*NIBIR FF-A STORY BEHIND THE DARK HOUSE* part 1-page 6

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Hiiee k's...mujhe pata h aap log soch rahe honge ki ma pagal ho gayi hu...new stories start kiye hi jaa rahi hu...bt guyz is baar mere dimaag ma koi idea nhi dhamka...this time anchu aka anchal (nibirfever) gave me this idea...anchu n mujhe ye concept diya aur is par kuch likhne kaha tha aur mujhe yeh concept itna accha laga ki mana phir ek nayi story likh de...thank you anchu
Hope yeh sabko pasand aaye

NIBIR FF-A STORY BEHIND THE DARK HOUSE

Kehte h ki purani jagaho ma kai raaz chupe hote h...purani hawaliya ma...purane kilo ma...purane mahelo ma...kuch kisi ke pyaar ke hote h kuch kisi ki nafrat ke toh kuch dono ke...aisa hi ek kaala raaz...sach kahu toh ek bura shraap chipa h Rajasthan ke ek chote se gao Umargad ma...is chote se gao ki subha khushi se bhari hoti h...pura din chehel pehel se bhara hota h par yaha ki raate sunsaan hoti h...har koi yaha sone se pehle yahi dua karta h ki vo subha aankhe khole toh apne parivaar ke saath ho surakshit
Yaha rehne waale har insaan ki rooh us raat ke khayaal se kaapne lagti h...vo kaali raat jab is gaao ke logo ne bohot kuch khoya tha...kisine apna ghar...kisine parivaar...aur kaiyo ne khushi...us raat ko 75 saal beet chuke the par jis bhi insaan ne us raath ko dekha tha vo aaj bhi use bhul nhi paya tha...kuch log In baato ko afwa mante h aur kuch ise sach maante h...yaha ke logo ka kehna h ki vo manhus raat her 75 saal baad khud ko dohra ti h...vo shrap phir sach ho jata h aur burai phir se saanse leti h...koi is raaz ki gehrai tak nhi phoch paya par mana jaana h ki yeh raaz waaha ke purane raaj mahel se juda h...us mahel ki hawao se juda h...us mahel ma Suni aawazoo se juda h aur us mahel ma dabi pyaar ki ek daastan se juda h

[B] In dolly's room

Dolly was packing some stuff n Nisha Kabir n Saurav were watching her
Nisha-dolly jadi kar na yaar
Dolly-nishu shaant
Nisha-kaise shaant rahu tujhe pata na ma kitni excited hu hamari trip ke liye
Saurav- trip ke liye yaa kisi ke saath time spend karne ke liye
Nisha-isake saath time spend karne ki kya excitement mujhe toh trip ki excitement h
Kabir-accha matlab ek ma hu jisne yeh pura plan banaya taaki tere saath time spend kar saru aur tu h ki farak hi nhi padta
Nisha-(laughing)kabir tu kitna cute h
Kabir-ab makhan maar rahi h
Nisha-ji nhi makhan bohot mehnga h tujhpe waste nhi karugi
Kabir-abey oaa..tu insult pe Insult kiye jaa rahi h
Nisha-are bewakof mera matlab tha ki tere liye toh mera pyaar hi kaafi h...makhan ki kya jarurat
Dolly-how romantics!!!
Nisha-romantics nhi dolly romantic
Saurav-nishu tu London iski kabhi na sudharne wali English sudharne aayi h kya
Dolly-saurav!!
Saurav-ma toh gaya...sorry na dolly bas majak tha
Dolly-I hates u
saurav-dolly hates nhi hate
Dolly didn't said anything n started hitting saurav while he tried to stop her while nibir stood ther hand in hand watching them fight
Kabir-nishu I love u
Nisha-I love u too...tere liye ho toh london se yaha aayi hu
Nisha gangwal...she was born in indian bt brought up in London she loved Indian culture so and had visited Indian various times the first time she came to india she met kabir dolly and saurav n feel in love with kabir...she always had a feeling that there was something really special that connected them ...they told their families about their feelings n got engaged...she wanted to spend some time with kabir before their marriage so kabir planned a trip
Kabir Singh rathod...kabir was a fun loving handsome guy who was madly in love with his fiance...he belonged to a royal family in Rajasthan...he knew nisha loved indian culture so he planned a trip to one of the old village named "UMARGAD"...where they had a old an palace
Dolly and saurav were nibir's friends they were in love with each other n were dating

What twist n turns is this trip going to bring for Nisha n Kabir

Guyz this is the first time I m writing something like this...plz batana kaisa h n m nt sure about the title so koi title bhi suggest kar do na plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hubby ❤️ ye lo meri taraf se...

new nibir story ☺️ but pls jaldi jaldi update chaie mjhe 😊
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my wifey is bherry bherry phasst 🤣 🤣
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vaishu starting was just mind blowing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
mai tho darr gayi thi😆
abb yeh kya raaz hai 😊😊😊excited😊😊😊
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Originally posted by: Niha205

vaishu starting was just mind blowing👏

mai tho darr gayi thi😆
abb yeh kya raaz hai😊😊😊excited😊😊😊

thank you massi maa🤗...raaz ke liye u have to wait 😃
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awesome ...awesome...awesome vaishu...horror...thriller...suspense...something which i love...do continue soon with it dear...main bhi dekho...horror likh likh ke lovestory pe aagayi.🤣🤗
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

my wifey is bherry bherry phasst 🤣 🤣

🤣 just like hubby... unresd
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

awesome ...awesome...awesome vaishu...horror...thriller...suspense...something which i love...do continue soon with it dear...main bhi dekho...horror likh likh ke lovestory pe aagayi.🤣🤗

thank you Annie 🤗
ma love story likhte likhte horro pe aa gayi 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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unres


hubby ❤️ ye lo meri taraf se...

new nibir story ☺️ but pls jaldi jaldi update chaie mjhe 😊

wifey ☺️
ma try karugi ki jaldi se jaldi update karu...pakka 😳
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

thank you Annie 🤗
ma love story likhte likhte horro pe aa gayi 🤣 🤣


you are going to write something hatke...do continue soon...i am waiting eagerly.😳😳

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