*NIBIR FF-A STORY BEHIND THE DARK HOUSE* part 1-page 6 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Niya_789


Te mala sudha mahitaye😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Bhag maza comment partham aahessh.. Khute me virach karta hoti ki me hya story var comment karu shakrna ki nahi anni aaz bhag ... 😆

me tujha res bagunach khud aanandit jhali hoti...meri behna ka comment first h
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

me tujha res bagunach khud aanandit jhali hoti...meri behna ka comment first h

Awwweeer 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Awwweeer 🤗
Happy Diwali 🤗

same to u niyu 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nice update vaishu...
Maza aa gaya..
Umadgaon (name...used in M's 1st show APHG)
The suspense .was described well...
But 1 thing I need to point out..(don't get offended..)
Although it felt really nice to read..but..the way u described everything and then..nibir romance..was too..conventional.. In approach..means..it appeared as if was someone has given the written update of ssh phir koi hai episode..
So I will suggest u to ...just..present it in..new..style..
It will look more good...
Kabir appearance and disappearance scene..was described.. Well..
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Nice update vaishu...

Maza aa gaya..
Umadgaon (name...used in M's 1st show APHG)
The suspense .was described well...
But 1 thing I need to point out..(don't get offended..)
Although it felt really nice to read..but..the way u described everything and then..nibir romance..was too..conventional.. In approach..means..it appeared as if was someone has given the written update of ssh phir koi hai episode..
So I will suggest u to ...just..present it in..new..style..
It will look more good...
Kabir appearance and disappearance scene..was described.. Well..
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon..

thank you sarthak...I vl try to write it in a new style...it's first time I m writing something like this so m happy that u suggested me a way to improve it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome AajiMaushi👍🏼
Nishu ke liye Kabira waapas chane ke liye ready😳
so many questions to be answered😕
update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome AajiMaushi👍🏼
Nishu ke liye Kabira waapas chane ke liye ready😳
so many questions to be answered😕
update soon😊

thank you grand bhaachi
wait for the answers 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres

Kya hubby ab tum apni wifey ko ese daraogi... Jaan nikal di meri
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
thank you amina

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