Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
awesome yaar u really write very nicely...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
super se uper tha tanu... bus ab jaldi update karna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
res
unres

awsm update tani😊

nibir in one car😳

Galti se bhajan lag gya🤣

ek din hua nhi mile inki cute cute fight bhi strt ho gyi

longdrive...bechari girls🤣

yr pic was cherry on d top tani😊

sari purani yaadein taaza kr di tune😊

going to read nxt part😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Excellent Update Tanu👏👏👏👏

U knw Wat Makes ur update Different???😉 Its The way U connect the story with Show's pics..👍🏼

Amazing Thoughtss😎

Keep it up...😛

So NiBir in single car

Waiting 4 next update😉

Thanks 4 PM😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

PART-7
kabir and nisha were fighting just then rain starts and when nisha hears the soung of it she immediately opens the window nd starts enjoying it forgetting abt the fight her nd kabir changes the CD nd tose naina song plays

Iss lamhe ko rok doon
Yaa main khud ko is mein jhonk doon
Kya karun.. kya karun.. kya karun...
Iss lamhe.. main kuchh bhi jaanu na


he starts admiring her

Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Bann gaye silsile

Tose naina jab se mile..

O sudh-budh khoyi hai khoyi maine
Haan jaan gawaayi, gawaayi maine
Haan tujhko basaya hai dhadkan mein
Saanware...

Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile


nisha hears the song nd both starts remembering their first meet - their fall nd eyelock

Khud ko kho kar tujhko paaya
Iss tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
O...
Khud ko kho kar tujhko paaya
Iss tarah se mujhko jeena aaya

Teri lagan mein sab hai gawaaya
Iss tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
Teri hansi, meri khushi
Meri khushi tu hi...

Tose naina jab se miley
Tose naina jab se miley
Bann gaye silsile

Naina naina laage...


they both looks at each other nd shares an eye lock nd when the song finishes ...nisha blushes nd starts looking out of the window
to break the awkard silence kabir - tujhe baarish mein bheegna pasand hai na?
n - hmmm ...ek minute tujhe kaise pta mujhe baarish mein bheegna pasand hai



kabirs monologue - abe yaar kabire kya bol diya tune ab kya jawab dunn
n - bolna
k - vo ...vo...
n- dekh sach bol
k - vo ...maine tujhe kal subah baarish mein bheegte hue dekha tha...he speaks this with his eyes closed
nisha blushes - oh ohk
kabir opens his eyes nd sees her blushing ..nisha notice it nd to avoid his expression
n - han or vaise bhi koi paagal hi hoga jise baarish mein bheegna pasand na ho
k - mujhe nahi pasand
n- tabhi toh maine bola koi paagal hi hoga...nd giggles
k- whatever

suddenly car stops
k- abe yaar ab iss car ko kya hogya
n- i think tyre puncher hua h
kabir nd nisha gets out of the car
k - yaaar pehle yeh baarish ab yeh ...
n- toh kya hua puncher hi toh hua h
k- tu toh aise bol rhi h jaise tujhe pucnher badalna aata h
n - han toh aata h na
k - chal fir tu hi badal
nisha agrees nd starts changing it
nishas monologue - kya nisha bol toh diya par tujhe toh aata hi nahi h
kabir notices that she is having problem
k - rehne de agar aise hi karti rhi toh raat ho jaaygi ...tu umbrella pakad or mujhe karne de
nisha immediately stand up nd hold the umbrella nd signals him to change it ...kabir gives an unbelievable look to her

while changing the tyre nisha gets a mischievious idea nd closes the umbrella
k - yaar nisha kya kar rhi h .tujhe pta hai na mujhe baarish mein bheegna pasand nhi
n - nhi mai nhi dene wali jab tak kisi cheez ko feel nhi kar lete tab tak mat kaho ki vo kharab h ..ek baar iss baarish ka maza leke toh dekh'
k - nisha yaar yeh experiment kabhi or karenge abhi mujhe yeh de
n - acha toh umbrella leke dikha
he tries to snatch it but nisha hides it at her back nd in this snatching session he hold nisha by her waist nd pulls her closer
nisha gets shocked at this sudden action ...he hold her hand nd when she was busy recollecting wat is happening he immediately snatches the umbrella nd gets far away frm her ..
k (laughing) - dekha le liya na
nisha gets out of her trance nd sees kabir laughing
n - thats nt fair tune cheating ki
kabir gets closer to her nd in her ears
k - acha kya cheating ki ...
nisha gets blanked at wat to ans
nisha pushes him nd runs to sit in the car
kabir smirks nd also sits in the car ..nisha starts looking outside to avoid his eye contact
kabir giggles nd starts the car




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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
awsum yaar..reacd both d parts
luved d pics with dialogs...perfect selection
barish main bheega Nibir
Edited by ammu4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Tanu Loved it yaar...

NiBir fighting for umbrella😆🤣

Eyelock...😳

Bol nah Nisha ki Kabir ne KYA cheating ki??🤣

Super.. Super...😉

Thanks 4 PM😳

As usual Pics were cool👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
awesome tanu... hae landed in dreamland
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Two updates part6 time k baad bhi nahin aati. Saman to thik tumhare behen ko kaha takhi. 80s k dada dadi bhajan eaah md lolz
Part7 kabir nd nisha ek saath yrval nd d baarish fun awee
Gofy pendulum.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Awesome update Tanya...!!
Do continue soon..!!

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