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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read chap 2 & 3 together.Chap 2: Finally NIBIR met. Mrs.Kumar thodi rude types nahi hai?? Kabiraa to already lost in Nishu's beauty. Wow!! NIBIR dance partners.Chap 3: Very very very very very nice update. Luved NIBIR's convo. Feeling bad for Kabiraa. NIBIR became frnds finally. Kabiraa is so cute. Kitne pyar se Nishu ko dance sikha raha hai. Waiting for the nxt update. Plzzz update soon. Thanx a lot for the pm. N a bada wala sorry for the late comment. Actually I was offline due 2 my exams.
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
awesome n I can suggest u the song chal wanha jante hai or sun satiya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
such a cute update...
love nibir❤️
thanx for the pm...update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
plz update soon.its a long tym now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Hey all...🤗
Thank you for your likes and lovely comments😃

Sorry again for being so late
But next wala update would surely be quick 😆

Posting the update and then will reply to the comments before wifi goes 🤔

Replied to all after the update😊


Edited by Angel_Arya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Dancing Soul



Dance is the hidden language
of the soul of the body - Martha Graham


Part 4

Days were passing. Nisha was a very dedicated girl.
She used to practice a lot.The choreographers
were impressed with the way she was learning.
Kabir also used to practice a lot.But this time,
much more than usual.(we all know why😆😉)
They devoted most of their time practicing
with each other. Kabir knew that the event was
very important for Nisha. He was slowly slowly
falling for her.He wished to spend most of the time
with her.Other than practicing,they used to be together
in the class and cafeteria. Nisha had made no friends
other than Kabir and Simi. Kabir sometimes offered to drop her home too.They had become best friends for sure.

Kabir knew of his feelings for her but Nisha was unknown to her feelings.She couldn't understand that their friendship was not limited to only friendship but they had become more than friends.

A Day before the event in the rehersal room.

Nisha : Hey bappa, meri help karna.Kal event hai
aur mujhe kisi bhi halat mein acha perform karna
hi hai.I need that scholarship.And its an important
event for Kabir too.His career depends on it.Help us Bappa.Please help us.

Kabir was standing behind her.He hears this and smiles.He was happy to see that Nisha cares for him so much.

Kabir: Don't be nervous,sab thik hi hoga.

Nisha:Bappa???

Kabir: Nisha...He starts laughing and turns her around.

Nisha: Oh tum...

Kabir: Relax.We have prepared a lot. Sab acha hi hoga.

Nisha: Hope so.

Kabir: Ok,lets go.

Nisha: Where?abhi to practice...

Kabir: Bhaut ho gai practice...abhi bahar chalte hain.
Kabir drags Nisha out with him.
Nisha : Hum kahan ja rahe hain??We should be
practicing now.

Kabir: Stop it...practice...practice...practice...we have already practised more than enough.

Nisha: Pr...

Kabir: Pr...war...kuch nhi...chup se baitho.

Kabir drove the car.They reached the beach after some
time.

Nisha: Beach...Woww...I love to come here.

Kabir:I know.(smiling to see her happy)

Nisha removes her sandals and walks barefoot
on the sand.Her hair is flowing in the sea wind.
She looked more beautiful than usual.Kabir was mesmerized with her beauty.He wanted to stay with her and keep on staring her beautiful face.

Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere...

Nisha sees Kabir lost.She comes near him and
moves her hand infront of his eyes.His stance is broken.

Nisha: Where??

Kabir: Nothing

Nisha ran away towards some kids who were playing with balloons.She started playing with them and laughing.She called him to join them.Kabir ran towards them.He caught the strings of the balloons. But somehow the balloons flew away. Nisha started laughing.Kabir kept on looking at her smiling.

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tainu takda rawaan...

The kids made faces for losing the balloons.Nisha
went to a balloon vendor and bought all his balloons
and gifted them to those kids.The kids were happy.
Nisha was happy to see them happy.And Kabir was
happy to see her happy.

Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di
Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di

Nisha went to the vendor to pay him for the balloons.
But Kabir already took out his wallet and paid him.
He gave a slight smile to Nisha looking in her eyes. Nisha smiled.

Ae to nazraan nazraan di gal ve
Tu vi sun le zaraa
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa rehna kol tere...

Nisha was lost in his eyes.

Tainu takdi rawaan
Naina 'ch tere main vasdi ravaan

A ball hit Kabir from somewhere and he lost his balance.He fell down in the sand.Nisha helped him.As she saw his face fully covered in sand,she started laughing.

Paagal main khud nu banaunda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan

Nisha helped Kabir to get up and dust himself.

Ishq duaavan jaane kab aave
Ishq duaavan aave jab aave
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main taa baitha kol tere...

Nisha was saying a lot of things,sometimes giggling...
sometimes making fun of him.She laughed.Kabir also laughed with her.

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tenu takda ravan (x2)

As the trip to the beach came to an end, Kabir was sure of his feelings for Nisha.He thought of proposing her after the event.He was sure that she won't say a No but he wasn't sure if she would say a yes.He started planning for one of the best proposal.
On the other hand,Nisha was feeling something different.She was trying to understand things but was confused. She slept thinking about todays events and Kabir.



P.S.
The words in italic are from the song Ishq Bulava (Hasee to Phasee). Here its in background and the song isn't actually being played.😆
Index will be updated by Black_Angel later.

~ANJALI~
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Send a buddy request to Black_Angel.
Sorry for typo errors.
Edited by Angel_Arya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

nibir going to dance awesome yaar... and pls send me pm too pls pls pretty pls


Thank you🤗
Definitely 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

aila comment karte karte next update bhi mil gya... 🤣 awesome yaar... nibir and dance is just a perfect match


😆😆
Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome update Loved it ❤️


Thanks😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks 😊

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