NIBIR TS : Nafrat Me Chhipa Gehra Pyaar/////(epilogue in page 12)

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Hie guyz...nimi is back...naam to yaad hoga na...mera😆...itne dino se gayab jo thi..mai...apne krazy K khandaan se...kisi ne mujhe miss kiya???? Maine na apne is k khandaan ko bahut bahut bahut miss kia...so k's Is TS(Two shots) ko mere itne din gayab hone ka compensation samajhlo😉now i stop my blaberring...so here u goes...

HAPPY READING

PART 1


In my TS nibir are neighbours...wo ek dusre ko bachpan se jante h n un dono k parents best buddies h but wo dono bachpan se hi ek dusre k jani dushman h...ek dusre ka khoon kr dene wale types... Par wo kya h na koi kisi se chahe kitna bhi jhagad le par hota whi h jo kismat me likha hota h...

Nibir k parents ne nibir ki shadi fix kr di...aur kal inki shadi h...

In Gangwal House

After hearing dis shocking news Nisha was burning wid anger and agruing wid his father...

Nisha (wid anger)- papa mai us doobte hue mendhak se shadi nhi krungi...

Ramesh - nishu uska naam kabir h...

Nisha - i dont care papa...aur aap hmare sath aisa kaise kr sakte h aap jante h na ki hum dono ek dusre se kitni nafrat krte h...

Ramesh- beta tumari isi nafrat k pichhe kahin na kahin sachha pyaar chhipa hua h...bas usko pehchanne ki zarurat h...

Nisha - wat??? Huh saccha pyaar aur wo bhi us dubte hue mendhak se my foot...mai nhi krne wali usse shadi...papa aap uski jagah kisi se bhi meri shadi kra dijiye mai khushi khushi kr lungi but usse nhi...

Ramesh - pakka

Nisha(happily)- pakka promise...

Ramesh- thk h to kabir ka replacement h hmare ghar k Samne jo sharma ji h na unka doggy "GABBAR"

Nisha - wat??? Papa dis is not fair...dis is cheating...

Ramesh-everything is fair beta...aur teri shadi to kal hi hogi ab tu decide kr le ki tujhe kisse shadi karni h...kabir se ya fir gabbar se ...tu undono me se jise bhi chunegi mai use apna damaad bnane k liye ready hu n saying dis he mentally giggled and left...frm der...

Nisha(monologue)- nisha us gabbar se shadi krne se to better h ki tu ise hi gabbar samajh le aur isse shadi kr le...

In Rathode House

Kabir's state was also not at all different from nisha's state...he too was arguing wid his father...

Kabir - Dad ye meri life h aur meri life ka itna imp. Decision aapne mujhse puchhe bina kaise le lia...

Arjun- jojo m yr dad aur tumare liye kya accha h ye hum bhut acche se jante h...

Kabir - jante honge dad but mai kisi bhi haal me us bina panje wali billi se shadi nhi krne wala...

Arjun - uska naam nisha h jojo...

Kabir(wid attitude)- i dont care dad...

Arjun - thk h agar tumne usse shadi nhi ki to mai tumhe apni sari property se bedakhal kr dunga...

Kabir - wat??? Dad aap mujhe emotional blackmail krre...???

Arjun - exactly...my son...u r so intelligent he stressed on d word intelligent now u decide tumhe kya krna h...after saying dis he was about to go wen his phone rings wid caller tune..."Aaj mere yaar ki shadi h aaj mere yaar ki shadi h" he picked up his phone saying "ha ramesh bolo" n left frm der...

After hearing dat ringtone kabir started dancing n singing sarcastically

Kabir - " KAL MERI BILLI SE SHADI H KAL MERI BILLI SE SHADI H"

Next Day...The Day Of Wedding...

Der wedding was going to be held on the beautiful lawn of "HOTEL BABYLON"...It was a 5 star hotel...d lawn was beautifully decorated wid red and white roses...and the combination of red and white balloons spread on d floor making d decoration of lawn looks serene...while d mandap was beautifully decorated wid white orchids...white d colour of simplicity...but dis colour of simplicty will soon become d witness of bringing toofan in nibir's life...

Widin half an hour d lawn was full of guests and family members...panditji too arrived...

Nisha was wearing pink lehenga... Silver border on d bottom of lehenga n on d corner of dupatta...making d look of lehenga...perfect...n in dis lehenga she was looking verry pretty...just like apsara...

Kabir was wearing light pink sherwani...in dis pink colour he was looking verry hot and handsome...

After sometime

Nibir were seating infront of fire stake holding der anger in der eyes and der eyes clearly reflects how much dey hate each other...

Kabir (in slow voice) - Tujhse shadi krne se better to suicide krna h...

Nisha - to kr le na aise shubh kaam me deri kaisi...

Kabir - wait wait...mai kyu suicide kru...uh bina panje wali billi...dekhna mai teri life ki aisi band bajaunga ki tu khud hi suicide kr legi

Nisha - In yr dreams uh...dubte hue mendhak...

Kabir(wid smirk)- dreams me hi sahi par kahin to mar...

Nisha(wid artificial smile)-dont worry tere dreams me bhi akele nhi marungi tujhe duba k hi marungi...mendhak kahin k

And den dey got busy in der stupid fights...but der cute fight was soon disturbed by panditji wen he asked dem to hold each other's right hand...kabir den unwantedly kept his hand infront of her n nisha too unwantedly placed her right hand on his hand...aur...jaise hi nisha kabir k hath me apna hath rakhti h kabir uska hath tightly apne hath se pakad leta h...to make her groan wid pain...n den he says to nisha...

Kabir - ye to mere torture ka sirf trailer h sweetheart...n he winks...

Nisha den hold her pain in her eyes n says

Nisha-tere is trailor ki asli picture to tujhe mai dikhaungi sweetheart...she streessed on d word sweetheart...saying dis she too hold his hand tightly n winks...

After some time pandit ji asked kabir to put sindoor in nisha's mang...

Den he took d coin dipped wid sindoor n fill her hair parting...wid irritated face...den panditji asked kabir to tie mangalsutra on her neck...while tieing mangalsutra he leaned towards her n says in her ear..."ye mangalsutra nhi faasi ka fanda h" on hearing dis she immediately replied "jo bandha to mere gale me h par fanda tere gale ka h" n she smirked...

Wid der silly n cute figts finally Der wedding was completed by following all d rituals n den dey stand up to take blessings of der elders...
After der blessing session our newly married couples was surrounded by der friends...(nisha bida ho k pados me hi ja rhi thi to der is no rone dhone wala session😉)

Rahul kabir's friend brought lemon juice for nibir...

Rahul - tumdono thak gye hoge itni der se baithe baithe ye lemon juice pilo tumari khoyi hui energy aa jayegi wapis aakhir sari raat jagna jo h...n he winks...while nibir gave each other disgusting look n drank dat lemon juice...

Siya nisha's friend gave her a small carry bag n said

Siya - ye le nishu tujhe iski zarurat padegi...n she winks...while nisha was confused as she didnt get wat she was trying to say so she quitely hold dat carry bag...

All d elders were left for der home...while nibir was still surrounded wid der friends...n den der friends insisted kabir to scoop nisha in his arms while going to der room...firstly dey both refused but after continuously insisting by der friends both agreed unwantedly...kabir den scoop nisha in his arms n nisha too encircled her arms around his neck...n both were heading towards der room...

While heading towards der room

Kabir(monologue)- Is billi se shadi krna kam tha kya jo ab ise apni baahon me bhi uthana padh rha h...saying dis he started cursing his luck...

Den in few sec. Dey finally reached der room n before opening d door of room...he looks towards nisha wid an irritated face...but wat he saw made him more frustrated...

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Index

Part 1 - page 1

Part 2'- page 6

Epilogue - page 12
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Posted: 9 years ago
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niju u r amazing 👏
bina panje li billli aur dubta hua memdak 🤣
aaj meri billi se shaandi h 🤣 🤣
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loved it a lot niju
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Awsum...totallly different concept...
Superb...
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🤣 kya pilaya nibir ko ur bag m kya h... kuch to jhol h baba ☺️
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Nimi🤗
ithne subh kaam mai deri kyu😆😆😆
meri billi se shadi hai meri billi se shadi hai😆
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Awesome 👍🏼
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Aweosme surprise yaar
Loved it..
Nibir nok jhoks were hilarious
Update soon
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Awesome start
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Awesome nimissy
loved it
nibir hate each other but shadi karni hi padi
loved the way ramesh and arjun blackmailed them
mehendak and billi ki next update ke liye waiting
cont soon
plz next time pm bhej dena
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