NiBir SS ~ The Dancing Soul *COMPLETED* - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: naucfan

awesome yaar loved it


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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Niha205

loved it😳

mrs.kumar😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ammu4u

superb update

Intro hogayi dono ki
luved der nok jhok
mRs. Kumar nice move

update nxt part soon
thnx 4 d pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: itznimi003

superb update dear😊

kya awesm nibir meeting thi milte hi fight krne lage❤️

kabir was mesmerized by her beauty she stamped his foot🤣

princi🤣

nisha ne simi ki help ki😊

nisha ko to dance ka d bhi nhi aata🤣 bechari scholorship k chakkar me kaha fas gyi😊

waiting for nibir dance practice😊

update soon😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: anju10

lovely update dear
loved the nibir cute fight
kabir feeling happy to dance with nisha
waitng for next update
firstly i thought it was a os but it is ss happy to knw tht 😊 😊
thanxx for the pm dear
song for the dance seq jeena jeena frm badlapur or pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

Thank u😃
Thanks for the suggestions😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Excellent Update Arya👏👏👏

So Kabira & Nishu r going to be Dance Partners😉

Well Mrs.Kumar was a little rude towards Nishu..😊 as if asking her to take the scholarship only if she dancee But I liked it..😆 Nice move😉 q ki Weelll Hamein sirf NiBir dance chahiyee🤣

Kabira Jiska Din Dance se shuru aur khatam hotha hai aur Nishu jisse Dance ka "D" bhi nai patha😛 Wat An IRONY...!!!!!!!😎

Mazzaa aayega inki anokhi dance dekhne mein...

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More...🤗 Q ki DMM(Dil Maange More)😆🤣


Thank you😃
And ya i received your pm🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Hello all🤗
I know again I am late as usual🥱
but meri galti nhi hai😭
WIFI...😡

Well hopefully replied to all😆
Next part coming soon😃




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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
The Dancing Soul





Dance is the hidden language
of the soul of the body - Martha Graham




Part 3


Nisha went out.Kabir and Simi followed her.

Kabir : Hey Nisha,listen...wait...

Nisha stopped.

Kabir:Since we are going to be partners.So why don't we become friends?

Nisha:Friends???We barely know each other.

Kabir:We would come to know each other when we become friends.
So,Hello Nisha,I am Kabir.(forwarding his hand towards her)😉

Nisha unheartedly shakes her hand.

Simi:And we are already friends...

Nisha:Yes.(smiling)

Kabir:Its some time for the classes to begin,so why not go to the cafeteria.We can have some snacks as well as come to know something about each other.
Nisha agreed.

Cafeteria

The girls were staring at Kabir spellbound.Nisha felt quite
uncomfortable.Kabir got something to eat.

Kabir: I know you are feeling weird.I am used to all this now.
Lets go to some peaceful place.

Nisha and Kabir moved towards the garden while
Simi took the leave.There was noone else in the garden.
Kabir offered the snacks to Nisha.

Kabir:So...

Nisha:So what...

Kabir:You look upset with your decision.

Nisha:Which decision?To be friends with you?No I am
not.😆

Kabir:Oh thats great.But I am talking about your decision
regarding the event.You told you don't know anything
about dance,still you agreed.Why?

Nisha:I didn't have a choice.Its true that I don't know dance.
But I know about Mrs.Kumar.I know how she can throw
someone out of the collage just because she wants it.I am
sorry,she is your mother.

Kabir:It's ok.I know my mom.

Nisha:Even I know my mom.She always wanted me to join this collage.
I need scholarship for this.And just because of this event,I don't
want to lose it,break my mom's dream.

Kabir(smiling): You are so sweet Nisha.You are so innocent and pure
hearted.

Nisha:So,tell me about yourself.I know,I should be knowing about you.
You are the best dancer of this city but I don't,I am sorry.😆

Kabir(smiles): I am Kabir.Popularly called K.I am the best dancer of
this city... according to my mom.And now I am your partner.

Nisha: So,dance was not your choice?

Kabir:Oh yes,it was but not the way it is now.I loved to dance,it gave
me peace.My parents were always busy.I was alone without a life...the business,parties and all.And dance gave me a life.
It is my passion.But my mom made it a source of name
and fame.I agreed because I was allowed to dance.Mom gave me
the much needed attention because of this dance.I got
many friends because of this dance.So dance gave me
everything I needed.Even I met you because of this dance.😳

Nisha felt bad for Kabir.Earlier she was not so happy with her choice of being partners with Kabir but suddenly it seemed to be a good choice.She felt happy with her decision.

Nisha(smiles):Will you help me?

Kabir:Help?

Nisha:Since we are friends and partners.So why don't you teach me dance?

Kabir:Ofcourse.why not?

Nisha: So lets go.

Kabir:Now?

Nisha: Yes.

Kabir:Ok.


Rehersal Room


Kabir:This is my favourite place...my rehersal room.

Nisha:Oh.Nice.

Kabir:Now I will make this place one of your favourite places too.😉

Nisha:I don't know.

Kabir:Don't worry.When Kabir is here,there is no need to fear.😳

Nisha smiles lightly.

Kabir sings...
Left Leg Aage Aage
Right Leg Pichee Pichee
Aaja Yaara Lets Start Ve
Sar Ko Gumale Round
Paer Zaara Up Down
Itni Si Ye Baat Ve...

Chill Nisha...its easy.
Comeon lets do something basic.

Kabir comes near her and keeps her hand on his shoulder.
He takes her other hand in his and keeps his other hand on
her waist.Nisha jerks a little.Kabir asks her to move her
feet infront when he steps back and vice versa.Nisha agrees.
They did a few times then suddenly Nisha steps on his foot.

Kabir:Aauchhh.Nisha...itna bura sikha raha hun kya jo
tum gusse mein aisa kr rahi ho?

Nisha:I am sorry.zyada lagi to nhi?

Kabir:No,I am fine.Lets try again.

They tried a few other steps.But Nisha was too
consious of herself.Sometimes she managed her
stoll and sometimes her hair.Kabir could feel
her uneasiness.

Kabir:Tumne aisa dance pehle kabhi nhi kiya?

Nisha: No.Aisa dance kya...maine kabhi koi dance hi nhi
kiya.I told you I don't know even the D of dance.

Kabir: Koi nhi.D na sahi A,B,C to aati hai na?(giggling)😆

Nisha: Kya?

Kabir:You told that you don't know D of dance but A,B,C
comes before and you know that.(winks)

Nisha starts laughing.Kabir is lost in her smile.

Nisha:Kya hua?Kahan kho gae?

Kabir:Haan..kya?Nhi kuch nhi bs aise hi.

Kabir appears a little embarrased.Nisha smiles seeing him.

Kabir:So Miss Nisha.Dance ka first rule.You need
to enjoy it.And you were not even smiling
earlier.

Nisha:Yes Sir.(Shows him tongue)

Kabir:Ok lets try again but before that...
why don't you tie your hair?

Nisha:I don't ...

Kabir comes near her.He takes her stoll and ties
her hair in a way that neither her hair nor her stoll
disturbs them.He forwards his hand towards her.
Nisha gives her hand in his.They start dancing.
Nisha appeared to learn quickly.

Kabir:Ok this is it for today.

Nisha:ok.
Kabir:Don't worry.We will be able to make the
event a success.



P.S. :Thanks for your suggestions. Will definitely take them into consideration.😃
Since this story is based on dance and an event is going to be organised where Nisha and Kabir will perform,so please suggest songs for the event.😉

Index will be updated and pms will be sent by Black_Angel later.

~ANJALI~
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
nibir going to dance awesome yaar... and pls send me pm too pls pls pretty pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
aila comment karte karte next update bhi mil gya... 🤣 awesome yaar... nibir and dance is just a perfect match

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