NiBir Os- You Are My Strength...You Are My Life...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey NiBirians! I'm back with a new OS, but I have a request, please play this song while reading, as it will help you feel the emotions. I had written this Os a week back, par late kyun post kiya, yeh janane ke please read the post after the OS.

Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sukku- (entering the house, screaming on top of his voice) Nishu! Nishu!

I exited the bedroom and went to the living room to find out what had made my impatient brother, more impatient.

Me- Kya hai Sukku? Gala kyun phad rahe ho?

Sukku-Tune hi bulaya tha na? Mishri ke liye shopping karne jaayenge bola tha. Kya yaar, inn dino bahut bhulakaad banti jaa rahi ho...

Me- (realizing) Arrey haa, chalo chalte hai...

We exited the house and sat in the car and in a few minutes, the car was on its way to the market. Our usual bickering had no pause and we were arguing about every possible thing, making fun of each other and in short, enjoying the brother-sister time we had found. I didn't realize it, and I'm sure, neither did Sukku, when a truck crashed with our car.

When I opened my eyes, I saw a few male nurses picking my body and lying it on the stretcher. Sukku was nowhere to be seen.

*In the ambulance*

The doctors wiped the blood that covered my face and did the first aid. They all had a tensed look on their face. A female nurse found the mobile in my handbag and dialed a number. I didn't know whom she called, but all I knew was that she was trying to call at home.

Nurse- Hello, kya main Nisha Singh Rathore ke relative se baat kar rahi hoon?...Ji Namaste, actually aapki sister, she has met with an accident...Aap please shaant ho jaayiye and reach the City Hospital as quick as possible...Ji shukiya...

She hanged the call and turned to face the doctor.

Doctor- Gharwaalonse baat ki?

Nurse- Ji haan, It was her sister...they said that they'll reach as soon as possible...

I couldn't understand a thing that was happening here. All I knew was that I had just met with an accident and that my brother and I were seriously injured. The doctors were trying to tend my body, which wasn't responding. Soon, we reached the hospital and I was taken to the Operation Theatre. The doctors immediately started the operation. The senior doctor instructed the junior doctor to pass on the medical instruments through his masks with lines of tension on his forehead.

I heard Papa's voice, so rushed out of the Operation Theatre. The doctor spoke to a hyper Ma, numb Papa and worried Saurav.

Doctor- Dekhiye, kuch keh nahi sakte...she has lost a lot of a blood and uske brain par bhi injury hui hai... Her left hand has been fractured...

A gasp filled with shock left Saurav's mouth while Maa just sat on the nearby bench. Papa had tears in his eyes as he kept his hands on Maa's shoulder.

Saurav-(trying to sound normal) Doctor, Sukku?

Doctor- Unhe jyaada chot nahi lagi thi, a fracture...that's it...The truck crashed in the passenger's side...Thankfully Mr. Gangwal ko kuch nahi hua... He is in the orthopedic ward...

Papa signaled Saurav to go there and he rushed. I followed him hoping that whatever doctor had said about Sukku was true.

Sukku was in one of the special rooms with a doctor with him. He had fractured his right hand and his head had a bandage. I sighed in relief as Saurav hugged Sukku.

Saurav- Thank God ki tu thikh hai...

Sukku- Nishu kaisi hai?

Saurav kept quiet. Sukku looked at him horrified.

Saurav- Uske brain pe injury hui hai...

Sukku- (hyper) Woh thikh toh hai naa? Itni chot kaise lagi? Sab meri galati hai...

He started crying cursing himself. I held his hand, but that made no effect on Sukku. Saurav calmed him down and gave him water.

Saurav- She'll be fine Sukku...Bas mujhe Kabir ki chinta hai..

Now it was my turn to be horrified. In my pain, I forgot about Kabir. He was the one who couldn't look at the pain I went during Mishri's birth. I am sure; he'll be broken like hell if he sees my body motionless.

Saurav- Kabir ko abhi tak toh pata nahi... Daadaji ne kaha hai ki woh batayenge... Par...

He kept quiet knowing that Sukku will understand what he wanted to say. I went to my parents who were not in their proper state of mind. Maa had been crying like anything while Papa gave no reaction. He just sat there holding Maa. I had tears in my eyes and closed them to prevent the tears from falling. Suddenly, I heard Kabir calling Maa. He was kneeling infront of her, holding her hand.

Kabir-(with tears in his eyes, in crying tone) Maa, aap aise kyun ro rahi ho? You know our Nishu is strong... Usse kuch nahi hoga, she's fine... Aap please shaant ho jaayiye...Papa,(he shook Papa, who gave him a blank look) Please sambhaliye apne aap ko...

Maa hugged him and cried her heart out. Kabir controlled his tears and broke the hug. I couldn't help but smile to see my husband, who could never hide his feelings, being strong for my parents. I wanted to hug him and tell him that I couldn't fight it... I had to leave him, Maa-Papa, Mishri, cousins, taauji-taayiji and Daada-Daadiji here and go... My body couldn't fight anymore...I wanted to give up...

I looked at Kabir as he entered the Operation Theater. He sat on the chair kept near the bed and stared at me with love in his eyes. This very love would make me strong every day, but today it made me weak.

He held my hand and intervened his fingers with mine and kissed it. I stared at him as he quietly caressed my hair, his eyes glistened with tears...

Kabir- Hey jaan! Main jaanta hoon ki tu mujhe sun sakti hai... Shona, please don't give up...Tum jaanti ho naa, Mishri aur mujhe tumhari zaroort hai...Hum dono tumhare bina adhoore hai... Nishu, tu aise kaise hume chod ke jaa sakti hai? (tears trickled down his cheeks)Maa-Papa ko dekho, tumhare bina kaise ho gaye hai...Papa ka happy waala gaana aaj unke tears ka reason ban chuka hai...(he wiped his tears) you hate when someone cries naa? Dekho, main nahi ro raha...par agar tum abhi thikh nahi hui...Main marr jaaunga...Meri zindagi hai tu Nishu...aisa mat jaa...tu meri dhadkan hai... Bhagwan, aaj tak aapne meri zindagi mein khushiyan hi di hai...par aaj? Main Nishu ke bina nahi jee paaungi...Aap please usse thikh karo...Maa-Papa, cousins, Mishri, sabko uski zaroort hai...

He closed his eyes and cried and cried praying to God and urging me to wake up... I couldn't see him in tears. His every word made me sad, yet gave me the feeling to fight back...His Love, his yearning made me remember every moment I spent with him... His love was enough to let death leave me...

Slowly I opened my eyes... The doctor, who just had entered the room, smiled and kept his hand on Kabir's shoulder. Kabir looked at me and hugged me. I hugged him back with all my might. I broke the hug and mustered up enough strength to say, "you are my strength...you are my life..."

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Jab tu mila, sab kuch iss dil ko mila...

Aaj jab tujhe chodd jaana tha, toh kyun mujhe yun roka...

Teri hi hai zindagi yeh... Teri ban chuki meri dhadkane yeh...

Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hope the Os was good. For those who are confused about how Nisha rushed out of the Operation Theater while being operated, then let me tell you, it isn't really Nisha, but her soul speaking.

This was my farewell gift. Main jaa rahi hoon guys, bye.

Hold on, itni jaldi tum logo ka peecha nahi chodunga, it's just that my exams are in the next week, so I won't be online till 2nd November. Please send me pms of updates. I will res a post when I come back and will also try to unres them as soon as possible. Till then, take care of yourself and your family keep smiling and let kpanti rule this crazy forum.

Miss You All...

Shibani...

Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was beautiful Shibu. Very nice.
All the best for ur exams. Come back soon & take care!!
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shibu Bhanju... 🤗 All the best 4 ur exmsss👍🏼 Rackk Them & Make Ur K khaandaan proud😎

Now abt OS.. Lemme tell U Mujhe pehle confusion hua den beech mein I realised ki yeh Nishu ki SOUL hai jo baath kar rahe haiii😉

BEAUTIFUL OS written soo BEAUTIFULLY & The SONG BGM made it more Effective👍🏼

I m happy dat U made it a Happy OS😃 Warna Patha nahi Saru ki kya haalath hothi🤣

Thank U 4 writing this OS🤗

It reflected the STRONG UNBROKEN bond the SOULMATES share❤️

NiBir= Perfect Eg 4 SOULMATES😳

MishRi☺️ reminded me MishRi🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb OS shibhanzzz😊

nishu sukku convo was superb😊

mishri k liye gift😉 mishrifeels❤️

accident😔

d emotions of nisha's soul was beautifully written👏👏
kabir kinna stron bn k RL ko console krra[:-😊
each n every emotion was superb😊👍🏼BGM added more beauty in yr OS

u did justice wid yr title😊 finally a happy ending😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You left me speechless Shibu... It was an amazing OS 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS ...
So heart touching ...
Loved it ...
Best of luck for your exams ...
Thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG this is awsum👏am speechless shibu
pehle muje samaj nahi aayi nisha sab ko kaise dekh sakthi hai phir smaj gayi its her soul and d title lved it👍🏼
Nibir ka bache ka naam MIshri..so cutee
Kabir ke pyar ne usse wapas le aayi😛

all d best 4 ur xams yaar

ll miss u🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome mind blowing super amazing ...love it ...best of luck

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