojo, took out his diary,

Wahaann...tak...jahaan tak...kabir ...nisha ko propose karta hain aur nisha+kabir=nibir ki life start hotii hain..!!"said nisha smiling widely.uskee aage...uskee aage...!!"

Yes, she didn't knew that her name was Nisha Singh Rathore, and he, the story teller for her, was her first and last love, her husband, Kabir Singh Rathore, she didn't knew who they were, her life is different from nisha's.

Achchaa...to sunooo...wo jo kabir than a bohot bada k tha, par wo apne j nishaa se pyaar bhi bohot zyaada karta tha...unki new life start hui...usme wo sab kuch tha...wo saari khushiyaa thi..jo wo dono chahtee the..sab kuch tha...wo dono ekk doosre se paagalon ki tarah pyaar karte thee...unki jaan ek doosre me basti thi...doosre ko choti si kharoch bhi lag jaati to...bohot dard hotaa tha..."

He paused for a minute.

Acchhaa...uske baad bolo...uske baad...!!'she said curiously.

Uskee baad...uskee cousins aur uske siblings...ghar aate rehte the unke...wo sab saath mein milke bohot masti kartee...hasi...mazaak...ghumnaa...phirnaa...ek doosre ki taang kheechna...nisha keliye uske cousins uski jaan the...kuch hi dino me kabir ka birthday aane waala thaa...nisha aur uske cousins milke uske liye kuch surprise plan kar rahe the...kabir ko iss baat ka bilkul bhi pata nahi tha...agar hotaa to wo kabka mana kar chukaa hotaa...kyunki usko birthdays pasand nahi..the ...uska manna tha ki uska birthday humeshaa uskeliye unlucky saabit hota tha...nisha jaanti thi wo sab lekin kabir ki khushi hi uske liye sab kuch tha...itna pyaar jo karti thi..." He paused again as tears formed in his eyes.

Uskee baad...??!

Uskaa birthday aane waala thaa...bilkul paas aata jaa raha thaa..."said kabir wiping his tears.

Achchaa phirr...nahii ekk minute rukoo...! Ye story me aur kitne pages bachee hain..??"asked chirpy.

Kyun..??!tumhe story pasand nahi aayi..??! waise zyada pages nahi hain..??"he said.

n..nahii...story bohot achchii hain...lekin...kyat um..story khattam honeke baad chalee jaogee...??"she asked like a kid holding his hand.

That was it for him, he couldn't control his feelings anymore, he hugged her tight and cried silently, she caressed his hair trying to calm him down, even she was feeling safer and so good in his embrace, unknown feeling arised within her too, when he realized what he was doing,he freed her from himself, and said,

Sorry...wo main..."

You needn't say anything ..i can understand.."she said.

i..i..i..have some work...I need to leave..!!"he said and immediately took his bag and left the place, he walked out of her room in a hurry leaving chirpy baffled.


TO BE CONTINUED SOON!

Edited by sam_premc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
unres
it's beautiful 👏
kabir nishu se kitna pyaar karta h
m in love with this TS
nishu ka accident hua
Annie plz plz plz update soon I want to see nibir happy again vo bhi jaldi se plz
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago

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