NIBIR TS : Nafrat Me Chhipa Gehra Pyaar/////(epilogue in page 12) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Nimi
Ab jaldi se ye bhi update de do
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: star.angel

achaa😲

But ma na to main forrum sa khola thaa😆
Itna yaad ha k pm not aya that tb tk😆
And first 2nd part sath ma pdhe ma ne😆

actually maine pm 4 din baad send kia tha aimzzz🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aha121

Nimi
Ab jaldi se ye bhi update de do
Update soon

will try to update jaldi wala soon sanna😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyzzz...I know ki ye wala update dene me bhut late ho gyi hu...n I dedicate dis update to sanna n sujoy...jo mujhe inne dino se pm krre h...thanchu dear...for keeping so much patience...n I hope ki dis update is up to yr expectations...accha na lage to freely bol dena...so here u goes...

Epilogue

It was afternoon...sun reached at d middle of sky...to fill d earth with its warmness in d form of rays...d whole world got busy wid der work while dis 2 love souls ...yes dese 2 love souls were in der dreamland which was full of love romance and peace ...feeling warmness inside d blanket she woke up arching her elbow n yawning...seeing her hubby beneath her a curve formed in her lips while her eyes were busy in adoring her life...his face was looking like a little innocent kid...after adoring him for some more moments she freed herself from his grip... n from blanket...still covering herself wid duvet she den move towards d side table n took his phone...n wat he saw in her phone was enough for her to scream loudly...

nisha(loudly) - OMG...mar gye hum to...

poor kabir fall down n cryied out in pain wid his back hitting on floor by hearing dose loud dangerous scream...

kabir - arey oye...bina panje ki billi...kyu Marne me tuli hui h yr...itni zor se kyu chilla ri...Kaan ka parda faadne ka irada h kya...

nisha - abey oye dubte hue mendhak...ek baar apna phn dekh...Kaan ke parde to kya...muh se bhi dhua nikalna shuru ho jayega...

kabir den checked his phn n yes she was right...now it was his time to scream...

kabir - arey yr mar gye hum to...sab kya sochenge...yr hme to sab chidha chidha k kaccha chaba jayenge...

yes der was 15 missed calls in nisha's phone n 20 missed calls in kabir's phone from der family...

nisha while biting her nails said...

nisha- kabir ab kya kre...dopahar ke 1 baj gye h...yr...ek kaam krti hu mai call back krti hu...

kabir - ruk...pagal ho gyi h kya...agar puchhenge ki phn kyu nhi utha re the to kya bolegi...???

nisha- to ab kya kre ghar to Jana hi pdega na...she said sadly...

kabir den smiles mischievously n said...

kabir - idea????

nisha - kaisa idea...

kabir - hum apna jackpot use krenge...n he looked at nisha who was totally confused...den he again continued...nhi samjhi...she den nodded in no n he again continued ...arey hmari fight jaise hi wo sab humse koi question krenge hum na ladne ki acting krenge n wo log hmesha ki tarah hmara jhagda sort krane k chakkar me Sab bhul jayenge...wat say???

nisha - great...idea...aur hum sab k samne aise behave krenge ki hum abhi bhi ek dusre k dushman h...

kabir - correct...

nisha - ok.. mai jaldi se change kr k aati hu...wrna hum aur late ho jayenge ...

n she was about to go wen kabir held his hand n pulled her close to his heart n said in husky voice...

kabir - change krne k liye washroom Jane ki kya zarurat h...yhi...krle na change...he said wid smirk...while nisha was melted by his husky voice n she immediately closed his eyes to feel d warmness of his breathe...he too closed his eyes...n both were feeling d warmness of each other...n dat feeling was out of world...wid each passing second...dey were coming more close to each other n der lips were about to meet wen a mischievous idea clicked in nisha's mind...she slightly opens her eyes n stamped his foot which made kabir to make his grip loose on her...she den ran towards d washroom by showing him her tongue n teasing him while he cried out in pain...

kabir - aahhh...jungli billi ...chhodunga nhi tujhe mai...badla leke rhunga yaad rakhiyo...n he to started getting ready...

den after half an hour of der nok jhok wali romantic journey...dey finally reached to kabir's house where both d families were waiting for der sweet welcome...as soon as dey reached to door...sukku said...sarcastically...

sukku - arey kabir nishu inni jaldi kyu aa gye dinner shinner kr k aate itni bhi kya jaldi thi aane ki...while all started laughing...kabir den signals nisha dat its high time to break der jackpot...n she too blink her eyes in assurance...

kabir - ye sab is bina panje wali billi ki wajah se hua h...so rhi thi madam ghode bech k...

nisha - oye dubte hue mendhak...jyada uchhal mat wrna uthake ghar ke samne wale kuye me fek dungi...aur rhi baat sone ki to tu to ghode kya hathi uth hiran Sab ko bech k so rha tha...

kabir - accha...ruk abhi btata hu...tu to aaj gyi kaam se...
nisha - kaam se kaun jayega ye to waqt hi btayega...

kabir - mujhe nhi rehna tere sath...

nisha - ha to ja na tujhe jhelna chahta bhi kaun h????

den dey started der fight as per der plan n d whole family got busy in sorting der fight...

ramesh - shadi ho gyi fir bhi baccho ki tarah lad re ho...chalo ab muhrat nikal ra h jaldi ghar pravesh kro...

den vasu did arti of nibir n nisha rice ka kalash girati h..n den dey both came inside der house...n took blessings from der parents...

while taking blessing...from vasu kabir said...

kabir - mom aap mujhse bilkul pyaar nhi krti na

vasu - arey aisa kyu keh rha h JoJo...

kabir- aisa hi h mom isiliye to aap ne mujhe kal raat is khoonkhar billi ke sath chhod dia...agar galti se bhi mujhe noch khati to aapke phool se masoom bacche ka kya hota...he said dis being innocent...while vasu hit him in his arm n said "Badmaash kahin ka" n den he remembers about nisha n bite his tounue dat wat he had said n den he slowly turns towards nisha...who was giving him a deadly glare...which made him to gulp his saliva...wid fear...he den made a best ever puppy face...n mouthed a sweet sorry to her which was enough to melt her anger...she smiles wid pinkish face n said under her teeth "Nautanki kahinka"...

Den after lunch dey all sat on drawing room n have der gala time while nibir were secretlly adoring each other...after some moments wen dey all got busy in der chit chatting...kabir took nisha wid him...in such a way...dat no one can noticed dem...

After Half an hour... Arjun n ramesh called all d family members in hall...for some serious talks...n widin 5 min. all d members gathered der...

ramesh - nisha kabir beta humse bahut badi galti ho gyi... tum dono sahi the...

arjun - ha beta hum galat the shayad tumdono ek dusre k liye nhi bne ho...

hearing dis from arjun n ramesh...nibir were shocked...while der face gave a blank expression ...

kabir(to change dis topic)- arey dad ab Jo ho gya so ho gya jhel lunga is billi ko zindagi bhar aap logo ki khatir...

ramesh - nhi beta aisa krne ki koi zarurat nhi...h...humne galti ki h ab is galti ko bhi hum hi sudharenge...

arjun - ye lo divorce paper...ise sign kr do aur...free ho jao is zabardasti ke bandhan se...hearing dis nibir shouted in unison...

nibir - divorce...

ramesh - ha beta...
nibir den gave each other helpless look...
kabir - wo...wo dad divorce ...ha aap hi ne kaha tha ki agar mai nisha se shadi ni krunga to aap mujhe apni property se bedakhal kr denge...nhi mai nisha me sath hi rhunga mujhe divorce nhi property chahiye...
nisha - ha papa aur aap hi ne mujhe kaha tha ki ya to kabir ko chun ya fir gabbar ko...papa mujhe kabir me gabbar dikhta h...mai is gabbar ko jhel lungi...while kabir gave him a deadly stare...she den immediately made an innocent helplessly wala face...
arjun - accha to isi wajah se tumlog sath rehna chahte ho...to thk h fir kabir mai apni sari property tumare naam kr Deta hu air nisha don't worry tumari shadi...gabbar se nhi hogi...balki mai khud tumare liye ek accha ladka dhundunga...okk...ab free krdo apne aap ko is zabardsti k rishte se...
nibir(in slow voice)- mar gye...

nisha - hmara plan hmi pe bhari pad gya...

kabir - ha wo bhi sunny deol k dhaai kilo k hath se bhi jyada bhari...
nisha - kabir tujhe itne serious time me bhi comedy sujh ri...ab kya kre...
ramesh - ye ghusur fusur kya krre ho...jaldi sign kro ye divorce paper...

nibir den looked at each other...n signals each other through der eyes dats its high time to confess der love for each other infront of der family...

kabir - hum nhi krenge divorce paper sign...
arjun - y???

nibir(loudly) -becoz we love each other...

ramesh - acchha...n den whole family broke into huge laughter making nibir more shocked...

nibir - aap Sab has kyu re ho??

ramesh - kyuki hme pehle se pta tha...

nibir - what??

arjun - abhi btata hu...

Flashback

After kabir took nisha wid him from drawing room...dey both went to terrace to spend some quality time wid each other...

nisha - kabir ye kya krra h...yha kyu laya mujhe...agar kisi ne dekh lia to hmara jhut pakda jayega...

kabir - jhut to tab pakda jayega jab hme yha koi dekhega wifey he said dis smirk n pull her close to him...

nisha - accha hubby...n she winks den she again continued...waise kabir ghar walo ko ullu bnane me kitna mazaa aa rha na...

kabir - ha aur sabse jyada mzaa to fake fight krne me aaraa...

nisha - I think hme ab sabko bta dena chahiye dat we are in love...

kabir - pagal ho gyi h kya...agar hum sab ko bta denge na ki hum ek raat me dushman se lovers ban gye to hmari family khushi se pagal ho jayegi...aur hmara ghar mental asylum ban jayega...mujhe apne ghar ko mental asylum bnane ka koi shouk nhi h...

nisha - kabir ...kabhi to serious ho jaya kr yr...

kabir - arey...chhod na nisha thode din aur sab ko ullu bnate h na khub mzaa aayega...
nisha - tu kitna bada k h...
kabir - aur tu mere k se kitni j h...

n der whole conversation was overheard by arjun who had came in terrace for some work...n told dis to whole family n dey decided to play dis divorce wala prank on nibir...

Flashback End

Arjun - beta ye mat bhulna ki baap baap hota h aur beta beta...

after hearing all dis nibir smiled sheepishly in embarassement...der faces got covered wid pink hues...seeing dis condition of nibir dey all again started laughing to make nibir more embarrassed...nisha den runs towards ramesh n hide her face in his safe embrace while other members were started teasing kabir ...

ramesh den caressed her hair lovingly n said...
ramesh - nishu kaha tha na Maine...Teri isi nafrat me kahin gehra pyaar chhipa hua h...
nisha - ha papa...n thank you so much papa for giving me my life...she said dis smilingly n lovingly looking towards kabir who smiled back...while ramesh again hugged her...n said "Pagal Ladki"

After teasing alot to nibir dey all went from der n left dis love birds alone...

kabir - nisha...
nisha - hmm...
kabir - yaar aisa lag ra h ki kisi be bhari mehfil me badi behrami se izzat lut li ho...he said while laughing...
nisha hits on his chest...n said "K Kahin ka"
den kabir immediately pulled her in bone crushing hug pouring all his love his passion n his feeling for her...in dis hug...

At Night Nibir's Bedroom

Nisha was standing in Balcony adoring d beautiful sky which was covered wid moon and couples of stars...its serene beauty ..made her lost in it...she was completely lost in dis beauty...his trance was broken wen she feels his presence beside her...immediately a smile appears on her pink juicy lips...while he holds her hand tightly by intertwinding der fingers n said...
kabir - yha kya kr ri h nisha...
nisha - in stars ko thanx krri hu kabir jinhone hmari kismat likhi...jinhone hme ek duje k liye bnaya...n she rested her head on his shoulder...while he wrapped his arm around her waist...dey both den again started looking at d stars...thanking dem silently...for writing der destiny wid each other...

Nafrat ki Jung aaj pyaar ki kahani ban gyi ...
haste khelte dilo ki ravani ban gyi...
nadaan h wo log jo kehte h nafrat me zindagi dushwar h...
arey wo kya jane ki isi nafrat me chhipa gehra pyaar h...


Sometimes unplanned reality is better den planned dream

waiting for yr response...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Awww nimzi baby... sach a cute epilogue ☺️ blashing too ha... loved the divorce wala prank... 🤣 kabira k khin ka... 😳
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Awww nimzi baby... sach a cute epilogue ☺️ blashing too ha... loved the divorce wala prank... 🤣 kabira k khin ka... 😳

aweee thnx Mansi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww!!! Such a Beautiful update Nimi ...
It was so cute ...
Loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome👍🏼
Kitna cute epilogue☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amina...

Awww!!! Such a Beautiful update Nimi ...
It was so cute ...
Loved it ...

thnx amina😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
Kitna cute epilogue☺️

thanx shibhanzzz😊

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